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Irish-dipstick
02-11-06, 09:48 AM
the madness flows when ever im mad
the same the badness flows when ever im bad/
i chincheck wiggas put an end to gold diggas
count my green sheets i got 6 digit figures/
and i know karma is a beautiful thing it
rewards you gives u love and them material things
it also provides homes hugs and the pinky rings
at the end of the day karma a strong as thang/
man the aroma is hot the spice is warm
or maybe not this is bit like some emcees who
think they that but the nuthing more than busters
kiking up hissy fits and dust clusters/ they want to
survive in this sohh emcee circle but they already
died many commit sucide/ at one stage i did it
myself but now im back hommie counting my
wealth i damage my health but still bounced back
im the one to call when u need to beat the
hatered thats stacked/ i've changed my subject
from the start but this is full of alot subjects
from the heart/ i have tell ya'll i started to
walk nearly had sohh emcee career lined in
chalk cause i was stupid and i know this now
but get ready to bow cause i just been crowned/
i aint the best i know this im average pass me
a beverage escape the cage with rage flip
the scripture or flip the page......

scripture 2 coming soon.

Irish-dipstick
02-11-06, 07:25 PM
upped now someone reply.

#1rapper
02-12-06, 11:09 AM
now i told u u were gettin better, but this drop right here was just horrible, like theres nothing else i can do to sedcribe it, ur oher drops showed improvement, but not this one, for example...

"the madness flows when ever im mad
the same the badness flows when ever im bad"

no excuses for rhyming bad with mad, even if the flow was fire, which it wasen't, your main rhymes should never contain mad and bad, n.e.v.e.r

and secondly


"i aint the best i know this im average pass me
a beverage escape the cage with rage flip
the scripture or flip the page......"

The whole pass me a beverage thing is dumb, and if you keep refearing to yourself as average and not as good as the rest of Sohh, how are you gonna get respect, evenn if you suck, you gotta say your the best, never say ur not as good as sohh, that just sets you up for hard punchlines comin at you when your battilin someone,

just keep doin ur shyt but make some improvements