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sexydeltagirl
02-16-06, 04:55 PM
I'm standing on your shoulders...
I can touch the brightest star...I'm focused
Gripping on the canvas, and relish in the passing...
Of you, as I glance in your direction again....
I'm no longer silent, I'm determined to win your affection...
Without words my eyes speak to get your attention..
I feel you watchin...
You are like a cool breeze that's so inviting...
Calming like leaving the door open in the country...
No need to turn on the radio, we create out own music....
I'm confessing that you are, more than just words to me...
Or a screen name, chosen to represent you in cyberspace...
You are tempting me to dance in your ray of light...

Irish-dipstick
02-16-06, 06:47 PM
short but sweet still u are very good a very promising future poet.

(K.I.M)

sexydeltagirl
02-16-06, 07:03 PM
short but sweet still u are very good a very promising future poet.

(K.I.M)

Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it...
Awww, I had 2 :blush: @ your last comment....... ;)