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Irish-dipstick
01-17-06, 11:34 AM
am having bad days and am struggling
am just wondering will it ever change
am hear now in the house with an
once to burn am doing this from the
heart were will i be in a few years
probably of the verge of sucide
on the edge of a building jumping
into the air and die.

u no now am on my bad days but
soon i'll get my good am watching
ppl from the beach to the hood
am standing still the clocks still moving
y ppl geting spiked in clubs i've witnessed
this push with posion pills
death is the mercy of god this is a sad piece
and also my first i hope i gotta gun cause soon
hood beef be bursting

i know the above sounds more like rap than poetry
but thats just the life am standing in
but then for a second i get pulled out witnessed
my whole live flash and then the future
plane crash but then i looked back few days
before the bad days and they were pleasent
so tomorrow will be good.

my life now is about karma good is for good deeds
bad days are for bad deeds and the death of little
seeds.

sexydeltagirl
01-17-06, 04:35 PM
Dopeness, I like this piece.....
keep em coming.....

erabfb25
01-18-06, 10:10 AM
real nice, keep it up

Irish-dipstick
01-18-06, 10:56 AM
thanxz ya'll it means alot coming from real talent ya heard