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sexydeltagirl
02-03-06, 11:45 AM
I woke up this morning hurting...
I had to swallow rather quickly to keep the tears from escaping from my eyes....
I don't know what came over me but I felt it real deep...
Like someone had took something away from that I wanted to keep...
Like I had lost my true love never to be heard from again....
My head was bowed and my heart was heavy...
I tried to make myself feel better by listening to some music but that didn't help..it only confused me...
Had me thinking about my life and why this blue feeling wanted to keep me....
I couldn't shake it or replace it with happy feelings....
So I sat still and I let the flow....stream from my eyes
I let them roll down my face and rest on my blouse...
I didn't start sobbing, just let out a little wimper...
If someone would have seen me they would have made it their mission...
To ask this young lady what is wrong?...
But I wouldn't have an answer, cause my heart wouldn't give me any...
Maybe it just wanted to make me sit still for a minute and appreciate the fact...
That I am not a machine, I'm only human.....

Black N Proud
02-04-06, 11:29 PM
This is truly a work of art! This joint is deep! I'm feelin' this joint, you truly have a gift for writing! Keep up the wonderful/beautiful work!

Irish-dipstick
02-05-06, 06:49 AM
i liked this i'm going to post another soon but this will be better than my recents.

Cerebral Knievel
02-05-06, 10:10 PM
nice..emotional and structured...

good drop.

sexydeltagirl
02-06-06, 10:50 AM
Thanks everyone...I'm glad you all liked it....I was really in a funk the other day....but sometimes it's good to just sit still and let it flow......