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[Irish-dipstick]

short rhyme.


put in the lyrics follow a funky beat and then kik it/ flip sh!t and make a composed piece in the gangsta grind position i was spittin// i put tha clip in a load tha gun to tha max/ i come to u now wit tha beef and am reveling all da facts//... am backed to tha walk like an animal/ i dont give a fcuk, to survive i'll become a canibal unleash sh!t like hanabal// am a bit mad in the head/ bullet of lead into soft tissue am dead now slay tha feds// i measure that coke and count tha doe..i move wit a murderous flow/ don't **** around cause 1...2...3 and away u'll blow...i aint got time but now its time to go// now on a different page i can be a lover/ but fcuk it am a fighter but all i want is to fcuk her...be ur b!tches best friend then behind ur back i stuck her/ i hit that hard even got ur life in a blur// u see i can be very nice/ but am still hot hotter than israllie spice/ u gave me tha whole cake but baby all i wanted was a slice.

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[Irish-dipstick]

i rock da rock u to shook to look/ am a creeper like synper on a scope i pop u and bodycount i scoop...play illmatic back to back loop to loop// it was written before my existants/ that i'd rap and wrap maybe but leave life wit out assistants// am dope to drop tha rope and let u climb/ am like a frienly mutherfuker but i'll kill u or slap the blind// i don't are wat i do i don't care to impress/ i love the rhymes and lyrics i live them they give me a gateway to express// this is straight of da dome not stop...copped...popped and shopped/ u spillin blood on da floor i was da cause but itz ur fault now u mop it...and it'll be over if u stop snitch sohh stop it// i only care if a dude is close to me/ otherwise i couldn't careless look for hommies only and fam otherwise death was meant to be..// look am backed up and u smacked out/ am talkin sh!t but plz respond if u know wat am talkin bout.

[Irish-dipstick]

come on peeps leave some mutherfukin comments