Untitled....Whoa....Speechless

[sexydeltagirl]

It's over.... but my body is still moving....
I am trimbling all over the feeling of persistant yearning still exist....
You took my body on a ride through so many emotions....
You started off by teasing me, making me anxious, a little heated cause you wouldn't release from my misery....
You allowed me to make you my personal museum, every part of your body was met with oooohhhh and ahhhhh and I touched you in places that once was covered by your clothes...
I wasn't shy about it, I have wanted you for some time...
Your sweet gestures and pleasant conversations had me....
Checking for you....
Waiting for you....unlike the other way around...
You were my prey....
Everytime you would speak my name, it would spark something in me so when you whispered it this time, it did nothing but entice me....
Kept me under your spell as I unbuttoned your shirt and slipped you out your white T...
I caressed you with sweet touches and tried to memorize your body....
I watched you move when I kissed you here, there and everywhere...
Where you moaned the most that's where I placed my mouth...

To be continued....
There will not be a continuation of this poem......

[sexydeltagirl]

and it ends....

[Irish-dipstick]

the untitled title speaks for itzself this sh!t is unbeliveable.

but i hope u ok lo.

poetz got this i could learn alot up in this joint.

[sexydeltagirl]

the untitled title speaks for itzself this sh!t is unbeliveable.

but i hope u ok lo.

poetz got this i could learn alot up in this joint.

I'm good babe....I got writers block I couldn't think of the next line...something else will come to be and I might pick it back up..... :yes:

I'm glad you liked it....don't be a stranger, drop some lines....
;)

[Black N Proud]

It's over.... but my body is still moving....
I am trimbling all over the feeling of persistant yearning still exist....
You took my body on a ride through so many emotions....
You started off by teasing me, making me anxious, a little heated cause you wouldn't release from my misery....
You allowed me to make you my personal museum, every part of your body was met with oooohhhh and ahhhhh and I touched you in places that once was covered by your clothes...
I wasn't shy about it, I have wanted you for some time...
Your sweet gestures and pleasant conversations had me....
Checking for you....
Waiting for you....unlike the other way around...
You were my prey....
Everytime you would speak my name, it would spark something in me so when you whispered it this time, it did nothing but entice me....
Kept me under your spell as I unbuttoned your shirt and slipped you out your white T...
I caressed you with sweet touches and tried to memorize your body....
I watched you move when I kissed you here, there and everywhere...
Where you moaned the most that's where I placed my mouth...

To be continued....
There will not be a continuation of this poem......
Once again, this is some really creative/thought-provokin' work!!! Your work always impresses and amazes me... You make the words stand out like 3D... And again, the picture that you paint is so vivid! :yes:

Very nice work! Keep up da good writin'!! :yes:

[sexydeltagirl]

Once again, this is some really creative/thought-provokin' work!!! Your work always impresses and amazes me... You make the words stand out like 3D... And again, the picture that you paint is so vivid! :yes:

Very nice work! Keep up da good writin'!! :yes:

..... :blush: I really blush when I read that you like my work...really it makes me feel good....to know that you enjoy it...

Thanks.... ;) and I'll def. keep writing, hoping you will keep reading...

[Black N Proud]

..... :blush: I really blush when I read that you like my work...really it makes me feel good....to know that you enjoy it...

Thanks.... ;) and I'll def. keep writing, hoping you wil keep reading...
Well, I'm happy to hear and know that my readin'/enjoyin' your work brings a smile/blush to ya face... :blush:

Defintely, keep writing, cause I will keep reading!!! :yes: :blush: