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sexydeltagirl
12-21-05, 10:55 PM
Time has past and the moment is near...
As I step out of your car I am taking our memories with me....
All of the sweet gestures of loves rapture....
A captured heart in your possession for many months...
I was a passenger on this journey not quite knowing the way....
Sometimes I felt a little uneasy but you would always take my hand and guide me....
The moment is here now...
This is the end....
Where do I go from here, where will life take me...
I'm faced with the fear of being the pawn in someones game of chess...
I reject other mens advances...
Second chances of making this work have vanished..
It's no more trying to work it out, trying to make it right...
The engine is running, my heart is breaking...
It's so cold in here my temp. is falling...
You hand me the picture of us together and whisper....
This is the end......

Black N Proud
12-21-05, 11:33 PM
Time has past and the moment is near...
As I step out of your car I am taking our memories with me....
All of the sweet gestures of loves rapture....
A captured heart in your possession for many months...
I was a passenger on this journey not quite knowing the way....
Sometimes I felt a little uneasy but you would always take my hand and guide me....
The moment is here now...
This is the end....
Where do I go from here, where will life take me...
I'm faced with the fear of being the pawn in someones game of chess...
I reject other mens advances...
Second chances of making this work have vanished..
It's no more trying to work it out, trying to make it right...
The engine is running, my heart is breaking...
It's so cold in here my temp. is falling...
You hand me the picture of us together and whisper....
This is the end......
Damn, now this is really deep!! The way you use your words and describe the feelings that you are having is unbelievable... Although this is a sad, dark poem it still displays your talent!

Keep up the good work!!!

sexydeltagirl
12-22-05, 04:45 PM
Thanks so much....I really appreciate your feedback and likeness of my work..

I really do....