View Full Version : #1Rapper vs faceillini (STORY BATTLE RAPS)
#1rapper
01-09-06, 03:28 PM
aiigh face saw your post and we can do this shyt, i'll drop soon, try and respond within the next week at least
faceillini
01-09-06, 09:57 PM
aiigh face saw your post and we can do this shyt, i'll drop soon, try and respond within the next week at least
its a good thing I checked here..iight no doubt
respect
faceillini
01-10-06, 12:57 PM
How do I get into predicaments like this
on the floor with a chick hiding from her man cause he's pissed
that I piped his b!tch, she gives a kiss, I laugh then think sh!t
I left the baby glock and the extra cartridge
locked in my cars glove compartment
thinking to myself, "yeah real smart kid."
then we hear something, "i think dudes car just started
we give a look, then I get up to check if the coast was clear
I open up the door, homie must of vamoosed cause he wasn't there
i feel her stare, i return the look with a glare
damn this chick has got to be the flyest
with the longest lashes on her eyelids
i feel her lust thru the silence
time stands still quites
honey spots a roach nearly hidden in my ashtray, she lights it
we both take a pull to calm our excitement
puffin' on some buddha to gain some enlightment
that Arizona's harsh i'm parched
I asked, "Are you thirsty?"
as i walk to the fridge the time said it was 1:30, it's still early
i thought as I got her a refreshment, as ice cold beverage,
guzzled some of the tea then popped in a breathment
we started talkin' for a minute, but when your high
your sense of time starts to diminish cause it was like 3:42 when we finished
the aroma in the air was egyptian musk incense
i was about to ask a question when she jumped on me before i finished my sentence
i'll finish where I left off in Act two starting with the next paragraph indented
#1rapper
01-11-06, 08:24 PM
Sittin on my porch flippin through the source, while rehearsing my versus
it was like "..Actin rude as fuqk wen ur music sucks."
then i saw the moving truck hmmmm,
i guess someone bought that beat up shack, Put my feet up to relax
and then i saw a lady with a baby, and a boy my age, why wave?
This guys stays looking like the crooked type that can get ur side sprayed
The next day im at me and my boys local spot for smoking pot,
and i notice a bogus
Looking kat, that is obviously shook for cash,
I check agan and tell my wreckless friends
that this bummy kat bought the crummy shack next to mine
Then this guy steps and sighs and stands next to me like hes next in line
Preplexed and sly, he introduces himself in a ghetto fashion
says hes used to metal clashing
Me and my friends exchande looks at this strange crook
while were tryin to refrain hooks
and ask where hes from suddenly he gets dumb
and says "uhhhh Yeah i come stompin from Compton."
Damn this b!tch is corny and wack im ready to storm an attack,
then one of my boys start to rap
Then all talking ceases, we each spit, beast shyt,
then all of us stop and this guy starts to drop
hes's like.. " katz call me face, always strapped with a gat to my waist,
the chrome can start blastin the place."
Alright this guy can spit and knows shyt about striving clicks and driving clipz
So i'll reside with this, we ask if he wants to get down with us ,
pound and bust and clown we must
He announces his trust, Hes now one of us
............................
faceillini
01-11-06, 09:26 PM
Tongues twirling and touching mixed with a little bit of suction
Face Mr. mischivous, damn it feels great playing with her cliterous
making her wet like a nose runny, smelt my fingers on the sly to my surprise
her sccent was sweeter than rosey honey
she slipped out of her dress, picture a model perfect fit
my d!kk certainly stiff, both of us undressing so quick
underneath the sheets, she's on top and I'm caressing her hips
giving her neck tender kisses and licks sucking the tender end of her lips
the scent of her skin got me repenting my sin before I begin
her neck is so thin, butt so big like a ballerina Trina
her battle areana's meaner, I crossed her field put it in
hot damn she's a screamer! My mind's lost you can't find me
This Puerto Rican Mamî reminds me
of Halle Berry with cherry lip gloss
her outfit alone couldn't guess what the sh!t cost
she gives me the cold shoulder with her neck laced with chipped frost
Told her to turn her ass backwards and I ain't talking about Kriss Kross
then I hear a car horn honk and a motor switch off
probably nothing but my instincts tell me different
with out missing a stroke my ears perk up and I listen
someone enters the crib and I think they're in the kitchen
my brow starts to glisten sex plus nervous sweat makes me wet like a n!gga gettting christened
the danger level escalates when I hear someone load a clip in
stayed tune for Act three to see the pulp of my fiction
#1rapper
01-11-06, 11:18 PM
Days pass and i blaze grass at faces place
In his house next to his model poster is a brown holster
Were becomin closer,
We got shyt in common, cocked clipz and rhymin, block tricks and diamonds
and while im sittin there, i sit and stare, at his kitchen wear,
and see plastic shyt, this guys says hes blastin clipz and clashin clicks
to get his shyt, so why would a cardboard cup ever pass his lipz?,
hmmm its prolly nothing maybe he got robbed or somethin,
fuqk it, he aint frontin, he prolly buckin
Damn, whered face go? im in place so , i wait for him to comeback,
then through the sun cracks i see a notebook
labeled faces'z fabels of dumbraps
I pick it up and examine it, its jamed with bits of random spits
thrown together like tandrom fits
While throwin it back down to the ground i see a line that reads.
" katz call me face, always strapped with a gat my waist,
the chrome can start blastin the place."
Didn't he say that rhyme to me??
I scope and find the dopest rhymes he wrote these times
all of which were recited supposely from the top of his dome,
so is he really poppin the chrome, or is he locked in his home,
writing raps to pass as spitz, i feel gassed and b!tched,
i stand up to blast his shyt
then he walks in coughing, i ask whats up with his falsified spits,
he sees his book and says that unauthorized shyt
Well it crossed my eye bytch,
so start the explanations before your neck be breaking,
bytch your respect is taken
He says he cant freestyle so he needs miles of writing time
and finds his shine when he recites his lines
This aint right in my mind.
Damn is he fake or not will he wake a plot to have me snaked and shot
Everyone else is like face is hot, fuqk man,
whatever i'll look past this weak shyt your tweaked with, stop freaking
It wont hit the streets, but yo clip ya heat cuz we got bytches to beat,
for snitching our streets full of rifts of police
He pauses and looks, i can tell dawg is juz shook,
i ask you comin or not, he like i dont be gunning alot
or even run from the cops,
what the fuqk?? um fuqk it stay put, after i spray crooks, i'll be back to chill
time to practice kills, damn this guys wack for real,
ima have this bastard killed
.................................................
faceillini
01-14-06, 08:56 PM
The door opens up, fukk just when I catch a nut
at least I'm first to bust, I crushed mamî chula and made her cum without the foreplay
but she didn't notice the big booty chick standing in the center of the doorway
_i'm in heaven staring at this lightskinned hottie with a shottie
who kinda reminds me of a lighter version of buffie the body
confused she says, " I thought I left you in the Embassy lobby,
how the fukk you know where I live ?"
then she takes the small sawed off and jams it in the rightside of my ribs
Chula screams, " Damn Jessica chill why the hell are you buggin'?
I met this n!gg@ tonight when YOU were supposed to meet me to go clubbin'"
Jess yells back, " Somethings going on and this n!gg@ better explain,
keep it simple and plain before you have something more to clean than cum stains.."
I'm relatively calm and still packin' wood under the thin covers
then it dawned on me and I say, "I think you must of met my twin brother.."
They look each other in the eye, "TWIN BROTHER?" they replied
then Jess sits on the bed to my left side
I explain the situation and light up a thick joint
She tells me how she met my brother at a strip joint
how he paid for a hit, how theman died from brains from a chick
how she hid the blade in her lips then just one graze of her kiss
he was made to a b!tch, the sh!t was sick
looking at her she had a dangerous glow,
then she goes on how she almost got ran of the road
by some dude in an '89 Camry, with gold teeth clutchin black panites
he was crying and driving reckless with a fake silver plated necklace
that had #1 rapper hangin' from it,
then me and Chula burst out laughing clutching our stomachs
Jess rolls off the bed and hits the floor, laughing she says, " what's so funny?"
Giggling, Chula replies with tears in her eyes, " that was my Ex you nearly hit you dummy!"
"You mean that stupid n!gga you kept creepin on
and couldn't get the message that he was getting cheated on?"
We all laughed and chatted for like three hours,
time flew but I had to go but first I need a clean shower
then Mamî asked, " Do you mind if I join you?"
she put her hand on my c0ck then Jess put her hand on my groin too...
theman080
01-22-06, 10:37 PM
nice drops
#1rapper
01-22-06, 10:39 PM
my bad, aol's been ****ed up big time, props on ur drop, and im definetly gonna get around to finishing this shyt up
Sunny Abacha
01-23-06, 05:01 AM
yup...feeling these story raps
EyesLoSE14
01-23-06, 05:03 AM
Oi dont listen to that fool he dont know sh!t
Whats good nigs?
theman080
01-23-06, 02:50 PM
eyeslose and sunny abacha
or eyeslose is sunny abacha
idk
#1rapper
01-24-06, 07:38 PM
my bad on makin u wait face, let me do this....
My click was surpised when i told em the bytch was juz lyin
Felt conflicted when trying to be descriptive and prime
But i clued them in wondered what should we do with this
Bruise his ribs, remove his shyt, cruise to his crib and shoot at his kids?
Nah his ass aint worth the time so he rehearses his lines
and don't be squirting the nine, so why hurt this kids prime
But we can't let it slide, so we drive
To his crib and we knew this bytch wouldn't do any stupid shyt
He let us in, made some brief chat
After his weak crap we tole em he reaks rat
Saw through his discreet act
face broke down and started pouting and shyt
Saying he always wanted to be down with a click
You know be around with the shyt, i'm like are you clownin me kid?
he said the only beef he no is when he's pounding his dyck
how he never was profound with his hits
Damn, beat em down or juz let em be?
Regretfully, we didn't throw hooks
at this slow shook pretend foe crook, but me and bros looked
and decided he could run our errands
be best to make son embarassed
So face will forever be hoping he crisp
doper then shyt, maybe actually start groping them clipz
But for now he's juz shopping off my grocery list
faceillini
01-28-06, 07:45 PM
volume 1 of the story raps is done..we need some critiques maybe a DVD behind the scenes of the motivation behind it all...props to theman080 and #1rapper for handling theire business...respect ya'll
ILL_FAM
10-23-07, 04:15 AM
lol yeah i like it boys took me awhile to read the ****....keep at it
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