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sexydeltagirl
02-12-06, 05:55 PM
This longing for you is unable to shake...
I try to not think about you, but my thoughts always come back
2 U....
Whether it's trying to devise a scheme to grab my things and leave...
Calculating vacation hours, booking flights..
Tap dancing around the idea of our first night...
Hoping for the best, but not promising nothing...
Let me just...
See you...
I beat my voice will shake when the first word I speak to you escape...
Hi....
Please bring to life these images I have of you....
Do those things you said you would do...
Not just physically, my mind is more open then my jeans....
Pour water on the trees of knowledge you have planted in my brain...
Let me watch you speak.....
If I could only reach you, touch you just for a second...
Be your towel once you step out the shower...
I would circle around you, cover you.....move my eyes across the great canvass that is your body....
I'll dry you off with the air of confidence I'm floating on when I think of you.....
I'm dying for a release, but you keep me prisioner...
You give me just enough to keep me coming back for more...
Enough attention without over doing it...
Enough moments of arousal without the physical climax....
I'm looking out the window at work wondering if the planes in the sky are headed in your direction...
I checked the weather station to see what should be placed in my suitcase...
I,I, I gotta see you, I gotta touch you....
But I won't and I can't....
My passion divides us.....

Black N Proud
02-13-06, 02:18 AM
WOW! I am truly speechless... Damn, I mean this is just an AMAZING piece of art!!! This is by far the most romantic poem I have ever read.... This piece has sooooo many quotables and deep lines.... You my sister, have an ever growing and evolving gift for poetry... Ever piece that you write, you seem to always excell and elevate/grow with...

It amazes me and inspires me each time I read one of your works... It's the works of art like this piece you have written that I have made me realize how beautiful and powerful poetry is... Your work is truly epic and just something special... Your work(poetry) is always original, creative and unqiue!!!! This piece right here is just classic!!! It's always an honor to read your work and become influenced!!! Thank you for the influential/creative/beautiful work! It influences me when it comes to my work (poetry)...

Keep up the innovative/creative/beautiful work, sister!! :blush:

sexydeltagirl
02-13-06, 06:29 PM
WOW! I am truly speechless... Damn, I mean this is just an AMAZING piece of art!!! This is by far the most romantic poem I have ever read.... This piece has sooooo many quotables and deep lines.... You my sister, have an ever growing and evolving gift for poetry... Ever piece that you write, you seem to always excell and elevate/grow with...

It amazes me and inspires me each time I read one of your works... It's the works of art like this piece you have written that I have made me realize how beautiful and powerful poetry is... Your work is truly epic and just something special... Your work(poetry) is always original, creative and unqiue!!!! This piece right here is just classic!!! It's always an honor to read your work and become influenced!!! Thank you for the influential/creative/beautiful work! It influences me when it comes to my work (poetry)...

Keep up the innovative/creative/beautiful work, sister!! :blush:

Wow, I really don't know what to say, I mean I'm at a lost for words and that's kinda hard for me....but I appreciate this, really....I want to say to much in response but I don't think my words could describe how touched I really am.....I'll just say thank you once again...and I'm glad you appreciate my work....and I'll def. keep writing..... ;)

Cerebral Knievel
02-14-06, 12:10 AM
great piece. Very visual.

7:30femmefatale
02-14-06, 08:59 AM
i can relate to several parts of this one. keep sharing, i enjoy reading your stuff.

Irish-dipstick
02-14-06, 07:01 PM
as u know girl i enjoy ur wrting so keep on wrting.

my mind is more open then my jeans.... visions of a strong woman. :yes:

sexydeltagirl
02-15-06, 11:53 AM
great piece. Very visual.

Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it.... ;)

sexydeltagirl
02-15-06, 11:54 AM
i can relate to several parts of this one. keep sharing, i enjoy reading your stuff.

I will def. keep sharing, it's become a part of me now....Thanks, I enjoyed the work you posted as well....

sexydeltagirl
02-15-06, 11:55 AM
as u know girl i enjoy ur wrting so keep on wrting.

my mind is more open then my jeans.... visions of a strong woman. :yes:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy my work it def. means a lot to me that people can identify with my words...

:blush: @ your last comment.....