Untitled...Eyes

[sexydeltagirl]

Without words they tell the truth when my mouth speaks different....
I try to hide them but I can't cause without them I am misguided...They keep me away from those whos soul they expose to be unkind...They filter out the shallowness of man but keeps those who are genuine.....
They told me to take my time with you....
I'm forced to formulate words to translate the language they speak....you ask me why it seems like a fire is burning within them...I wish I could tell you but right now is 2 soon...
Take your time with me....
When I look at you I try my best to keep them still... but they flicker with every exchange...we create visual harmony....
Your body takes them on a dance, not knowing where to concentrate...
They start with your head and admire the jewel it holds...They wonder what your are thinking... you are quiet as we lay together but I know many thoughts of our journey together are at the forefront I'm sure....
One day at a time baby...your questions are always so deep and complex....

They move from your stare to your lips as they watch the words you speak...
To your chest, watching as your shirt rises and falls...your breathing in my scent....To the midsection of your pants, they stop there for a minute....

mmmmmmm....Then they turn away cause the brain is telling them not to create a scene...

They continue to trace your body...on your timbs they land....from your timbs to the ground I ease them up and start all over again....
They are not easily distracted when they are around you, they find something about you fascinating... your presence captivating, You fill them with fluid sometimes but not to bring on misery's lullaby but cries of joy cause the wool has been lifted from them...

They are looking at love?

[Black N Proud]

Without words they tell the truth when my mouth speaks different....
I try to hide them but I can't cause without them I am misguided...They keep me away from those whos soul they expose to be unkind...They filter out the shallowness of man but keeps those who are genuine.....
They told me to take my time with you....
I'm forced to formulate words to translate the language they speak....you ask me why it seems like a fire is burning within them...I wish I could tell you but right now is 2 soon...
Take your time with me....
When I look at you I try my best to keep them still... but they flicker with every exchange...we create visual harmony....
Your body takes them on a dance, not knowing where to concentrate...
They start with your head and admire the jewel it holds...They wonder what your are thinking... you are quiet as we lay together but I know many thoughts of our journey together are at the forefront I'm sure....
One day at a time baby...your questions are always so deep and complex....

They move from your stare to your lips as they watch the words you speak...
To your chest, watching as your shirt rises and falls...your breathing in my scent....To the midsection of your pants, they stop there for a minute....

mmmmmmm....Then they turn away cause the brain is telling them not to create a scene...

They continue to trace your body... to on your timbs they land....from your timbs to the ground I ease them up and start all over again....
They are not easily distracted when they are around you, they find something about you fascinating... your presence captivating, You fill them with fluid sometimes but not to bring on misery's lullaby but cries of joy cause the wool has been lifted from them...

They are looking at love?
Nice!!! This is more than just a poem, it's a work of art!!! You did a really nice job on this. Once again, the way you paint pictures with words is amazing! Without any music, this poem travels to the rhythm and flow of it's own! It's like nothin' I have ever read before... And again, I'm speechless! :blush:

Keep writing!!!

[sexydeltagirl]

Nice!!! This is more than just a poem, it's a work of art!!! You did a really nice job on this. Once again, the way you paint pictures with words is amazing! Without any music, this poem travels to the rhythm and flow of it's own! It's like nothin' I have ever read before... And again, I'm speechless! :blush:

Keep writing!!!

Thanks so much, for this feedback I am glad that you like my work....This means more to me than you may know....

Thanks so much, really thanks.... :blush:

[Black N Proud]

Thanks so much, for this feedback I am glad that you like my work....This means more to me than you may know....

Thanks so much, really thanks.... :blush:
Yeah, your welcome... Reading your work has helped me to begin writing again, and I appreciate that! So, thank you again for the inspiration!!! :blush:

[erabfb25]

wow this is really good. I could never come of with the that you do. I love it

[sexydeltagirl]

wow this is really good. I could never come of with the that you do. I love it

Thanks for the kinds words, they are def. appreciated.... :O

[Dmac]

damn.....i dnt kno wut 2 say....dat was gud all i can think dat was gud

[sexydeltagirl]

damn.....i dnt kno wut 2 say....dat was gud all i can think dat was gud

I'm glad you liked it....I appreciate your feedback.... ;)

[Irish-dipstick]

i only like some poetry to be honest and out of all of them this is a touchin but good piece.

props.

[sexydeltagirl]

i only like some poetry to be honest and out of all of them this is a touchin but good piece.

props.

Thanks babe, I'm glad you liked it....When you gonna drop something...I will be waiting.... :)

[TRIPLE THREAT]

Without words they tell the truth when my mouth speaks different....
I try to hide them but I can't cause without them I am misguided...They keep me away from those whos soul they expose to be unkind...They filter out the shallowness of man but keeps those who are genuine.....
They told me to take my time with you....
I'm forced to formulate words to translate the language they speak....you ask me why it seems like a fire is burning within them...I wish I could tell you but right now is 2 soon...
Take your time with me....
When I look at you I try my best to keep them still... but they flicker with every exchange...we create visual harmony....
Your body takes them on a dance, not knowing where to concentrate...
They start with your head and admire the jewel it holds...They wonder what your are thinking... you are quiet as we lay together but I know many thoughts of our journey together are at the forefront I'm sure....
One day at a time baby...your questions are always so deep and complex....


They are looking at love?

I like it...Loving the way poets you dig under the words

lets see....outta 3 ...you get two AKs and a 9 :bustback: :bustback: :violent: