some dope ****

[FLOWINMASTA03MVP]

feel me on this

scene fluctuating/mic-skill demonstrating, mind penetrating/*****s movin in clans with plans to inspect my dech/and blast like kweli and hi-tek

ventured off to many places/in search of better faces/trying to dodge cases/troubles faced dudes can't fathom/dreams forseen the average mind can't imagine

infiltrated like swat/to aim this red dot/and increase your
body temperature from cold to hot/

cease your mind like blood clots/freedom is what i sought/
instead imprisonment is what i caught/

tryingn not to be restrained/violent thoughts i tried to refrain/body numbed from promethazine/mind leaning on a cane/from chaos and nightmares/heart still pumpin/but my soul in intensive care

these ill rhymes known to ease the pain/relief of stress/
so verses i had to cook up like chefs

my existence trying to be diminished/due to my affiliation with *****s against resistance/my downfall i know your wishin/but my jams so def/it overthrew russell simmons

rhymes vintage and inflicted/with an arousing syndrome/to ignite like c-4/and have you regurgitating foam/

i retreat to bungalows/to stash away my bills like buffalo/and take my jewels to the telly/those get harmed/
bullets fly like jim kelly/try not to do that/but *****s want beef like deli's

homonyms and synonyms cut you like machetes/my money come in steady fast/while yours fall slow like confetti/words is deadly and known to kill factions/along with verses packed with flammable gases/steady-flow *****/infatuated with fashion/spit with passion/while yall dudes is stagnant/you beat me, that's like ***** attracted to faggots/it aint gone happen

thoughts held together like shelves/make ya intuition melt/ya whole style like masturbation/only person feeling it, is ya self/people once depicted in shows of minstrel/labeled as ignorant and peon-like individuals/
beings known to attack and act abrupt/say we keep pounds on us dogg like kurupt/

[FLOWINMASTA03MVP]

nahimsayin, can i get some feedback?

[#1rapper]

rhymes were simple, had poor wordplay that seemed forced, at best the drop was aiigh

[theman080]

jus read through quickly and it was pretty good, you should keep one topic in mind though, and i heard a confetti wordplay in jigga's reasonable doubt and it might have been the exact same one ( :dry: ) but I cant remember exactly so I'll withhold judgment. Coulda sworn it was sumtin like yall papa fall slow like confetti. Anyway, good **** aside from that, but i didnt exactly read every line so if there's more bitten **** than :thumbsdow

[FLOWINMASTA03MVP]

easy man, lol. jigga had similar line in dead presidents, and i just used that line caused it fit in well with the previous lines. and no there are no bitten lines. all that **** is me. and thanks on the feedback, ima drop another one

[FLOWINMASTA03MVP]

here go my next drop

fiend of clothing, money pursuer/cop maneuver,striving
for accolades and notoriety/catch me in a cl or where
the intellects be/looks is deceiving so dont use that brush
yet/cause most *****s is plottin right in your own set/
nothin slippin my peripherial, cut from the most
prestigious material/

bet you none of the *****s i ran with come to the burial/
yet, my words live on through the stereo/whether distorted or misconstrued the message will still get through/

still thriving as long as the blood is still blue/crack open another brew for other lost souls/whose mischievious ways
sent em to a dark hole/another blunt for the street poets
whose brain was trying to insiniuate a change/to a troubled society filled with cataract eyes and a clogged lobby/

try to pertain your own world like bobby/cause critical choices made now is what constitutes to your future/
stay accurate like precise shooters or you'll become involved with the looters/whos crime record is larger than pornstar hooters/infested with drug dealin/life mass appealin/place where we live in color like keenan/

feenin and dreamin for extremities that engulf the mind like sultry melodies/filled with catastrophic images painted
by malicious kids/hanging with the *****s whose style
is opposite like derivatives/so stay the same like synonyms/or youll be sent where fake brothers went/

i ignore those dudes and keep shielding/cause i know the pistol is a naked gun like leslie nielsen/none of these dudes is sinister/couldn't cause a crack if they was blisters/

drop some more feedback for this one, and if anyone wanna get a battle lets talk about some things. thank you

[FLOWINMASTA03MVP]

some more feedback sohh.