Tomorrow..

[Absolut da poet]

Heaven
By Absolut

You're like the morning the way you rise in my eyes
...how your love spontaneously combines and brings new life in my days...
I kiss the sun raise on the horizon of your face until your smile is the fresh air I can taste...
Until...
Your skin...soft as the wind embraces my space
I'm frozen in place..
Starin in the air at the way your hair is draped
The way the clouds are shaped like..
Water falls...over me warm and safe..

I'm feelin your heart rate..
Tappin at the ceiling of my chest plate like...
Rain to my vest..you infiltrate my cardiac to a rest
When I'm in your presence you..
Handcuff my breathes by your very essence
Til I'm standin at attention in suspension pledging
Alliegance to your state...
only by the love that we make..

I'm lonely by the seconds at wake..
The time is at hand but...minutes escape..
And...that's why I wanna share hours..
Beds & showers wraped around you like the pedals on flowers and we pollinate...
Coming together I want our love to... spring as it blooms..
til we're covered in June..be as it May..
Til we celebrate the fall in December...push our clocks back to say..
I Love You in everyway..
I Wanna Love you Tomorrow and reminisce Today..
I'll sleep forever cause I want you to stay..
My dream girl..always forever and a day in my world..
Mentally...Physically..and..Spiritually
til my thoughts are touched by your sole density
Flooded by your whole entity I'm....
lost adrfit in a sea of wishes your star kisses me if this is...destiny...you'll lead me home
But I fear my subconscience has the best of me and I'm all alone..
You're all I've known..
So I hope this doesn't become...strange..
Cause it seems like we'll lose track if I turn the page and...
I'm so afraid of this end..
So I hope you'll understand if my words descend you can still hear my heart penned...
Even if I'm not...
....
...
...
Just know there's love in the silence should the beat stop...
Cause you're the reason it began..
And in this book of life you'll be seein me again..
..eternally...
...
Cause You're My Heaven.

~ vodka


Blast-for-me
I'm coming...


:king:

[sexydeltagirl]

Nice, mayne.....your writing has that something, I can't put my finger on it...but it has something that leaves you full...

I love these line especially....

I'm feelin your heart rate..
Tappin at the ceiling of my chest plate like...
Rain to my vest..you infiltrate my cardiac to a rest
When I'm in your presence you..
Handcuff my breathes by your very essence
Til I'm standin at attention in suspension pledging
Alliegance to your state...
only by the love that we make..

Dopeness, keep them coming....

[byrdman84]

good stuff im impressed :yes:

[erabfb25]

Vary nice, mad props for this one. i liked how you used your words.

[~Infinee Tee~]

Still dope... this one gave me a sense of Déja vu.. one of the reasons I kept comin' to this site was to read you n Rukus' pieces.. I remain a fan absolut.. much respect.

~one~

[Absolut da poet]

Still dope... this one gave me a sense of Déja vu.. one of the reasons I kept comin' to this site was to read you n Rukus' pieces.. I remain a fan absolut.. much respect.

~one~

...thankyou....

Yeah Ruk is one of my favorite writers...
...
His style reminded me of the way I used to write...(before I started writing for audio..)

Anyway..
Whenever I saw one of his joints go up in here it made me wanna drop something...

I see ya'll holding it down in here now...so I wanted to swing thru...and kinda feed off the energy.

[Xplicit Lyric™]

Simply Beautiful. I loved it.


~1

[TRIPLE THREAT]

I like it....It kinda has a chinese, house of flying dagger, anime type thing....flowers turning to people when the kiss type jump off

[TRIPLE THREAT]

Simply Beautiful. I loved it.


~1

you are beautiful. I simply love it. The one...picture that I saw... :blush:

[Absolut da poet]

you are beautiful. I simply love it. The one...picture that I saw... :blush:

LoL....YES She Is !!!

I'd have tons of poetry flyin for her...

[ElseWhere]

Heaven
By Absolut

You're like the morning the way you rise in my eyes
...how your love spontaneously combines and brings new life in my days...
I kiss the sun raise on the horizon of your face until your smile is the fresh air I can taste...
Until...
Your skin...soft as the wind embraces my space
I'm frozen in place..
Starin in the air at the way your hair is draped
The way the clouds are shaped like..
Water falls...over me warm and safe..

I'm feelin your heart rate..
Tappin at the ceiling of my chest plate like...
Rain to my vest..you infiltrate my cardiac to a rest
When I'm in your presence you..
Handcuff my breathes by your very essence
Til I'm standin at attention in suspension pledging
Alliegance to your state...
only by the love that we make..

I'm lonely by the seconds at wake..
The time is at hand but...minutes escape..
And...that's why I wanna share hours..
Beds & showers wraped around you like the pedals on flowers and we pollinate...
Coming together I want our love to... spring as it blooms..
til we're covered in June..be as it May..
Til we celebrate the fall in December...push our clocks back to say..
I Love You in everyway..
I Wanna Love you Tomorrow and reminisce Today..
I'll sleep forever cause I want you to stay..
My dream girl..always forever and a day in my world..
Mentally...Physically..and..Spiritually
til my thoughts are touched by your sole density
Flooded by your whole entity I'm....
lost adrfit in a sea of wishes your star kisses me if this is...destiny...you'll lead me home
But I fear my subconscience has the best of me and I'm all alone..
You're all I've known..
So I hope this doesn't become...strange..
Cause it seems like we'll lose track if I turn the page and...
I'm so afraid of this end..
So I hope you'll understand if my words descend you can still hear my heart penned...
Even if I'm not...
....
...
...
Just know there's love in the silence should the beat stop...
Cause you're the reason it began..
And in this book of life you'll be seein me again..
..eternally...
...
Cause You're My Heaven.

~ vodka


Blast-for-me
I'm coming...


:king:






^--real talk. I was listening to Beanie Sigel -feel it in the air (instrumental)
and it fit like a puzzle.