1# Rapper vs Buddah Mac

[Wordsmyth]

Deadline Monday Midnight

Topic: Suicide


Doesn't matter who goes first as long as it's before the deadline....

[Propaganda]

uh...why would you have different topics for each guy if they're facing each other?

obviously it makes more sense to have them do the same topic and see who works it better.

[Wordsmyth]

uh...why would you have different topics for each guy if they're facing each other?

obviously it makes more sense to have them do the same topic and see who works it better.

Point taken...

Mods please delete these last two post. No more free posting in the battle threads. Votes breakdowns only. Hold any other discussions or ideas in the Matchups thread. Last adjustment....everything else final!!! :devil:

[#1rapper]

THE SOHH DAILY NEWS
A man of age 33 shockingly took his life last night

His wife, came from working late, it was about 12:38
She ate, cleaned the plates, she was lean in the face
She was beat, she worked weeks for jerks and creeps
Who are berzerk and discreet, doesn't she deserve some sleep
She went to their room to rest with her husband
The hallway smelled like a cesspool or something
She noticed the smelll dwelled in their room
Focused as hell, the door opened itself, and BOOM
She saw her husband sunk in their bed, missing chunks of his head
The white sheets where she used to sleep was soaked in red
All her hopes have flead, hes' croaked, he's dead,
Then she picked up a note that read....

I had to do this, to my kid, juz know that your dad was stupid
My wife, my life, you were right, i been thinking through the night
How were both way wrecked, get lame respect, feel retained and depressed
Of getting strained pay checks, we make way less then we need to make
So i proceed with rage that breathes and raves inside my demon ways
So the shell in my pistol, is well and official, and it can assist you
What i mean by that, might sound obscene and wack, but read the facts
Now that i'm gone your stuck, your fuqked, shyt outta of luck
So just quit all this stuff, Don't take years to try and soothe yourself
Grab the gun and fuqking shoot yourself,
Or stab your lungs and join me on the route to hell
PE@CE................................................................... ..[/I]


She felt sick to her stomach, her man did some dumb shyt
She wouldn't grab the gun clip, and let her son live
in some dump crib, She was saddened yes, both mad and depressed
And the rest wasen't released to the press.

reported by #1rapper



THE SOHH DAILY NEWS
[I]A women of age 34 took commited suicide last night

For weeks she griefed finally she put the heat to her teeth
I speak, of the wife to the man who took his life and left a plan
For her to do the same, Sohh I wonder who's to blame
Their sons blooms with pain, you can't remove their stains
Just hope he dosn't do the same.......



reported by #1rapper

[r-e-mix]

it was alright i guess....it didn't really do it for me though...probably the best you could do with a topic as bad as that...i probably couldnt have done much better

[Buddah MAC]

I'm done with the sun, sleep erasing days away
blaspheme my lungs, goddamn breath blown in clay
rather lie unawoken, dust to dust stay choking
on the inbetween, evoking pointlessness' token
prizes, fogged eyes as dyed paper blinds the wisest
and surprises are the lies as stagnance what survives us
after death, what's left? just the 6 bil left behind
to stay frontin' they blind to corporeal time
as they view the decaying, solace and praying
only placating their own fear of what tomorrow may bring
countin' down to the second when sound's through
when darkness surround you, when your body lowered down to
final resting, closed curtain on the stage
meaning we end the testing and the drama on the page
no longer recited, no love unrequited, no pain blinding sight and
I've lost the will to fight it, set to hit the life switch
and end the bull****, erase ache in this sullen figure
whisper a defeatest "I quit", barrel choked, pulled trigger

........................................................................ .
*BANG*
........................................................................ .

in the second inbetween action and infinite dream
I see my state of being as though projected onto screens
beginning with birth (tho best believe there's a prequel)
I'm shown director's cut of "My life and peoples"
in nanosecond span, sperm cell splits to man
infant bonds with fam, ignorant crawl to taking stands
damn...never knew how good I had it
with food on my plate and back pocket fully padded
never know what you got til, and since my cranium contents spilled
regret would weigh on shoulders 'cept for that I'm formless
seems I just had it with the ache unknowing provided
if lessons learned and applied then maybe pain's subsiding
now here sizing up infinity........................****
see the elements that sucked could have been ducked
with life views altered instead of altar assaults offered
or swallowed pride and called her, for if I hadn't faltered
new avenues show another path with branching roads
opportunities afforded those who, despite pain, arose and chose
instead of letting sorrow close iron curtains on tomorrow
and as I'm ghost on ending scene, hope you avoid that irony

[faceillini]

Aiigth #1 to me you kind of rushed yours...it read simple with no real thought behind it...

Buddah, you was mad nice...well thought of good word play and you came different with it...

IMO Buddah wins ...respect to both

[Wordsmyth]

Nice job, respect to both. 1# I thought the story was off the hook and loved the plot twist. I also dig how you made it into almost a third person point of view by having it as a news article. The wording was basic but descriptive enought to get the point.

Buddah crazy flow and vocab. Had some stand out lines that I'm still reading over. I like how you made this as if these were the things you were thinking and what would go through your mind if you were going to end it all.

Great job from both but I think I'm leaning more towards........Buddah Macs verse by a hair. Respect to both, very good work!

-ghost-

[Wordsmyth]

Bumping for more votes....

[EyesLoSE14]

Good drops from both definately leaning towards buddah mac felt like dude was a bit more consistent whereas parts of #1's verse had some filler to appease his rhyme scheme but at the same time buddahs did tail off a bit at the end but still held up by thin margin..Easy!


Vote: Sidartha

[pix]

wow wow wow, i must say i'm really sad to see one of these cats leave in the first round

MAN

after reading #1 Rapper's verse, i thought i'd for sure vote for him. the rhyme scheme, the passion, the story, the conciseness. like a cross between nas and pac, if you can get what i'm saying. real quick to the point in every line, real human, real heart. and a sprinkle of creative imagery.


but then

Buddah MAC just DID it for me. IMAGERY! i'm the biggest sucker for interesting syllables and imagery. and i was just full-fledged imagining how this would sound on a track. and the other thing that really stuck out was how much it stuck out! lol..like, the values were pushed. it was really dynamic and had a lot of zing and tension in the design...like, if one picture is this really beautiful drawing of a person jumping with a sword in their hand, and then the other is this vibrant drawing of a person in mid-air, twisting, looking down, sword flung way back, wrapping around the canvas, and a big solid fist near the middle of the picture.

this was soo tough, but i'm voting for Buddah

[#1rapper]

props on everybodys input, i knew from when i first saw who i was goin against that it was gonna be tough, i lost, and that's it, buddah won, now that this round is done i wanna say buddahs drop was hott indeed and i'll be giving my input on the other battles to return the favors, so good looking on the votes and all the input

:thumbsup:PrOpS tO tHe VoTeRs :thumbsup:







:violent:make it rugged :violent:

[Wordsmyth]

Buddah Mac wins and proceeds to the next round, good luck!