Ill--style

[ILL_FAM]

i get chicks all wet and the pussi so juicy
i drop a lyrical bomb on faggots who wanna push me//
i drop a mick in there drink like an irish dude
im rude but only when i get fcuk like the irish do//
now i liked that last line and look really pretty
pop out ur tities we be get down to the nitty gritty//
a hater is a hater and thats what i can see
they look like hiphop cops tryna burgle me//
and i love to do my lines all funny thats what i like
what i dont like is a d!ck fleeing dyke thats why i get em spiked//

now ratatatatatat tatat once i saw a girl with a big gat
the sh!t b!tch wanted my d!ck to fill her tooth gap//
and thats a matter of fact calling me gangsta is fiction
i rap just like the puzzi i fcuk then i rap of friction//
now this little ILL--STYLE was funny to do i just love it
i dont get played by punks in beef cause my level is above it.

[ILL_FAM]

hit the seaside beach where the party is at
where hiphop is praised by hiphop cats//
there is no gangsta move or repubilcian movements
u know i move swift i move devilish u just foolish//
i read headlines like i need to like its changing my life
but it aint all fun sh!t about to change like when i got
my ear ripped of and jabbed with a knife//
christ that changed now i move to a darker page
im no gangsta still, im just another victim of rage//
i get creepy sometimes but then i open my eyes
its all gone but im no pervert b!tch get wit the times.

[ILL_FAM]

kah kah iller is the way i drop my rhymes
the way i drop my dimes criminality is a major crime//
i speak tongs cause tongs is wat i like
just like mike man i strap the air nikes aight
im ill on the mic like the re-incarnation of frank white//
now my life aint all parties cause when i down barcardies
i get hardies fcuk b!tches and sh!t let lick my d1ck//
no like i said i aint no gangsta i spray water
why bother i life in a broken how i barely no my father

[ILL_FAM]

kah kah iller is the way i drop my rhymes
the way i drop my dimes criminality is a major crime//
i speak tongs cause tongs is wat i like
just like mike man i strap the air nikes aight
im ill on the mic like the re-incarnation of frank white//
now my life aint all parties cause when i down barcardies
i get hardies fcuk b!tches and sh!t let lick my d1ck//
no like i said i aint no gangsta i spray water
why bother i life in a broken home i barely no my father

[ILL_FAM]

any commentz plz im new te tha game

[CrAsHCoUrSe]

thankz for the 4 wack drops.. :dry: all of em were azz, step ur game up

[#1rapper]

:thumbsdow

[ILL_FAM]

ah well thanxz anyway

[#1rapper]

juz for the record....i see 2 types of net writers,those who first drop and get negative response and leave the site, or those who stick arouns and develop a style and get better, now im hopin u is one of the ppl who stick around..

[theman080]

Don't understand the negative reaction to this shyt...

Your style shows potential and your flow is decent, its not great but I didnt think people would be hatin on it that hard, people were praisin Dipstick when he formed a coherent sentence but this dude gets dissed. Try writing with more multis in shyt like...

I'm knee deep in a capor, trees releasin a vapor

Shyt like that, have content with a more interesting rhyme scheme

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[ILL_FAM]

yeh yeh dam cool man sh!t cool lets see well im thinking of dropping an actual structured piece next so keep looks for that