Untitled....Yeah I Cant' Even Finish

[sexydeltagirl]

Somethings on my heart...
I'm thinking back to a time and place....
A place where I don't wanna go but my spirit is moving me to open the door....
Breathe in the past like it's my last breath...
I'm staring at the room it's quite empty, broken glass is on the floor...
I don't know how long I have been sitting here, but judging from the sun I slept in this same spot....
I grab hold of my neck and when I stroke it my senses, let me know it's been bruised.... I am in pain....
I knew when I said those words I would have regretted them...
But the truth was what you wanted, I never mean to hurt you....
That's what my mouth said but my body thought different...
It loved that mans touches, his kisses, his smell...
It instantly began weak by just the sound of his voice...
It was possessed...
And when you touched me it felt violated eventhough it belonged to you in a sense...
Your eyes caught a fire like my words were a match....
Did he fukk you like me?, Did he kiss you like me?
Speechless, I stood no words could I formulate....
The tears started to flow, I never seen you so vulnerable...

To be continued....

[Black N Proud]

You have done it once again! Another classic spoken word/poem that keeps one on the edge of their seat, waiting to read what's next...Each line left me wanting to hear more... Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read the continuation!

[sexydeltagirl]

You have done it once again! Another classic spoken word/poem that keeps one on the edge of their seat, waiting to read what's next...Each line left me wanting to hear more... Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read the continuation!

:blush: thanks for the kind words I'm glad you liked it..I'mma try to continue it but my mind does what it wants but I see me ending this one....

I will def. keep writing if I know u will be reading.....

[Irish-dipstick]

the story is so deep. n=know joke ur words paint a picture my girl u real talent.

keep on wrting ill keep reading.

and by the way is that a true story?

[sexydeltagirl]

the story is so deep. n=know joke ur words paint a picture my girl u real talent.

keep on wrting ill keep reading.

and by the way is that a true story?

Thanks babe, I'm starting to think I got a lil talent for this writing thing 2.....I'll def. keep writing....no comment 2 your ?.... ;)