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sexydeltagirl
01-23-06, 08:47 AM
It's a little too early in this situation we got going on to put a label on it....
Eventhough I want 2 so badly....
I want to make you a part of me, that special part....
The part that I take care of and nuture and make sure no harm comes it's way....
I mean I, I, want to take this to the next level and sometimes I wanna propose on the phone, like baby be my husband....
Baby, just let me,
the words escape me.....
A girl can dream can't she...
I be twisting my hair around my fingers and acting real coy, not even myself sometimes cause you bring the shyness out of me....
I bet if you saw how I act, you would laugh....
Cause I match wits with you...sometimes you even slip up and forget my sex is female....
I don't mind baby, just let it flow....
We get so wrapped up in talking about this and that, Kobe and Shaq, Common and sometimes DMX....
I look around my room trying 2 keep my eyes still, but they get transfixed on this daydream of you being my man....
The minutes roll by and it's getting late....
I'm still trying to hold on even for just one more minute....
Just to hear you laugh again at something I said....
But I know I have to let you go cause sleep is my enemy...
She is taking hold of your eyes making them feel heavy...
And your voice is coated in yawns, eventhough you try to hide them by taking your mouth away from the phone...
Your voice gets deeper, mines gets sweeter....
And not once during this whole conversation did it venture to a sexual nature...
Just good ole fashion mental stimulation...
So as I click the end call button I sigh....
It's too early in this situation to put a label on it...
I'll just sit back and enjoy the ride....

Irish-dipstick
01-23-06, 12:39 PM
the start got my interest.

and the end was dope.

the content was interesting and attention grapping.

i like this.

and you know me.....i like wat i love baby.


dopeness.

homeyjay
01-23-06, 03:05 PM
SDG - nicely done to put it in da words of my boy curly joe "i resemble that remark" you are able to put out pieces that relect's one's life so eliquently, you got the gift my sister indeed.goodin' hj

sexydeltagirl
01-24-06, 09:25 AM
the start got my interest.

and the end was dope.

the content was interesting and attention grapping.

i like this.

and you know me.....i like wat i love baby.


dopeness.

Thanks for the feedback...I'm glad you liked it.... :)

sexydeltagirl
01-24-06, 09:26 AM
SDG - nicely done to put it in da words of my boy curly joe "i resemble that remark" you are able to put out pieces that relect's one's life so eliquently, you got the gift my sister indeed.goodin' hj

Thanks babe, I'm getting better, I will be up to your level one of these days....thanks for the feedback... ;)

Irish-dipstick
01-24-06, 10:03 AM
i haven't had the pleasure of readin ur stuff homey jay so i would like to see ur next drop

homeyjay
01-24-06, 11:49 AM
SDG- you can put the brakes on that your level stuff, i personally feel that there is no such thing as levels ( it's just one big dance floor and everybody is gettin' down to their own groove) and you arrived along time ago believe you me and have been gettin' down with the best of them, but i do admire your humbleness though, me likes a sister with layers. hj

sexydeltagirl
01-24-06, 11:58 AM
SDG- you can put the brakes on that your level stuff, i personally feel that there is no such thing as levels ( it's just one big dance floor and everybody is gettin' down to their own groove) and you arrived along time ago believe you me and have been gettin' down with the best of them, but i do admire your humbleness though, me likes a sister with layers. hj

;) you think so really, I didn't mean it that way babe...I'm just trying to get better that's all and I consider your work to be very interesting...

:blush: 2 your last comment....

homeyjay
01-24-06, 03:17 PM
;) you think so really, I didn't mean it that way babe...I'm just trying to get better that's all and I consider your work to be very interesting...

:blush: 2 your last comment....

My bad Sexy Dee - if you continue to put in the work like you do, you can't help but to evolve and come up as big as a sister wants. With all sincerity i really do appreciate your commmments after reading it, i'm like if i never ever get another acknowledgement it's cool 'cause i got props from the SDG to the Tee. Thanks hj

sexydeltagirl
01-24-06, 03:30 PM
My bad Sexy Dee - if you continue to put in the work like you do, you can't help but to evolve and come up as big as a sister wants. With all sincerity i really do appreciate your commmments after reading it, i'm like if i never ever get another acknowledgement it's cool 'cause i got props from the SDG to the Tee. Thanks hj

:blush:

Black N Proud
01-24-06, 11:29 PM
Damn, you always seem to amaze me with you work! You have a talent/gift with expressing yourself and putting words together so beautiful that it leaves me astounded... It's amazing just how well your creativity flows, I can truly tell that this comes naturally to you.. Your a very talented sister, keep up the innovative/beautiful work!