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Mahatma
03-11-06, 02:48 PM
This girl thinks I smile a sexy chipped tooth grin
I'm not convinced biting flying knives is too intelligent
But whatever, it's never either regretted or treasured
but the same blade I sharpen pencils that send you letters
Sever the cut wood, crush thoughts into format
so abstract they'd body-double resembling Rorschach
Horse head, four leaf clover and rabbits foot
just one of the above springs to mind but isn't for f*cking luck
Never rub stuff with rubbers, all concepts stay
my train of thought patterned labyrinth amazing place
Race days away, still think at the speed of nice
heathen price payer with a demon that doesn't sleep at night
Beating bars into shape, creating obstacles
that boggle you with the phosphorescent and impossible
Cobble stone street walker, cheap talker
heat releaser in a deep freezer speaking these meat cleavers
Dream weaver, well meaning well diver
leaving wannabe divas damned by beating their bleeding beavers
Females with no redeeming features don't feature here
be aware, leading careless lives means he won't treat you fair
Lethal flare for the dramatic, taring through static
reappearing like magic to see you wearing a hatchet
Unrepairable with bandage while I'm staring at candles
snaring my samples...
with needles that'd have Jesus saying prayers to my sandals
Welcome to the lair of a vandal swearing at cancer
like; Are you f*cking listening, illness is a forte you can't handle
The rarest of tangent turners, random word worders
serving verses with the purpose of circling until you're nervous
Berzurk phantom murders occur while I'm enduring
furthering of an art-form purely drawn from practise perfect..
Relations and statements raised on give and taking
written matrix equations to re-position the grid we're placed in
System listener in such an awakened stasis
you all appear as babies in earmuffs, sh*t and naked
Stiff but shaking, this's the different changes that I'm making
did you miss pluralisation or notice it switch during the phrasing?
Learning's the basic reason for me staying
delaying the offset of my death, won't be impressed until I'm ancient
Won't be fresh until I claim it, won't be the best unless I say it
won't rest until I'm laying, head from shoulders on the pavement
I'm a soldier on this slave-ship with ownership of my brain, sh*t
they couldn't take this from me if they stole it, went and framed it
Told you that I'm blazing with a folder full of racing
through the mind of a vagrant and a soul that hip-hop praises
So sit and take in what I'm saying, then lean back
and I say BRAP because everything I b's rap
Treat that as my mantra, feet black as a panther
from being on these streets since I've been after the answer
Fiending for the chapter after the last passage
god's lost in my mathematics held hostage by what she crafted
Lofty sovereign down-trodden hob-goblin from Nottingham
watching kids turn greedy but no one seems to be stopping them
It's the season of not bothering, co-operating and corroborating
I'm the last remaining evidence, the case of Gone but not forsaken
Topic changing mind-states in today's rat races
had the last pages re-written and acted on packed stages
An atlas taking for granted what it hasn't gathered
and news giants instigating ignorance through propaganda
I'm top notch on and off the camera, not a lot of drama
spitting wisdom for the living in a long forgotten genre
Topical subject farmer, father time having regressed
and without an ounce of regret or respect I say hip-hop isn't dead
Hip-hop's alive and kicking in my do or die head
this sh*t ain't finished.. I ain't committed suicide yet.

Wordsmyth
03-12-06, 06:53 AM
Good read Mahatma, long verse but kept my attention the whole time and the flow of this piece was crazy.

I especially like the flow to this line:

Fiending for the chapter after the last passage
god's lost in my mathematics held hostage by what she crafted
Lofty sovereign down-trodden hob-goblin from Nottingham
watching kids turn greedy but no one seems to be stopping them

Good Writes.....

theman080
03-12-06, 01:36 PM
That shyt was actually really fukkin nice, this lines had me lmao

leaving wannabe devas damned by beating their bleeding beavers

And wordsmyth summed it up pretty good, you flowed the fukk out of this peice without sacraficing content, shyt was dope.

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Mahatma
03-14-06, 08:46 AM
Thanks to both of you.

Mahatma
05-27-06, 11:09 AM
Not sure if this is common around here, but.. Raise the bars!

yaga
12-31-06, 12:01 AM
The rilly.

MaCRonI
12-31-06, 02:52 AM
Would you'll split these verse and not makem so long....I wanna review and show love but damn....it's too much to read like that....

MaCRonI
12-31-06, 03:08 AM
Okkay back after reading it all...
andI gots to say that you know your craft homie. I'm sees all the dope mettas and multis in the joint. I expecially like it beucase it takes the risk of using high calibur voacb..........but my only dissappiontment is that some of your lines and mulis...which should rhyme in there don't. Sure they are spelled similar,but nope they don't rhymes...camera drama and proganda don't work......
keep droppin ...and feed my jonits......

9.25/10

Invisible Vision
01-04-07, 12:22 PM
respect.... if i remember correctly

mahatma was/is a bboys head. when i was over there he was one of the guys i checked for... if i was his name on a battle or open mic piece (usually open mic) i read it... no questions.

this is a high quality drop with great writing...

i enjoyed this selection in particular, but it was one of many....
Unrepairable with bandage while I'm staring at candles
snaring my samples...
with needles that'd have Jesus saying prayers to my sandals
Welcome to the lair of a vandal swearing at cancer
like; Are you f*cking listening, illness is a forte you can't handle
The rarest of tangent turners, random word worders
serving verses with the purpose of circling until you're nervous
Berzurk phantom murders occur while I'm enduring
furthering of an art-form purely drawn from practise perfect..
Relations and statements raised on give and taking
written matrix equations to re-position the grid we're placed in

to the kids saying "it was too long, i didn't read it" that's the type of atitude that makes the OM weaker... but since i'm not in here enough anymore.... i'm not gonna really bash any regulars.... the hypocrisy would be too thick.

but this should be upped for its quality

Mahatma
06-30-07, 06:37 PM
Thanks Yag, MaC and especially IV.

I just came back through after another long time. I'll try to stay longer this stay!

W.I.Z.E.
06-30-07, 09:59 PM
Didn't read the whole thing but the 16 lines or so either quoted or what I've read are straight fire. Good looks IV cuz the part you quoted is straight fire...

Mz. ILL Seekah
06-30-07, 10:22 PM
dope piece...got me excited and want to write somethin". Keep it going.

Peace and Blessings

Mahatma
07-03-07, 06:40 PM
Cheers!

My vertebrae prominence is a remnant of dorsal fins
a brain with no endorphins in and a face that's worth torturing

Ecliptik
07-04-07, 04:18 PM
this is prolly the first spit i seen in WEEKS i think was worth a reply....straight fire sonn...