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theman080
03-31-06, 04:20 PM
The future's in the palm of my hand, flawless it stands
A soothesayer with moves layered till my coffin is canned
Fingerprint a portion for the galaxy's path
Peep the gallery's stash, from 0-7 till reality's crash
Flocks will pedal foolishly and mock our credits usually
As they laugh at out disputes and attune continental unity
That's not to say its soon to see, but on the horizon it lies
For our minds to apply, it's where we strive till we die
And on that path we crawl across, seein countries fall apart
And the rise of a scheme ten times worse than the holocaust
Genocidal rivals will pile and clash fire for survival
Innocents beguiled to run miles for these viles
The atomic bomb is just a footprint in the face of this mess
We'll step adjacent to death, foes seeing hatred addressed
Utilizing sophisticated weaponry till not a trace of you's left
We'll step from the ashes, survive by a few gallant clashes
Cast warfare aside and strive to ally the masses
We'll learn from the hurts burnin, adjust to the curved sermons
Till we sippin on pure energy ridin cars that don touch the earths surface
Orbital shuttles will leave boys more than befuddled
As they grow up and learn, do good while ignorin the trouble
But devoid of a struggle, its unlikely to see a Utopia stand
All signs points to its crumble, till its remains is a stone in the sand

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The future's in the palm of my hand, listen for the oration's duration
And you might just pick up somethin to leave you less vacant of greatness
The United States will fall in a century's time, lie in a clever abyss
Till the english letters are missed it'll be the greatest empire to ever exist
And beyond that prestige will be a foundation of atrocites
Sat on top of these hypocrocies the new wave was made a mockery
Look at ya time fondly, takin pride in the country's actions
But top to bottom we'll be fukked till the infastructure collapses
Despite all common misconceptions in this legacy, it isnt built for longevity
If so we wouldn't face a terrible death, neck broke from incrediable debt
Didn't expect for the devil's collect and the price was our medical mess
We made asses of ourselves while we clutch on our guns, buckin for funds
Or backstabbin our brothers and sons while big tobacco crushes our lungs
We would have protected our rescourses, oils and rivers eqipped
With better protection, and now soon they'll be bitterly missed
While sit back and relax, drink up and spoil our liver to bits
Listen to this, be advised my eyes see clearly
Till the truth is revoked and I'm choked
And my mind seems weary...

The future's in the palm of my hand

Wordsmyth
04-02-06, 03:39 PM
Nice politcal type verse....

Serious biz I think the whole verse was solid through out. Flow was ON to say the least, really smooth transition from one bar to the next. I think this would make a nice audio if you found the right beat.

Stay up!!!