Untitiled....Just A Minute

[sexydeltagirl]

Let me get just a minute of your time....
I'm not asking you to stay with me all day and not run ball with your boys...
I just want to put something on your heart...
Let it sink into your brain and get your heart pumpin, put an extra swagger in your step, have you smiling like it's Easter and you are in your Sunday's best...
I want to tell you what you have done to me in the little time that I have known you..
I want to let you know that when I'm not around you, I feel like I'm missing a part of me....I know that sounds corny but it's true...
You're my rational part, the part that's not so emotional...
Cause when I cried, not from being weak but just needing a release, you were strong for me....you held me tight and soothed me, like a crying baby given a pacifier...I became an infant again.....
I've been getting these feelings, feelings I've never felt before...
I wanna smile, cry, laugh all at the same time....
I, I'm not sure if it's love but when I hear that click of another call on the other line I ignore it, cause I'm talking to you....the outside world is at a stand still....I'm trying to digest every word that comes from your lips...
You got me trying not 2 massage my cheeks when we communicate...
Cause I don't want my face to forget...
How you make it sore with your sweet comments and dashing charm....
See you doing it now, you are looking me deep into my eyes as I speak these words...
So I, I, start bitting my nails and turning away....
You say "baby keep going I got all day".....
You start 2 move closer to me and try to sit down...
I grab your hand and gesture for you to remain standing....
Baby please don't put your stuff down I'm almost done...
See you and I are like the stars, we twinkle together we bring the light to darkness...
You shape me and I inturn shape you, We don't try to change each other....we just grow....
So while you out there running ball and chillin with your boys....
Take a quick second and put your hand to your heart and know that it's not just that exercise you got from that pick up game that has it beating like that...
It's also yearning to be joined with mine so they can beat as one....

[Irish-dipstick]

dope girl. i feel real love emtional stuff on this but i also feel humor but a seriousness to it.

[sexydeltagirl]

dope girl. i feel real love emtional stuff on this but i also feel humor but a seriousness to it.

Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it.... :)

[Black N Proud]

W-O-W!!!! This is reeeeeeeeeallly nice work!!! I mean, damn, you really got deep on this one... Everything about this poem is unique... It's not only got a wonderful flow, but a swagger of it's own... I mean, not too many words can even describe how unique, beautiful and powerful this poem or work of art is!
You make writing seem so natural, like breathing or walking... It's amazing!

Very, very, very nice work, please keep writing cuz I'll keep reading! :blush:

[Xplicit Lyric™]

You're my rational part, the part that's not so emotional...

We all need that. Nice piece.


~1

[homeyjay]

Let me get just a minute of your time....
I'm not asking you to stay with me all day and not run ball with your boys...
I just want to put something on your heart...
Let it sink into your brain and get your heart pumpin, put an extra swagger in your step, have you smiling like it's Easter and you are in your Sunday's best...
I want to tell you what you have done to me in the little time that I have known you..
I want to let you know that when I'm not around you, I feel like I'm missing a part of me....I know that sounds corny but it's true...
You're my rational part, the part that's not so emotional...
Cause when I cried, not from being weak but just needing a release, you were strong for me....you held me tight and soothed me, like a crying baby given a pacifier...I became an infant again.....
I've been getting these feelings, feelings I've never felt before...
I wanna smile, cry, laugh all at the same time....
I, I'm not sure if it's love but when I hear that click of another call on the other line I ignore it, cause I'm talking to you....the outside world is at a stand still....I'm trying to digest every word that comes from your lips...
You got me trying not 2 massage my cheeks when we communicate...
Cause I don't want my face to forget...
How you make it sore with your sweet comments and dashing charm....
See you doing it now, you are looking me deep into my eyes as I speak these words...
So I, I, start bitting my nails and turning away....
You say "baby keep going I got all day".....
You start 2 move closer to me and try to sit down...
I grab your hand and gesture for you to remain standing....
Baby please don't put your stuff down I'm almost done...
See you and I are like the stars, we twinkle together we bring the light to darkness...
You shape me and I inturn shape you, We don't try to change each other....we just grow....
So while you out there running ball and chillin with your boys....
Take a quick second and put your hand to your heart and know that it's not just that exercise you got from that pick up game that has it beating like that...
It's also yearning to be joined with mine so they can beat as one....

Sexxy Dee - no one can do it like you do, so "do it to death" my sister goodin'.hj

[sexydeltagirl]

W-O-W!!!! This is reeeeeeeeeallly nice work!!! I mean, damn, you really got deep on this one... Everything about this poem is unique... It's not only got a wonderful flow, but a swagger of it's own... I mean, not too many words can even describe how unique, beautiful and powerful this poem or work of art is!
You make writing seem so natural, like breathing or walking... It's amazing!

Very, very, very nice work, please keep writing cuz I'll keep reading! :blush:

Thanks so much for this...I'm glad you liked it, you really make a girl feel good with your kind words...I really appreciate it....thanks..... ;)

I checked your last joint, very nice...def. keep them coming....

[sexydeltagirl]

You're my rational part, the part that's not so emotional...

We all need that. Nice piece.


~1

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, I just checked for your piece very nice..
Keep them coming.....

[sexydeltagirl]

Sexxy Dee - no one can do it like you do, so "do it to death" my sister goodin'.hj

:blush: I'm glad you liked it.....