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W.I.Z.E.
01-14-06, 12:25 PM
Hook

Everybody if you know the deal, (and)
Understand when it’s time chill (and)
This is not so control spot
And everybody lemme see what you got.





I rock foes, lately wiping my daughter snot nose,
I lock prose, diction, fiction, man I got those,
Concoct whoa...I con the cock just to drop hoes,
deeper on my **** white guys be like my cock though...
Tell chicks to go lower to lessen the blow,
They like them new dodge rams how the testing the load,
Had to iron out the detail since they pressin' the flow,
Step and let’s go testin’ the pro get nothing less than KO’ed.
Going to blows c’mon you cats is washed up like Hopkins,
Jones, Tyson, whatever cat you think might be poppin.
So many stole the style it’s like I gave it up for adoption,
Get on some Tyson **** like this is preposterous
So amazing the optics…blazing havens where you’re concocting,
Lazy - even obnoxious lyrically wasted content.
Oh you think I’m stopping, .that’s never option,
Yall are overrated like Letterman’s top ten.

Hook


They say my lyrics straight but sometimes I overflow,
And I really came short on that Sohh collabo
He spazzed yo, cuz I thought H- A had mad flows,
That asshole must be running some game like Hasbro.
Some of its factual, natural actual presence that slaps you,
But half you, lack a grasp of what this craft do.
It’s grabs you, you lack the knack and have to,
Grab a mic so now I’m left to blast you.
Surpassed you…your departure now is past due.
Put on your track to have something to laugh through.
Smashing and bashing embarrassing what my math do,
Graphing my madness of passages will just thrash you.
That’s some cartoon ****…watch my car too flip,
I gotta house, wife, nice car two kids.
Gotta a spouse, you’re a louse with your two kids,
Got her a mouth so I’m filling it w/ two kids.
Keep sleeping put a fist to your two lids
Take your garbage and I stuff it under two lids,

Like a chick to grab my **** with her two fists,
Not the ones that you can fit with your two fists.




Audio


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=139985

Wordsmyth
01-14-06, 03:09 PM
Hook

Everybody if you know the deal, (and)
Understand when it’s time chill (and)
This is not so control spot
And everybody lemme see what you got.





I rock foes, lately wiping my daughter snot nose,
I lock prose, diction, fiction, man I got those,
Concoct whoa...I con the cock just to drop hoes,
deeper on my **** white guys be like my cock though...
Tell chicks to go lower to lessen the blow,
They like them new dodge rams how the testing the load,
Had to iron out the detail since they pressin' the flow,
Step and let’s go testin’ the pro get nothing less than KO’ed.
Going to blows c’mon you cats is washed up like Hopkins,
Jones, Tyson, whatever cat you think might be poppin.
So many stole the style it’s like I gave it up for adoption,
Get on some Tyson **** like this is preposterous
So amazing the optics…blazing havens where you’re concocting,
Lazy - even obnoxious lyrically wasted content.
Oh you think I’m stopping, .that’s never option,
Yall are overrated like Letterman’s top ten.

Hook


They say my lyrics straight but sometimes I overflow,
And I really came short on that Sohh collabo
He spazzed yo, cuz I thought H- A had mad flows,
That asshole must be running some game like Hasbro.
Some of its factual, natural actual presence that slaps you,
But half you, lack a grasp of what this craft do.
It’s grabs you, you lack the knack and have to,
Grab a mic so now I’m left to blast you.
Surpassed you…your departure now is past due.
Put on your track to have something to laugh through.
Smashing and bashing embarrassing what my math do,
Graphing my madness of passages will just thrash you.
That’s some cartoon ****…watch my car too flip,
I gotta house, wife, nice car two kids.
Gotta a spouse, you’re a louse with your two kids,
Got her a mouth so I’m filling it w/ two kids.
Keep sleeping put a fist to your two lids
Take your garbage and I stuff it under two lids,

Like a chick to grab my **** with her two fists,
Not the ones that you can fit with your two fists.




Audio


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=139985

First verse was nice but the second was insane! I checked out the audio, production needs a little work but your flow was smooth and your mic presences was decent. Work on your breathing sounds like you ran outta breath a few times. Feeling this one though, no doubt!

theman080
01-15-06, 06:12 PM
Second versewas crazy, haven't listened to the audio yet but I probably will in a few days. Good ****.

Midnite
01-16-06, 08:41 AM
the first verse was ok, seemed like a warm up....but that second verse was niceness, looked like you got your legs under you and started hittin

my speakers are in the process of being fixed, but Ima listen to the audio soon

W.I.Z.E.
01-30-06, 12:39 PM
Thanks. I like the second verse too. Like the first verse as well but I see what you guys are saying.

Invisible Vision
02-09-06, 12:05 AM
did that collabo ever come together.....


only askin cuz you mentioned it

Propaganda
02-09-06, 06:11 PM
lol@con the cock

ya, that 2nd verse was nice for real though.

Listen
02-10-06, 08:54 PM
Hello my friend. How is you.

Beat ain't right to me, could just be my production nose spot. This is a pretty dope song though, and you don't sound as bad as you usually do, quality-wize.

You still got some spots that slur a bit and get a little breathy, but im feeling the verses. Good hearing somehting from you again kid. Lets get at a collab again real soon.

Plus, I finally posted an audio joint. Feel free to peep.

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