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slave2aplaya
12-27-05, 11:10 PM
Now Im feeling him
slipping through my fingers
too far gone
its been too long
no amount of happiness or wealth
can return lost health
as the scars
are too deeply engraved
even I know now
its too late to be saved
powerless
helplessness
an unshakable feeling
all along I've been dreaming
of out of reach solutions
with no resolutions
fear of daily executions
the sentance of his life
of trouble and strife...

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slave2aplaya
01-24-06, 10:25 PM
...as he's still missin'
I.miss.him
I wonder...ponder where he is
am I allowed to miss his kiss...?

Black N Proud
01-24-06, 11:35 PM
Wow! This is some really nice work, very original!!! Keep up the good work! :yes: