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homeyjay
01-12-06, 06:45 PM
i guess i would miss it if it ever stopped
sounds of the city like sirens and gunshots
but i do think i could live without the smells
the excreted stairwells and don't touch the rails
you can take the elevator but at your own risk
to a brother who's gotta have it crime's hard to resist
there is no grass just glass dispersed over concrete
see the naked backboards missing swings and poles
playgrounds used to be a haven for young lost souls
those who now frequent it have atrocious motives
better not venture over if you have nothing to give
it is commonplace for you to be an eyewitness to crime
or to step over a body in the halls that is dead or dying
it seems that young sisters are delivering starting fives
just victims of the system no matter how hard they try
the old folks stay inside liked they are under house arrest
and how long the crack man's out is anybody's guess
it is sad to have to live like a prisoner in your own home
looking out at the youth and wondering what went wrong
suddenly all of the stores are gone and can you imagine that
of all the ones that are still in the hood none are run by blacks
it's nothing to see a condum,crackbag even a pair of dirty draws
couple doin' the nasty in the park and we walk by without a pause
i guess when you are exposed to so much you become immune
still standing when the smoke clears then nothing can bust your balloon

skatethewall
01-31-06, 10:26 PM
here's the deal, i'm just a simple poet, but your writing has a great rhythm, and a unique palpable soul. all i'm sayin is flattery is not the goal, but it does my heart good to read work with so much heart and voice.

homeyjay
02-01-06, 11:26 AM
here's the deal, i'm just a simple poet, but your writing has a great rhythm, and a unique palpable soul. all i'm sayin is flattery is not the goal, but it does my heart good to read work with so much heart and voice.

Aww schucks, Thanks Skater!! - I appreciate your comments, but when I first started out this set. It was your encouragement and support that kept a brother going so I owe you big time and as always it is good to hear from you. fan and friend hj.

Black N Proud
02-02-06, 01:32 AM
Very nice work!!! Keep up the good work! :yes: