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Black N Proud
11-22-05, 02:09 AM
I love the way Rain sounds.
I love when Rain hits my nose and falls onto the grounds.
Rain, you speak so gentle yet so loud.
You grab my heart and soothe me with ease.
But yet and still, theres something about me that makes you drop to your knees.

Even though I seem catch you, you still seem to somehow fall.
Even when I'm not looking for you, you always seem to call.
And all though you make some days seem dark and gray,
There are still those days when you make everything "A" OK.

Rain, you are so special to me because you are priceless,
Without you in this world, me, along with others would be lifeless.
Sometimes you are only here for half of day.
This is when I usually ask myself, why won't she stay?
Whenever you come around, you make me smile and feel refreshed,
And when you talk and I feel your touch I know that I am blessed.
So Rain, next time you decide to up and go,
Just think about me, my words, style and flow....

sexydeltagirl
11-22-05, 02:14 AM
Nice, you are getting better every poem.... :blush:
"Rain, you speak so gentle yet so loud"...

Props,

Keep them coming.... :thumbsup:

Black N Proud
11-22-05, 02:17 AM
Nice, you are getting better every poem.... :blush:
"Rain, you speak so gentle yet so loud"...

Props,

Keep them coming.... :thumbsup:
Thanks!!! :blush:

Same with your work, it is really really creative/original work... Keep up the good work!!! :blush: