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sexydeltagirl
03-02-06, 12:39 PM
If I had a dollar for everytime the words B!tch, Hoe or Slut...
Rolled off your lips...
There would no need for me to work everyday....
I'd be rich...
I would be able to buy me an island and love there peacefully...
Away from all the negative images you display about me....
Do you really hate me?
Ever since Eve bit that apple I been catching hell...
Being blamed for your shallowness and disdain...
Just cause someone with my genetic make-up....
Caused a sudden break up...
Cause you weren't treating her right...or maybe you were but that's another discussion entirely...
So you disrespect me and call me names....
Yet I can remember when I was royalty, sometimes higher than a queen...
You spit at my exsistance and with a microscope....
Disect my frame, comparing my body parts like cattle...
Stamping numbers on me like sheep...
What am I a dime (10) or a nickle (5)...
It's really discusting how you treat me...
Knowing deep down you need me...
I stand beside you, I comfort you, I feed you..
I give you the courage to face the man who tries to take everything away from you...
And yet you treat me and consider me quite simply....
A B!tch...
Yeah a dog, one that begs for your attention and licks your boot...
Who only wants you to stroke its fur....let me curl up next to you and let you expose your true self...
We have to end this.... you and me, cause it's getting outta hand..
We're creating more men who hate the women...
And no good can come from that....
Stop putting all of us together cause you picked one who's insides were sour....
If you are patient and do some self-realization, then the good one will come...
But the wall you have created makes it hard for me to get through...
I tried being nice, and putting aside our differences....
But you still keep the real you hidden, your wall of Jericho didn't come down...
So you are upset, harbour resentment and this is where we sit...
Open your eyes, honor me as you should..
I AM WOMAN DAMMITT!!!!!!

7:30femmefatale
03-02-06, 03:20 PM
ROOOARRRR!!!!

very powerful stuff here.

Irish-dipstick
03-03-06, 04:13 AM
i told u b4 ur a strong woman.

i fell out of place here but i haven't treated a woman bad b4.

good looking nice piece

sexydeltagirl
03-03-06, 02:21 PM
ROOOARRRR!!!!

very powerful stuff here.

:laugh: Why did that song come to my head when I read this for the first time.....The inspiration for this piece really needs a reality check.....

sexydeltagirl
03-03-06, 02:23 PM
i told u b4 ur a strong woman.

i fell out of place here but i haven't treated a woman bad b4.

good looking nice piece

:blush: thanks, I sometimes forget I'm much stronger than I think...
I'm glad you liked the piece.....and i'm glad you haven't mistreated a woman that gives me hope that there's still some good ones out here...

Have a safe and wonderful weekend.....

MESO
03-03-06, 02:38 PM
The power of your words are unbelievable !!!

Miss Delta
You have a natural ability to make me understand you.
When I think of soil, I'm usually thinking dirty
even though fertility is an important part of life.
This is necessary for growth. What you provide to us affects our culture in many ways. To say the least, your curves and bends shape our cities, provide us work, and places that lovely spread of food on our table. You have been here way before I can remember and you make me feel at home. As a whole we have been in neglect here and should take better care. In so many ways you provide a gateway to the world.
Yet so many forget, and when all hell breaks loose, it's like damn, I could have done more to prevent this. We are like politicians debating how we should contain you, yet your freedom preserves what is truly a blessing. Maybe if we did less to restrict God's will we wouldn't have all the coastal problems. :yes:

sexydeltagirl
03-03-06, 06:11 PM
The power of your words are unbelievable !!!

Miss Delta
You have a natural ability to make me understand you.
When I think of soil, I'm usually thinking dirty
even though fertility is an important part of life.
This is necessary for growth. What you provide to us affects our culture in many ways. To say the least, your curves and bends shape our cities, provide us work, and places that lovely spread of food on our table. You have been here way before I can remember and you make me feel at home. As a whole we have been in neglect here and should take better care. In so many ways you provide a gateway to the world.
Yet so many forget, and when all hell breaks loose, it's like damn, I could have done more to prevent this. We are like politicians debating how we should contain you, yet your freedom preserves what is truly a blessing. Maybe if we did less to restrict God's will we wouldn't have all the coastal problems. :yes:

Aww I don't know where to begin...I truly appreciate your likeness for my work and your kind words....really a girl is speechless... ;) and the piece that you dropped is dope...

Keep em coming....your words always provide insipiration.... :yes:

homeyjay
03-03-06, 06:17 PM
If I had a dollar for everytime the words B!tch, Hoe or Slut...
Rolled off your lips...
There would no need for me to work everyday....
I'd be rich...
I would be able to buy me an island and love there peacefully...
Away from all the negative images you display about me....
Do you really hate me?
Ever since Eve bit that apple I been catching hell...
Being blamed for your shallowness and disdain...
Just cause someone with my genetic make-up....
Caused a sudden break up...
Cause you weren't treating her right...or maybe you were but that's another discussion entirely...
So you disrespect me and call me names....
Yet I can remember when I was royalty, sometimes higher than a queen...
You spit at my exsistance and with a microscope....
Disect my frame, comparing my body parts like cattle...
Stamping numbers on me like sheep...
What am I a dime (10) or a nickle (5)...
It's really discusting how you treat me...
Knowing deep down you need me...
I stand beside you, I comfort you, I feed you..
I give you the courage to face the man who tries to take everything away from you...
And yet you treat me and consider me quite simply....
A B!tch...
Yeah a dog, one that begs for your attention and licks your boot...
Who only wants you to stroke its fur....let me curl up next to you and let you expose your true self...
We have to end this.... you and me, cause it's getting outta hand..
We're creating more men who hate the women...
And no good can come from that....
Stop putting all of us together cause you picked one who's insides were sour....
If you are patient and do some self-realization, then the good one will come...
But the wall you have created makes it hard for me to get through...
I tried being nice, and putting aside our differences....
But you still keep the real you hidden, your wall of Jericho didn't come down...
So you are upset, harbour resentment and this is where we sit...
Open your eyes, honor me as you should..
I AM WOMAN DAMMITT!!!!!!

Sexxy Dee - You know where you stand with me. So keep keepin' on 'cause they comin' better and better.goodin' hj

sexydeltagirl
03-03-06, 06:34 PM
Sexxy Dee - You know where you stand with me. So keep keepin' on 'cause they comin' better and better.goodin' hj

I know this and I def. know it's a very nice place to be....Thanks for checking this one out....And you are right....the more I write the more confident I become in my writing....

:)

Dmac
03-04-06, 11:27 PM
yo dat was insightful, def at a point and, truthful 2 da bone
it's better dan ma standards allow it 2 b
it excels

sexydeltagirl
04-28-06, 11:15 AM
yo dat was insightful, def at a point and, truthful 2 da bone
it's better dan ma standards allow it 2 b
it excels

Thanks, so much...I had to read this joint today because I'm feeling a lil down.....so upp, upp and away.....