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sexydeltagirl
03-10-06, 07:01 PM
Moving in a cirtcular motion...
You are draining the life outta me...
You purposely put me in a state of anger...
Maybe after I get to the rinse cycle will I completely...
Rid myself of you...
In the beginning you poured your love for me like Tide...
Real thick it coated all of your being...
And when I tried to let your thoughts venture to past love...
You disinfected me like bleach...
It's crazy how you found me in your wrinkled state.....
After I'd erased you like static cling...
Turned inside out tossed in...
Like bounty...
I lifted you higher....
Shook me like clothes outta the dryer...
Folded me up and placed me in your dresser drawer...
I become your personal whore...
I let you wear me without at least ironing out the creases...
You took advantage of me and didn't have the courtesy ...
2 hang me up after you wore me ....
Down...
So I'm laying here...
Just waiting...
For you to fix my broken button...
I'm your pride...
You should take better care of me...

Irish-dipstick
03-10-06, 08:21 PM
cool i love ur work and i love woman in general every aspect i quess im a horny cun't haha peace ut babes. ;)

7:30femmefatale
03-13-06, 10:46 PM
So I'm laying here...
Just waiting...
For you to fix my broken button...
I'm your pride...
You should take better care of me...
men... love.. don't always come with a delicates setting, do they?

i like this. this is probably my favorite thing by you i've read. feelin it.

ElseWhere
03-14-06, 06:13 PM
i always feel swindled and raped cuz' i gotta pay $6 to do my laundry. (thats 3 loads)

not exactly the same, but i feel this work girl.

sexydeltagirl
03-15-06, 06:46 PM
Thanks for the feedback everyone.....I really appreciate it.....