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pryncess31400
02-23-06, 07:07 PM
this sickness has begun to engulf me
it's in my head, in my brain and
i can't get away from it
i try to think of other things
but it always comes back
haunting me like a bad dream
this sickmess won't let me enjoy
the simple things like
playing with my baby or just laughing
really laughing at a funny joke
this sickness forces me to be fake
smile when i wanna cry
look like everything is fine
when it's not
i need so help
but i don't know where to turn
i am so tired
so very tired and scared
what if this is it
how i live the rest of my life
sick
like
this





















really just my ramblings, nothing special

homeyjay
02-24-06, 12:46 PM
this sickness has begun to engulf me
it's in my head, in my brain and
i can't get away from it
i try to think of other things
but it always comes back
haunting me like a bad dream
this sickmess won't let me enjoy
the simple things like
playing with my baby or just laughing
really laughing at a funny joke
this sickness forces me to be fake
smile when i wanna cry
look like everything is fine
when it's not
i need so help
but i don't know where to turn
i am so tired
so very tired and scared
what if this is it
how i live the rest of my life
sick
like
this

I like this piece, be it rambling or not it is very thought provoking and like me I'm sure that many can relate to it. felt, looking forward to your next joint.hj



















really just my ramblings, nothing special

pryncess31400
02-24-06, 06:35 PM
Wow...thank you. My head has just been so screwed up lately, I thought this might help.

Dmac
02-26-06, 12:18 PM
yo dat was nice ma

Absolut da poet
02-26-06, 11:27 PM
I like it cause it's real..

Always speak ya heart...that's the essence of good poetry.

Big Ups.

pryncess31400
02-28-06, 11:35 PM
Thank you both for your kind words.

sexydeltagirl
03-01-06, 01:21 PM
Very nice lady, don't be a stranger....if the spirit moves you, write it down and share....
Props....