Untitled....Release Some Tension....

[sexydeltagirl]

Grab me, squeeze me, pull me forcefully until your fingers turn red....
Scream from the top of your lungs and beat your hands against your chest...
Run for a few miles....I'll meet your strides...
Grab me by the handle and gently squeeze my trigger....
Write your thoughts in me, until you cover my pages with your tears...
Or crumble me up with your anger...
Walk through my stores and pick out something nice...
Spring and Summer await....
Eat me, slowly...
Taking in every bite...
Set your tastebubs on a journey trying to figure out my ingredients...
Turn up my volume and get your 2-step on...
Or shake your laffy taffy you can even "lean wit it rock wit it"....
With every step you are gradually releasing me.....
Flip through my pages and read my story...
I promise with each page you turn.....
A weight will be lifted...
Breath in....
Exhale...
Step into me....
Let the water cover your body....dip your head in if you want...
Or stand in front of me and let the water caress your body...
As you adjust me to the right flow, I'm easing my way...
Out of your system...
With each part of your body you touch....
A little of me disappears...
Grab your remote and press "play"...
Laugh at me, cry with me....
Let me soothe your spirit and calm your rage...
Make love to me....
Easy and slow...
Or bring out the hidden animal within...
I can hear your growling.....
Your breath on me skin....
Intense....
That's it...
You got the hang of it...
A little more...
Almost there....
I'm losing my grip.....
I've been released....

[Street_Profit]

i like this piece this is a cool piece real deep yet i can't understand the subject of it or wat its about i caught a bit of it but other than that, real good.

(K.I.M)

[homeyjay]

Grab me, squeeze me, pull me forcefully until your fingers turn red....
Scream from the top of your lungs and beat your hands against your chest...
Run for a few miles....I'll meet your strides...
Grab me by the handle and gently squeeze my trigger....
Write your thoughts in me, until you cover my pages with your tears...
Or crumble me up with your anger...
Walk through my stores and pick out something nice...
Spring and Summer await....
Eat me, slowly...
Taking in every bite...
Set your tastebubs on a journey trying to figure out my ingredients...
Turn up my volume and get your 2-step on...
Or shake your laffy taffy you can even "lean wit it rock wit it"....
With every step you are gradually releasing me.....
Flip through my pages and read my story...
I promise with each page you turn.....
A weight will be lifted...
Breath in....
Exhale...
Step into me....
Let the water cover your body....dip your head in if you want...
Or stand in front of me and let the water caress your body...
As you adjust me to the right flow, I'm easing my way...
Out of your system...
With each part of your body you touch....
A little of me disappears...
Grab your remote and press "play"...
Laugh at me, cry with me....
Let me soothe your spirit and calm your rage...
Make love to me....
Easy and slow...
Or bring out the hidden animal within...
I can hear your growling.....
Your breath on me skin....
Intense....
That's it...
You got the hang of it...
A little more...
Almost there....
I'm losing my grip.....
I've been released....


Whoa! are you sure your name isn't the Too Sexxy Delta Girl?
Still flowing with the energy that only you can bring, another goody for the hoody yall!! keep keeping on SDG, now i need a cigarette whew!
Sometimes when I read you joints I heard that mystical tune in my head Danger! Danger! j/k ,I think...

[sexydeltagirl]

Whoa! are you sure your name isn't the Too Sexxy Delta Girl?
Still flowing with the energy that only you can bring, another goody for the hoody yall!! keep keeping on SDG, now i need a cigarette whew!
Sometimes when I read you joints I heard that mystical tune in my head Danger! Danger! j/k ,I think...

:blush: nope, just sexydeltagirl...and not sexy because of the physical either...

I'm glad you liked this piece, I don't know where I was going with it but it flowed so I decided to post it.....And you hear Danger, Danger... :laugh: when I read your pieces my mind is clear....cause I know I'mma leave the thread learning a little something...

;)

[homeyjay]

:blush: nope, just sexydeltagirl...and not sexy because of the physical either...

I'm glad you liked this piece, I don't know where I was going with it but it flowed so I decided to post it.....And you hear Danger, Danger... :laugh: when I read your pieces my mind is clear....cause I know I'mma leave the thread learning a little something...

;)
Aww shucks, Thanks Sexxy Dee - flatery will get you anywhere with me, j/k.
I'm glad you're able to connect with my simple joints, 'cause they ain't for everybody. Unlike yours which are the upper echelon, I'm a pb&j while you're a chop steak with everythang and mild sauce on the fries... "and that's as high on the top as you can get" in my book, "so keep on and you don't stop".hj

[sexydeltagirl]

Aww shucks, Thanks Sexxy Dee - flatery will get you anywhere with me, j/k.
I'm glad you're able to connect with my simple joints, 'cause they ain't for everybody. Unlike yours which are the upper echelon, I'm a pb&j while you're a chop steak with everythang and mild sauce on the fries... "and that's as high on the top as you can get" in my book, "so keep on and you don't stop".hj

:blush: aww himeyjay that's so sweet...but I'm def. a work in progress and please let me know if you see me advancing in any way with my writing....Your opinion means a lot 2 me....

I will def. keep up the flattery if it gets me anywhere with you.... ;)

Have a good weekend & be safe....

[Irish-dipstick]

ive been away for some time now im back i love this piece keep at it.

[homeyjay]

:blush: aww himeyjay that's so sweet...but I'm def. a work in progress and please let me know if you see me advancing in any way with my writing....Your opinion means a lot 2 me....

I will def. keep up the flattery if it gets me anywhere with you.... ;)

Have a good weekend & be safe....
Aww, you are too kind and I'm affraid that you are giving me to much credit. Your work supercedes most mine included so I'm in no position to critique nor would I want too. I prefer to sit back and enjoy your work with the rest and as far as advancing goes. All I know is that your visuals are closing in on your lyrics.

And to quote the Godfather of Soul "don't start none won't be none". j/k,. hj

[sexydeltagirl]

Aww, you are too kind and I'm affraid that you are giving me to much credit. Your work supercedes most mine included so I'm in no position to critique nor would I want too. I prefer to sit back and enjoy your work with the rest and as far as advancing goes. All I know is that your visuals are closing in on your lyrics.

And to quote the Godfather of Soul "don't start none won't be none". j/k,. hj

Aww shucks, I really don't know what to say...I'm glad you enjoy my work and I'll def. keep writing...it's become a part of me now..

:devil: @ your James Brown ref.

[sexydeltagirl]

ive been away for some time now im back i love this piece keep at it.

Yeah, where you been? I'm glad you liked this joint.... ;)