PDA

View Full Version : 11-23-2005...The Call


sexydeltagirl
11-23-05, 07:39 PM
So I'm sitting here debating if it's time yet...
To take my cordless phone in my hand and give in, stop toying over the idea of giving you a call...
I place your card in my hand rub my fingers over your first initial...
K...
I have never been this nervous before about reaching out to someone, but the attraction between us was so strong it could have caused a chemical imbalance in my brain...You took my mind off this crazy rat race I'm in and for little more than an hour you put it at a slower pace....
My fearless spirit has been replace....
So many thoughts are running through my head, What questions do I ask? What's your favorite book again?...Did you watch the news today? How you feel about OJ?
You see I wanna entice you with my mind, to keep your interest there, cause it's more woman to men and I want you to know I am not the average..
I want you to be reading the paper and watching the news, skipping through pages of bell hooks, or taking me back with some Richard Wright straight ole school....School me
Cause I am going to bring my A game baby, and I hope you do the same...
I am blusing now thinking back on our encounter, remembering when you walked me to my car and said "I can't wait to hear from you"....
So here I sit with the ball in my court...
I dial each number precise, and slowly....4.1.0.3.....
It rings once, then twice...
Hello Miss....
Damn, he really picked up, now I'm speechless.....

Red X
11-24-05, 01:37 AM
:blush:

slave2aplaya
11-26-05, 11:45 PM
I love the way u depict things so vividly for the reader, I love a poem that tells a story/has a real message an urs always seem to, so as long as u keep writing i will keep reading!
x

sexydeltagirl
11-28-05, 06:55 PM
Thanks for the feedback......
Greatly appreciated....

homeyjay
11-29-05, 07:07 PM
it's really nice to know the women have the same doubts and anxieties as we men, so i guess we're both human huh? j/k i like big time. hj

sexydeltagirl
11-29-05, 07:39 PM
it's really nice to know the women have the same doubts and anxieties as we men, so i guess we're both human huh? j/k i like big time. hj

Yeah we go through the same thing.... :blush:
Thanks for feedback, now you got me checking for your responses to my poems........ :whistle: