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homeyjay
12-05-05, 06:06 PM
man i can't stand these back seat drivers
somebody done died and made them macgyver's
they're the big success we the rest are failures
always pissin' down on us with their genitalia's
showin', blowin' putting their stench in the wind
"don't do us do your hair" now let me tell ya' again
man makes a brother want to do something illegal
like deflating their damn ego's with a sewing needle
hey you're not wearing a crown nor carrying a scepter
we really don't give a damn if you haven't felt the
pieces being put out by us novices on this site
least of my concerns are the bourgeois on the right
just check their usenames it proclaims the alter ego
they think they're the shyt or they're just short of regal
so to the poetry corner fam keep on doing what you do
always keep it real for we love it when it's a hundred proof
show some love to your fellow writers u get it so give it back
don't be like the crabs in the trap pullin' on a brother's nut sack
and to the select few who feel this site is or was close to dead
"if we want any shyt out of you we'll just squeeze your heads"
some of us have the guts to get in the game clap or step back

slave2aplaya
12-06-05, 11:21 PM
...nice topic...lol... Im feeling it still , nice 2 see some real relevance, I felt the flow too, nice rhyme scheme, worked well!

skatethewall
12-08-05, 09:20 PM
HJ I love your sense of humor, you always make me lol!!!! Your fan, skater. :thumbsup:

homeyjay
12-09-05, 12:17 PM
...nice topic...lol... Im feeling it still , nice 2 see some real relevance, I felt the flow too, nice rhyme scheme, worked well!

STP- thanks for reading and feeling a brother on this one. Ehh once in a while I like to try and knock the so called know it alls off their pedistal, although I might not succeed, I won't stop trying. My feeling is a little humbleness never hurt nobody, appreciate the comments too. peace hj

homeyjay
12-09-05, 12:28 PM
HJ I love your sense of humor, you always make me lol!!!! Your fan, skater. :thumbsup:

Hey Skater!, In my best eubonic slang I missded you man, yeah sometimes humor is the lubricant that best goes well with criticism when dealing with the great prententious. As always thanks for the holler! hj