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MOREOVER
12-01-05, 06:06 PM
I can’t explain everything of how I think or what I feel
But I can recognize one thing and that’s your
Sense-able appeal
Your sweet heart and kind soul is all that I know of you
You spread your love with out boundaries
And to me that’s something new
I live in search and you live to it’s full worth
You’ve found and possess the essence of this earth.
I get lost alone in my mind
Thinking….
You give directions
You’re patient with time
Shedding light on dark paths and softly speaking
Corrections the expressions of your kind
Your positive energy is abundant and shines bright
In our dark society you spark the light.
You’re the shinning symbol that makes my heavy heart nimble
I’m looking and you’re finding
Making me so simple
Confused about timing
I’m not enlightened
I think on two plains
While your carrying the flames
Leading away more doubts and any shame
I’d be a fool either way with so much to say
With so much to do that it can’t be done all in one day
Choices and chances has nothing to do with romances
Steady you live
Gracefully you move
I imagine you’re an angel who dances
Steady like a needle to a groove
You care with love
I have to dare myself to love
And now my only hope is to appreciate
What I have now
And that’s thanks to the essence above

homeyjay
12-01-05, 06:22 PM
M.O., all I got to say is, just let whip, whip it baby, whip it right, whip it baby , whip it aallnight. j/k sorry man, no this is a pretty good piece, rhyme scheme and all. I was going to ask you when were you gonna drop and here is it. very macadocious if you wiil, felt! hj - sorry 'bout the openin' but i just could not resist, don't take it personal brother just gettin' his joke on that's all

sexydeltagirl
12-01-05, 06:38 PM
Nice piece MO, props...

MOREOVER
12-01-05, 08:10 PM
thanks yall.. the both of yall motivated me to share these.. I wrote them earlier this year.

slave2aplaya
12-07-05, 12:19 AM
Felt it, felt it... gd stuff.
xXx

Black N Proud
12-11-05, 10:49 PM
Nice work!!!