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Absolut da poet
03-27-06, 02:56 PM
Us
by Absolut

Should I..fall in love with you..
I know I wanna see the next time..we could be read as lovers...our love could grow anew as if the spaces were seeds plantin sentences of intense remnants in the leaves...fiction or non-fiction...drama or comedy...can you be my paper ?
Cause there are so many things that I'm tryin really tryin to say to you..I hope you can feeel how I'm tryin to make this just right...to be continued.
...I know how this looks..but eveb while we're
Getting tipsy..literally...
Painfully..unique letters..
Goin through depression sometimes maybe I am kinda scared to turn the page...I do need you and maybe that's why we keep goin though this...I miss you...I feel such peace cause...I still have hope..honestly ...I want you to understand that I'm tryin to keep you in my hands..shiit maybe I am in love with you..
I guess I'm just afraid to say it...that's why I grip you so tight...but...I don't want you to ever feel hurt as we move over these lines...shiit you're all I've got na'mean
...Its 2:51 in the morning I'm watching you laying there..

"baby...I trust you..."

Either way...what more can I say...I don't know...
...its strange...how..I don't recognize my surroundings but I know where I am...where we started I know its destiny but should I let myself believe...in love...for a reason...rewind...
Now I know why God gave us breathes each one means somethin..so..I just wanna use mine across Gods' page
Maybe...there's something special on paper...
There's something special about you...
Believe it.


dedicated to all the writers..

blastforme
I'm said comin.

~vodka

ovb81
03-27-06, 03:28 PM
Us
by Absolut

[color=red][i]Should I..fall in love with you..
I know I wanna see the next time..we could be read as lovers...our love could grow anew as if the spaces were seeds plantin sentences of intense remnants in the leaves...fiction or non-fiction...drama or comedy...can you be my paper ?



*snap snap snap* i enjoyed this, especially this part..

sexydeltagirl
03-27-06, 07:40 PM
I have that full feeling after readin this joint...Nice very poetic.... I can feel the emotion....

slave2aplaya
03-29-06, 04:47 PM
Very nice, very real, you got a different style, the way you change it up kinda keeps me reading on.

well done!

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