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Absolut da poet
03-14-06, 06:43 AM
The Paper, The Pen and...us.
by @bsolut

Should I..
let myself...fall in love with you...should i ?
Should I really...
...let myself..
..fall in love with you...
wrap my eyes around you everyday...my hopes and....
dreams around your shoulders...should i ?
Should I let go of the past..lookin on to tomorrow...for better days
..on the page..
in essence...should I exhale your grasp..to finally have...
love at last......should i ?
Well....where are we goin in this life...?
I know i wanna see the next time...
f.uck it..
I know i wanna see our breathes cross lines..
while we're covered like sex signs..
we could be read as lovers..
in company...some would get it and some would just...understand
As a total we could be...destiny...like the Pen and Paper in God's Hand...
Spoken across the Sands..amazingly...
Our love could grow anew as if the spaces....were seeds...
racing in to me...
periods of sheer T 's...
under the clear sheets I'm facin these weird...dreams
planting sentences of intense...remnants in the leaves
I need...
...
...
to know...
...
...
should I share it with you..?
Fiction or Non-Fiction..Drama or Comedy...
Forever and ever til even in death we won't part..
Sometimes I just don't know where to start..
so if we're still near the beginnin can I 'cite these...I Love You's ?
Can you be my Paper ?
Can I write my lips....
Can I be penned by your...
or better yet can you hold on to me while I'm sayin this to you..?
Cause there are so many things that I'm really tryin to say to you..
and i know our tendacies to drop it..
please be...patient with me if we're still near the beginning....
s.hit...sometimes I just like staring at love even if we are sinnin..
I hope you can feel how I'm tryin to make this just right..
....
...
..
right now..
...
..
..
tonight...
...
..
..to be continued..



~ vodka.


blast-for-me
I'm comin..

:king:

~Infinee Tee~
03-15-06, 01:52 AM
in company...some would get it and some would just...understand
As a total we could be...destiny...like the Pen and Paper in God's Hand...
Spoken across the Sands..amazingly

PURE HOTNESS.. I loved every minute of this piece.. your play on words is crazy.. definitely feelin' this

Absolut da poet
03-15-06, 02:04 AM
PURE HOTNESS.. I loved every minute of this piece.. your play on words is crazy.. definitely feelin' this

thankyou..
readin it and hearin it to the background music is 2 totally different things..

anyway this is about
love that just made you do it...say I love you when... you weren't sure if you should say it...fall in love again when... you weren't sure if you should do it....love that made you remember lost loved ones (R.I.P. Toyia)...love that made you write when you didn't want to...and love that just dropped hints of how much you loved them in every red word once you did say it.

all that..


I appreciate the feedback..
love always

-vodka

sexydeltagirl
03-15-06, 06:51 PM
Dope, you already know how I feel about your pieces...I always come away with a full feeling....Dopeness....