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Black N Proud
02-08-06, 12:07 PM
I often set sail in daydreamin' because it takes me places I either wanna go or that I have never seen... Of in distant lands, carefree and not a worry in the world to bother me.... I AM FREE... Free from the madness in the world, all the everyday hustle and struggle that we all go through.... Once I close my eyes or stare off(daydream) into another world, there I am: in my ship, tryin' away to seek refuge some where, where I can just go to clear my mind, and not be bothered by anyone...

I can just have time to myself, and do the things that I wanna do... I take this ship many places day after day... Wherever I wanna go, the ships just takes me... It's like the ship can read my mind, and the destintions that lay before me... But when I find the place of most comfort, I stop and set sail and try to watch the sun come up, but that never seems to happen... Instead, I'm left standing here, waiting in line to buy these new shoes, and the lady is staring and screaming at me, "NEXT IN LINE PLEASE!!!!!"

sexydeltagirl
02-09-06, 04:07 PM
Very nice, very nice indeed.....
I like this piece, I hope you keep on keeping on, it may seem a little unsure right now but you are destined for greatness my brotha...

Keep up the good work.....Dope piece...

Irish-dipstick
02-09-06, 05:55 PM
i liked this it sucked me in deep lo im a little confused on what its about i believe its about freedom but still never reaching it. like an entrappment thing. lol dope still.

Black N Proud
02-10-06, 12:14 AM
Very nice, very nice indeed.....
I like this piece, I hope you keep on keeping on, it may seem a little unsure right now but you are destined for greatness my brotha...

Keep up the good work.....Dope piece...
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked this!!! And thank you for the encouragement as well!

Black N Proud
02-10-06, 12:19 AM
i liked this it sucked me in deep lo im a little confused on what its about i believe its about freedom but still never reaching it. like an entrappment thing. lol dope still.
Thank you! And yes, it is defintely about freedom and being able to just simply be free and comfortable... Like not having a worry or problem in the world, just being able to escape all the madness and everyday problems we as people put up with from time to time... Thanks again...