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sexydeltagirl
12-26-05, 07:42 PM
I listen to the situations you are going through...
You seem reluctant to talk about them but my approachable demeanor and cool attitude helps you feel comfortable enough to let it flow...
You speak of uncertainty a lack of a third eye....
One that could allow you to see into the future cause at the moment it seems cloudy....
You pause inbetween sentences to let out a sigh...
I know it gets hard sometimes but ....
Keep Trying....
Don't give up just yet cause the game has just begun...
When you have these feelings, those feelings of doubt....
I wanna do all I can to make sure that my ears and heart are always listening and when that's not enough....
Let my spirit guide you through....
Allow the sun that shines on you each morning shield you with courage....
Let it caress your face in place of my hand....
Allow the air that you breathe fill your chest with an inhale of confidence....
Stand tall and walk proud you are indeed the King of this concrete jungle...
Let the water that you drink replinish your limbs as you make moves throughout the day....
And at night let them rain upon your muscles and wash away fatigue....
Keep Trying....
And I promise you the more you put into this world the more you will get out of it....

Black N Proud
12-27-05, 12:21 AM
I listen to the situations you are going through...
You seem reluctant to talk about them but my approachable demeanor and cool attitude helps you feel comfortable enough to let it flow...
You speak of uncertainty a lack of a third eye....
One that could allow you to see into the future cause at the moment it seems cloudy....
You pause inbetween sentences to let out a sigh...
I know it gets hard sometimes but ....
Keep Trying....
Don't give up just yet cause the game has just begun...
When you have these feelings, those feelings of doubt....
I wanna do all I can to make sure that my ears and heart are always listening and when that's not enough....
Let my spirit guide you through....
Allow the sun that shines on you each morning shield you with courage....
Let it caress your face in place of my hand....
Allow the air that you breathe fill your chest with an inhale of confidence....
Stand tall and walk proud you are indeed the King of this concrete jungle...
Let the water that you drink replinish your limbs as you make moves throughout the day....
And at night let them rain upon your muscles and wash away fatigue....
Keep Trying....
And I promise you the more you put into this world the more you will get out of it....
Damn, this poem got me speechless. This is some of the best work I have ever read before!!! The words stand out so clear to me, and I can truly say I am speechles... Your work just keeps gettin' better and better! You truly have a with words, puttin them together and bringin' a whole NEW meanin' to writing... Keep up the GROUNDBREAKIN' work!!!! :blush:

sexydeltagirl
01-02-06, 10:34 AM
Thanks so, so much, I am glad you liked it...... :)
And thanks for the compliments 2.... :blush: