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sexydeltagirl
11-30-05, 02:04 PM
Truly amazing you are in your skin...perfect in all dimensions a work of art...
You inspire me to aspire to greater things, your words are my comfort in times of pain...They coat me with the courage to withstand these dark days....
I read your words on a daily cause your voice I can not hear but only imagine with my mind how soothing to my ears it would be...
You are taking my mind on a journey with each sentence that I read...
I am sharping my skills for you cause a true opponent you seem to be....
Knowledge about wordly things more than just what is seen on the TV screen...You have a story to tell and I am patiently waiting to turn the next page....
You are beautiful without me seeing your face or knowing your name...
Beauty is all around you, I stand in awe of your word play....
People search for the real but some never find it, I believe that this is real cause your words provide it, (the real) that is...
I wonder how fast your fingers touch the keys...I know that your mind and fingers are not moving at the same speed...
You move me.....without physically touching me, I am in your embrace yet your arms I can not see...
Tap into my world and believe me I won't run dry, I will pour my words unto you as if I was the Nile... I will provide you with a wealth unfound for my respect of your work has no known numerical value...priceless
Keep typing baby......
You are...............

Just came to me....

When I read the words they become apart of me....
I don't mean for them 2 but they do...
And when I re-read them I can feel them....
Truth.....

sexydeltagirl
11-30-05, 04:24 PM
There is it and so it shall be.... :inlove:

Black N Proud
11-30-05, 11:09 PM
Truly amazing you are in your skin...perfect in all dimensions a work of art...
You inspire me to aspire to greater things, your words are my comfort in times of pain...They coat me with the courage to withstand these dark days....
I read your words on a daily cause your voice I can not hear but only imagine with my mind how soothing to my ears it would be...
You are taking my mind on a journey with each sentence that I read...
I am sharping my skills for you cause a true opponent you seem to be....
Knowledge about wordly things more than just what is seen on the TV screen...You have a story to tell and I am patiently waiting to turn the next page....
You are beautiful without me seeing your face or knowing your name...
Beauty is all around you, I stand in awe of your word play....
People search for the real but some never find it, I believe that this is real cause your words provide it, (the real) that is...
I wonder how fast your fingers touch the keys...I know that your mind and fingers are not moving at the same speed...
You move me.....without physically touching me, I am in your embrace yet your arms I can not see...
Tap into my world and believe me I won't run dry, I will pour my words unto you as if I was the Nile... I will provide you with a wealth unfound for my respect of your work has no known numerical value...priceless
Keep typing baby......
You are...............
Wow!!!! I am speechless. This is truly a work of art... Each word and sentence flows so perfectly behind the another. I can't even explain how deep/creative/original this is!!! It's (the poem) is really something that can't even be described... The words are so touching and have so much feeling to them!!! Once again, I am left speechless... :inlove:

sexydeltagirl
12-01-05, 12:38 AM
Wow!!!! I am speechless. This is truly a work of art... Each word and sentence flows so perfectly behind the another. I can't even explain how deep/creative/original this is!!! It's (the poem) is really something that can't even be described... The words are so touching and have so much feeling to them!!! Once again, I am left speechless... :inlove:

Thanks..... :blush:

Black N Proud
12-01-05, 03:38 AM
Thanks..... :blush:
You welcome... :blush: :hug:

MOREOVER
12-01-05, 12:37 PM
very nice homay!

sexydeltagirl
12-01-05, 12:39 PM
Thanks MO, I'm glad you liked it....

sexydeltagirl
12-01-05, 06:41 PM
I was moved again today.....but I am still sitting in my chair...

MOREOVER
12-01-05, 08:07 PM
I was moved again today.....but I am still sitting in my chair...


good luck..

sexydeltagirl
12-01-05, 09:32 PM
good luck..

The power of words MO....look a little deeper...

Supreme Napalm Bomb
12-03-05, 10:06 PM
Truly amazing you are in your skin...perfect in all dimensions a work of art...
You inspire me to aspire to greater things, your words are my comfort in times of pain...They coat me with the courage to withstand these dark days....
I read your words on a daily cause your voice I can not hear but only imagine with my mind how soothing to my ears it would be...
You are taking my mind on a journey with each sentence that I read...
I am sharping my skills for you cause a true opponent you seem to be....
Knowledge about wordly things more than just what is seen on the TV screen...You have a story to tell and I am patiently waiting to turn the next page....
You are beautiful without me seeing your face or knowing your name...
Beauty is all around you, I stand in awe of your word play....
People search for the real but some never find it, I believe that this is real cause your words provide it, (the real) that is...
I wonder how fast your fingers touch the keys...I know that your mind and fingers are not moving at the same speed...
You move me.....without physically touching me, I am in your embrace yet your arms I can not see...
Tap into my world and believe me I won't run dry, I will pour my words unto you as if I was the Nile... I will provide you with a wealth unfound for my respect of your work has no known numerical value...priceless
Keep typing baby......
You are...............



damn... that's ILL.. i eff's wit this a lot. Keep it up, i mean it.

sexydeltagirl
12-03-05, 10:29 PM
damn... that's ILL.. i eff's wit this a lot. Keep it up, i mean it.

Thanks for the feedback, I am glad you liked it.... ;)
I will def. keep the writing coming it is a part of me....

Absolut da poet
12-06-05, 03:01 PM
Truly amazing you are in your skin...perfect in all dimensions a work of art...
You inspire me to aspire to greater things, your words are my comfort in times of pain...They coat me with the courage to withstand these dark days....
I read your words on a daily cause your voice I can not hear but only imagine with my mind how soothing to my ears it would be...
You are taking my mind on a journey with each sentence that I read...
I am sharping my skills for you cause a true opponent you seem to be....
Knowledge about wordly things more than just what is seen on the TV screen...You have a story to tell and I am patiently waiting to turn the next page....
You are beautiful without me seeing your face or knowing your name...
Beauty is all around you, I stand in awe of your word play....
People search for the real but some never find it, I believe that this is real cause your words provide it, (the real) that is...
I wonder how fast your fingers touch the keys...I know that your mind and fingers are not moving at the same speed...
You move me.....without physically touching me, I am in your embrace yet your arms I can not see...
Tap into my world and believe me I won't run dry, I will pour my words unto you as if I was the Nile... I will provide you with a wealth unfound for my respect of your work has no known numerical value...priceless
Keep typing baby......
You are...............

nice Delta..

I call this Motivation...

I'm coming Back to the Corner..soon.


:king:

sexydeltagirl
12-06-05, 07:08 PM
nice Delta..

I call this Motivation...

I'm coming Back to the Corner..soon.


:king:

Thanks for love mayne, I really appreciate it...
And def. come back soon and post something.....I will be waiting ;)

slave2aplaya
12-07-05, 12:24 AM
Nice,nice,nice! I feel the way u write 2 the utmost...

'People search for the real but some never find it, I believe that this is real cause your words provide it, (the real) that is...
I wonder how fast your fingers touch the keys...I know that your mind and fingers are not moving at the same speed...
You move me.....without physically touching me, I am in your embrace yet your arms I can not see...'

Good stuff girl!
Keep on!
xXx

sexydeltagirl
12-07-05, 02:40 AM
Nice,nice,nice! I feel the way u write 2 the utmost...

'People search for the real but some never find it, I believe that this is real cause your words provide it, (the real) that is...
I wonder how fast your fingers touch the keys...I know that your mind and fingers are not moving at the same speed...
You move me.....without physically touching me, I am in your embrace yet your arms I can not see...'

Good stuff girl!
Keep on!
xXx

Thanks so much girlie...I enjoy reading your work as well.. :thumbsup:
Keep em coming....

sexydeltagirl
12-20-05, 12:45 PM
Just came to me....

When I read the words they become apart of me....
I don't mean for them 2 but they do...
And when I re-read them I can feel them....
Truth.....


:blush:

sexydeltagirl
03-28-06, 01:08 PM
....:)

ovb81
04-05-06, 01:03 PM
ima stop tellin you that poem was hot...cuz all of your stuff seem to be fuego...so if i put up a smile that mean i was here...which means i read it lol
:yes:

Irish-dipstick
04-05-06, 07:28 PM
*bling bling* :afro:


yo i just landed back on sohh hit the corner and im approached by something beautiful usual hot drop sexy D

very heart warming.

its all godd baby. :yes:

Dmac
04-23-06, 11:03 AM
listen dat was def poetry ryt dere sexy keep doing dat