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homeyjay
03-03-06, 05:35 PM
she sat down next to me
and asked if i was driving
as i stared into her beauty
breathing in her perfume
noting the astuteness in her eyes
and her long dark & silky hair
i started to smile and asked why?
so that you can drive me home
she replied oh so audaciously
i'm sorry, but do i know you?
does one ever know one really?
i saw that she was well equipped
for any contention that i'd offer
so instead of debating i acceded
inflated egos leave no room for rationale
she knew all the tunes and played them
had me acting like a big imbecile
while driving i was sure of one thing
that something was amiss but what
she was asleep when we arrived at her place
after a few minutes inside she asked me to stay
i knew right away where this route would take me
and that i wasn't the first traveler either but,
she was bold and she was mannish and i liked it
and all the while indulging i could feel her iniquity
oozing into my pores like a virus i became putrid
i saw her everyday and totally neglected everything
then one day it ended and i was reluctant to consent
my heart ached each day that i was away from her
i had finally tasted the meal that i had served to others
she's in my system and only time will rid me of her i hope
the very grounds of my struggle has her essance become

sexydeltagirl
03-03-06, 06:04 PM
wow, I could imagine these words....very nice.....
props....

Irish-dipstick
03-04-06, 05:53 AM
i haven't read any of your work in a while but this one was moving and power.