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slave2aplaya
11-27-05, 12:03 AM
I was love
and he was hate
and they'd never
been so close
before
I was peace
and he was war
he stripped away my spirit
and then he left me raw
the way I fell for him
was sicker than anything
Ive ever felt before
I was silence
and he was noise
that ripped through me
and ruined my poise
I was happy
and he was sad
enough to take for
granted what he had
I was trapped
and he was free
he was the only one
with the ability
to make me believe
in his dishonesty
when I was selfless
he was selfish
he could obtain anything
but I could only wish...

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sexydeltagirl
11-28-05, 06:54 PM
Good work, keep them coming......
I have been here before....

homeyjay
11-29-05, 07:03 PM
nicely done, really shows both perspectives, if i had read this earlier i would have changed the title on mine, sorry.
goodin' hj

MOREOVER
12-01-05, 12:53 PM
yo, I really like it.. :thumbsup: