[Freestyle]

[slave2aplaya]

...Only
dreaming of you
makes my heart live
but - how can I miss you
when you were never here
to start with
how can you be missed
when only in my dreams
...you exist
its so real, I feel
its like deja vu
everytime I dream of you
how can your skin be so warm
when the image is cold
still, its true
you break the mould
I know you do
see...
Im too scared to touch you
to show some affection
Im too scared to wake up
to see your imperfection
still, I feel in dreams
our souls could bind
but see this slip away...?
I'd rather go blind
and keep on dreaming forever
so I never
have to face reality
and compare all those
who could never be
anywhere close
to how flawless
you seem to me...

[Freestyle]

[homeyjay]

...Only
dreaming of you
makes my heart live
but - how can I miss you
when you were never here
to start with
how can you be missed
when only in my dreams
...you exist
its so real, I feel
its like deja vu
everytime I dream of you
how can your skin be so warm
when the image is cold
still, its true
you break the mould
I know you do
see...
Im too scared to touch you
to show some affection
Im too scared to wake up
to see your imperfection
still, I feel in dreams
our souls could bind
but see this slip away...?
I'd rather go blind
and keep on dreaming forever
so I never
have to face reality
and compare all those
who could never be
anywhere close
to how flawless
to seem to me...

[Freestyle]


STP - I've been there so many times that it ain't funny. felt.

[sexydeltagirl]

...Only
dreaming of you
makes my heart live
but - how can I miss you
when you were never here
to start with
how can you be missed
when only in my dreams
...you exist
its so real, I feel
its like deja vu
everytime I dream of you
how can your skin be so warm
when the image is cold
still, its true
you break the mould
I know you do
see...
Im too scared to touch you
to show some affection
Im too scared to wake up
to see your imperfection
still, I feel in dreams
our souls could bind
but see this slip away...?
I'd rather go blind
and keep on dreaming forever
so I never
have to face reality
and compare all those
who could never be
anywhere close
to how flawless
to seem to me...

[Freestyle]

Dope piece, I can def. identify with this....esp. this part

I'd rather go blind
and keep on dreaming forever
so I never
have to face reality
and compare all those
who could never be
anywhere close
to how flawless
to seem to me...

Props.......Keep em coming

[slave2aplaya]

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[sexydeltagirl]

Thank you so much, i just felt the urge to write this one night and last sunday I went to visit my dad and found him dead...it scares me, i dont know what prompted me 2 write this poem but some of it applies-I am now editing it to read at his funeral.
My dad was my life and breath and without him I feel like a piece of my heart is missing so writers block doesnt even begin to explain. Until this day I have been lucky enough to never lose someone close to me, and now he's gone all I can do is make my life better for him, know he worked his whole life to make ME happy and believe it when everyone tells me its not my fault.

Wherever you are daddy, and if they have the internet wherever that is, read this and know my future children will know and love you as much as everyone else you touched with your presence, you would have been the best grandad. Please, please rest in peace and know you will live on forever within me.
Im going to make you proud.

I love you

xXx

I am so sorry to hear about your Dad's passing, be assured that he is suffering no more...My heart goes out 2 you and your family, dealing with the passing of a loved one is a difficult thing, but you were touched by his presense so he will continue to live in your heart....

Peace to you.....

[homeyjay]

Thank you so much, i just felt the urge to write this one night and last sunday I went to visit my dad and found him dead...it scares me, i dont know what prompted me 2 write this poem but some of it applies-I am now editing it to read at his funeral.
My dad was my life and breath and without him I feel like a piece of my heart is missing so writers block doesnt even begin to explain. Until this day I have been lucky enough to never lose someone close to me, and now he's gone all I can do is make my life better for him, know he worked his whole life to make ME happy and believe it when everyone tells me its not my fault.

Wherever you are daddy, and if they have the internet wherever that is, read this and know my future children will know and love you as much as everyone else you touched with your presence, you would have been the best grandad. Please, please rest in peace and know you will live on forever within me.
Im going to make you proud.

I love you

xXx

STP - My prayers go out to you, I've lost a close family member myself and I know that there's no words of comfort that can be offered. Just be thatnkful that you have fond memories of your Father and cherish them. When I lost my pops it was weird because I grew up without him so I had no memories to draw from, imagine being at you pops funeral with no emotions, no feelings good or bad he was a stranger to me and yet he was my pops. So appreciate the memories you'll always have them and I'm sure that your father has been proud of you all along.

[slave2aplaya]

Thank u both so much 4 ur support, it really does help when you know people relate, its the funeral 2moro and about 100 people are coming which says it all I suppose... so if I can get through that I can get through anything. thanks again guys, lets keep on keepin on!
xXx