Tha beginin

[Dmac]

Dese r a few of ma beginings in poetry i jus need a lil criticism or suttin 2 go on bout dem iite.
C now ima ryt a lil differnt from most but its not cause i cant spell its jus ma internet talk

THE GUN
me im da original g
i bring a mixture of emotions
wen *****s look me in da eye
i c luv hate fear psychological mishaps
im da most prolific figure
yea im da man
i culd ride in a benz or a fucced up car
dependin where am at
but ridin u sure 2 find me
im an assassain
wit so many nick names and 1 of ems gat
im on so many sides u cant tell where am at
and even ma boys scared 2 b around me
dependin how i act
it aint ma fault i was born a cold hearted killa
1st and last in line i giv off nightmares 4 real ya
im a monsta yea im a gangstarr in a pocket
u pay and oil me well and u'll c how fast i knock out a sucka
im dat *****
errybody kno ma name
mor known in da streets dan nas or jay
ja or game
hell i got a beef wit 50
he shuld a died homie
hold up......i got anotha job 2 do
betta lock lock ur doors who knos if it'll b u
im dat gangstarr, im dat King,
im treated wit mor respect dan ur mama b
but b4 i go lemme jus giv u ma real name son
it aint blue steel muthaf***a ma name is gun

THE TOUCH

The touch of your soft lips
with your hands moving down my hips
one glance into your eyes
as you begin to spread my thighs
I knew right then
that you were on your way in
I feel your hand on the outside
but I feel your pain in the inside
It was love at first site
but it didnt last all night

doe i wanted it 2
i so badly wanted 2 please u
as i kissed and bit ur soft comfortable lips
a whole new world opened in my mind
as i went low 2 feast on ur open clit
and as i came bac up
i whispered a story only ur clit culd hear
and had it vibrate aww so sweetly
while my tongue painted ur body from **** 2 nipples
and bac again only 2 rest inside ur body
i came bac up and kissed ur chewy lips
and lost mr tongue and my mind
in ur breathy abyss
i only wished it sulda lasted longa
but half a night was betta dan known at all

Tearless Skies
I begged da lord 2 bless da mind and da mind 2 bless thy self but as it proved it was a futile attempt as a brotha dies from a hate crime every tym i look at da newz cant believe wat i c wen i walk in ma streets a child wit a child 2oo young 2 b a motha and dat child wit a child makin hurr a grandmotha,dis aint a world 4 lova's so we pimps and *****s and bloods and crips, *****es and hoes but wen a hoe called a hoe she shakes hurr ass low but dnt lyk da name used 4 hurr doe, doe we still hav our pride homes, it jus sets us bac 2 steops in a one step movement dey say ever since we lost mlk and malcolm x we became *****s again but since we lost biggie and pac wen i asked 4 year old ***** wat dey names he asked whogoes by dem names? biggies daddy or pacs brotha, i prayed 2 da lord dat nite and he sent thunda clouds 2 share in ma anger, and i prayed 2 him 2day 2 ask him y, but it was lyk he didnt care cuz he sent me tearless skies

Rhythm of da sick

Da sickness is in da rythm of da sick, sadly livin dey lives confined 2 illness and greedy *****es who suck dem dry of dey blood and money where da difference between ur gurl and ur lawyer is she stops f***in u afta ur dead in ur coffin and da bibles read but wit all dis said deres still s*** goin on out dere,8 year olds pipin grown men,and thoes grown men da pastors tellin u 2 repent from ur sins,helpin new orleans doesnt happen afta 3 to 4 days, and dey still have de nerve 2 worry bout people lyk saddam hussein, we cry 4 our problems but cant help each otha, den scream 2 da lord "did i hurt ma brotha",its all da same whereva da state, u can start a poll and itll state da same we all sick we jus need sum1 2 help us cure us

now dere r stories bhind each and erry1 of dese poemsif u wanna hear em jus hit me up wit a note/email and ima answer or tell u wat u wanna kno
now THE TOUCH is ma 1st collabo ova da internet it was done wit MS.V on rocafella it wa an interestin new beginin 4 me on a few different levels u kno....dese all hav a truth about dem inside and i dnt lie bout much in any of em except GUN now dat was metamorphic poem...
i guess all i got left 2 say iz holla

[Dmac]

where ever1 at?
im jus lookin 4 some feed back

[sexydeltagirl]

Hey I have read these poems a couple of times going back and forth on which on I like more....

I am def. feeling The Gun it speaks a lot of truth...esp this line

"im treated wit mor respect dan ur mama b
but b4 i go lemme jus giv u ma real name son
it aint blue steel muthaf***a ma name is gun"

props on that one... :thumbsup:

But since I am a softy I had to go with The Touch....All of them are good...
Keep them coming....
props....

[Dmac]

thanx

[Dmac]

is dat da only criticism?
comon yall im lookin 4 thoughts outsyd mine

[Dmac]

Mystery chic...if u plz

Girl ur appeal is so real u leave me in a rush 4 more of u 2 feel dont kno wats ur deal and i dont care long as i can put a seal on ur lips 2 begin a contract of tru emotion unleashed 2 its limits untouched by falsehood and cheat but only in a sense where 1's lips cheat the othas wanted lips of a drink and leave only a sip of wat culd b de end result of a goodnites tease 2 plz each othas needs do i mak sense or r u lost in de translation of ma free thoughts flyin from ma mouth, i guess not but ur more dan u seem 2 b and and i wonda wat else u culd b hidin from me? a mystery chic if u plz i feel lyk we known each otha but dnt kno da 1st thing bout 1 anotha so i jus........feel........while u hang in ma subconcious lyk ma chain from ma nec jus gimme a sec....wat u think of a kiss?

sorry been a minute been bizy
happy new year yall

[Dmac]

sun touch da skin burnin
baby ma said neva eva
but den she also said neva say eva
word play leavin scorch marks in minds
she tryna b on top
and he tryna stay dere
thoughts escape unthought
and bodies screamin names in difrent tongues
memories unsought present an awk-word song
who did wrong in da situation?
he wanted her she denied even doe knowin she was tellin a lie
dey played da game even doe dey felt da fire

suns touch no more now its jus heatin
conversations left in da middle of sentences
she says "ten" and he been benchin
no longa on da phone now its bodies callin
her resistence is pitiful but so is her victim
he practically has her name etched in black on da cova of his heart
and been workin jus so she wuldnt b evicted from her house
always knowin wher it wuld end from da start
so slowly enterin her with his art
da game changed afta dat 1st hour
now it was who got who whipped infront of da crowds
thoughts escaped no longa of da future dey was thinkin of ryt now

suns no longa heatin now its off 2 cook
gurl sweatin as he works his moves
but he anxious about it 2
he dnt need 2 lose naw he off 2 win
she blew off erry single dude
and he wants 2 swim
directions changin now da moods swingin
afta dat 1st dance dey had each otha breathless
psychologies breakin hearts thumpin its ova now
all dey gotta do is realise it
tyms a changin de new year rings in
and b4 da clock strikes 12
dey lean-in endin up kissin
he whispers "wanna go"
she leans in and says "yea, i sure wanna go"

dat was sum freestyle poetry off da corner
rote it as da words came 2 me
so wut yall think?

[sexydeltagirl]

sun touch da skin burnin
baby ma said neva eva
but den she also said neva say eva
word play leavin scorch marks in minds
she tryna b on top
and he tryna stay dere
thoughts escape unthought
and bodies screamin names in difrent tongues
memories unsought present an awk-word song
who did wrong in da situation?
he wanted her she denied even doe knowin she was tellin a lie
dey played da game even doe dey felt da fire

suns touch no more now its jus heatin
conversations left in da middle of sentences
she says "ten" and he been benchin
no longa on da phone now its bodies callin
her resistence is pitiful but so is her victim
he practically has her name etched in black on da cova of his heart
and been workin jus so she wuldnt b evicted from her house
always knowin wher it wuld end from da start
so slowly enterin her with his art
da game changed afta dat 1st hour
now it was who got who whipped infront of da crowds
thoughts escaped no longa of da future dey was thinkin of ryt now

suns no longa heatin now its off 2 cook
gurl sweatin as he works his moves
but he anxious about it 2
he dnt need 2 lose naw he off 2 win
she blew off erry single dude
and he wants 2 swim
directions changin now da moods swingin
afta dat 1st dance dey had each otha breathless
psychologies breakin hearts thumpin its ova now
all dey gotta do is realise it
tyms a changin de new year rings in
and b4 da clock strikes 12
dey lean-in endin up kissin
he whispers "wanna go"
she leans in and says "yea, i sure wanna go"

dat was sum freestyle poetry off da corner
rote it as da words came 2 meso wut yall think?

I'm the same way the words just come to me out of nowhere....Sometimes I don't have paper on me to write them down but when I sit still long enough they come back....

I like this piece and mystery chick....keep them coming...

[Dmac]

iite ma thanx

[Irish-dipstick]

i like the gun and touch but am jus wonderin r u a chick cause i got confused a bit lol. :laugh:

[Dmac]

i like the gun and touch but am jus wonderin r u a chick cause i got confused a bit lol. :laugh:
i got u man
im a dude
touch was a collabo poem dis gurl spat b4 me
but all da info about thoes 1st's r unda all da poems

[Irish-dipstick]

i got u man
im a dude
touch was a collabo poem dis gurl spat b4 me
but all da info about thoes 1st's r unda all da poems


cool i don't bust on sh!t i couldn't do. ur kool man.

[Dmac]

iites thanx

[Dmac]

Mic Blazing

mic blazing thoughts escapin
lips movin minds bendin
to da will of lyrical feelings
bodies movin beat poundin
hearts thumpin warriors shoutin
"da mics blazin!"
amazement feelinged disbelief showin
words mind blowin
crowds going{going outta control}
lovin da sho
hands in da air meant 2 touch da sky
mindless screamin girls jus tryna dat guy
mob formed unbelievably
jus 2 here da words
"da mic blazin"
da mic's blazin dawg
wonder who did it?
as eyes turn and heads swivel
lookin for da face dat caused all da commotion
dey c nuttin
lyk it was a spirit
and as dey walked away dey still noticed whisperin
"da mic's still blazin"

anotha off da wall poem jus bringin it in since i been off a minute

[Dmac]

Born

i was born wit them wings and thoes birds on ma palms
drove to burn wit ma hunga 4 more
distributed da white dust among desperate ones
and changed da high for da experienced ones
chanced and ripped da literary system 2 become a don
and a lyrical philosopher b4 da age of 12
the game is a board of chess wit them hatas da pawns
me a strategist a pawn 2 b a king among the queen knights and bishops
i was raised wit a scorpion tatooed on ma back
a snake on my neck and dime on ma wrist but no chip on ma shoulder
learned 2 piece dem lyrics lyk parts of a puzzle
destroyed enemies by openin dier innards
figurin dey patterns and rearrangin dem disfigured
i was born wit dem wings and dem birds in ma palms
born to leave a mark wit ma hunga 4 more

[Thahlia]

Dmac....nice work.

[Dmac]

thanx ma
always lookin 4 feed back

[Dmac]

in tym i feel weak as a newborn babe
sumtyms i wish i was as ignorant as
a fresh from da womb child
ma case of sickness is kinda mild doe
lyk drinkin a full case of cris by urself
leavin out ur boo u kno
i dnt kno wut 2 do or say
i guess its da hip hop in ma blood
tellin me suttin rong wit da game
2oo many *****s tlkin lyk dey been holdin guns
since b4 dey was born
2 many battlers sayin dey'd wipe u out wit a nine dey aint touched
"I'll put u out wit a kiss on ma 9, lyk u was 1 of ma *****es afta 9"
im losin maself where da real rappas at ?
Holla at me so i can kno where u at
sickness devourin ma mind
yea im sick yall and it semms 2 work ova tym
i cant even retreat 2 rnb cause too many *****s dere
think dey undastand da meanin of luv and tru sex
me i speak wut i kno and speak wut i c
i aint rytin nuttin i aint experienced unless it's 4 fun
holla at me yall lemme kno where u at ma hustlas and pimps
i dnt discriminate im tlkin 2 ma ladies 2
cause none of da **** i hear *****s lyk Ja and 50 say
is a damn cure 4 dis

all dis off da top of ma mind cause im sic of da new political reign of rap only poetry seems 2 sta lyk da crac it was wen it began
holla

[Dmac]

kno its been a real long minute since i dropped sumthin but since i adnt really tym now ima drop suttin from da vault dis next one was by me and ma friend nessa

[Dmac]

{dela}
Beauty is in de eye of the beholda and ur appeal culdnt realer dan thoughts and feelings
sexy iz all i can call u but deres suttin else bout u dat jus makes me wanna holla boo...but i jus cant guess wat u think is dis luv or jus anotha fling

{ne$$a}
I dunno but all i can tell you is this is real,
and i just dunno how to express how u make me feel.
I've known so many guys that don't wanna let me go,
that's the main reason why you & me just flow.
It's like you drive me wild,
as soon as i see ya walkin by.
Sometimes i feel i'd die fo seein u laugh wit dat pretty smile just one more time.

{dela}
But as we dance 2 a slow beat, i only can recognize us at dis time, cauz i c u laugh and dats jus worth its while, can u picture a big house cars and kids runnin around, while we sittin 2gether eatin and drinkin 2 each othas health?

{ne$$a}
I just don't know see myself beein that girl,
the one you call when you're alone.
Is good to hear that you want me wit you to share your life,
but i do prefer beein the one you call yur wife.
Beein your first is always da best,
I'm yur baby girl but i ain't having your baby momma's stress.

{dela}
And who said u shuld,id lay da world at ur feet if i culd,and marry u if we culd elope, but u gotta kno i aint felt lyk dis b4, twistin ma thoughts and ma mind aint centered witout u at ma syd, its lyk dere was dis room in ma head dat i hadnt b4 we hooked up, u me im u, dnt u get it boo, i think im goin crazy ova u

{ne$$a}
I know exactly what u feelin boo,
from the instant i met u i felt the connection,
and i feel there's nothin i won't do to get next to u.
I've neva felt so much tenderness,
and neva tasted such a sweet kisses,
u r a endless source of happiness,the center of ma universe.
I have so many things to express,
things that simple words would neva say,
i want you to stay by my side,
to hold me tight in this damn cold night.

{dela}
ryt i u kno i wuld center of ma luv
eye of ma storm errythin i eva wanted in a gurl
u ma world not dat many gurls around
who culd make ma toes curl da way u do baby
cant help but think of ur body callin me
ur sweet lips temptin me 2 devour dem
in sensless passion ova takin us
u take me 2 da next level
wit our talks and our sex
well we aint got no complaints dere
as its incredible in its own theory
i'd kiss ur wounds till dey felt betta
if i eva hurt u id make it up wit luv
hold u wen u scared at nite
u kno me baby id luv u ryt
othas may say our sex is overated
but we both kno dey aint doin it ryt
i'll b ur sun ur moon and da stars u count at nite
hell i'll b ur genie anythin u wish i 'll make
and if it dont exist i'll create
luvin u aww so sweetly its ur baby boy dela signin off
hopin u got dreams of me as ur man in ur dreams
nite baby

[Dmac]

Streets cry
homicide
flys thru da sky
child scries
for release from purple air
disconcertin da mind
flags fly
freedoms no sho 4 da ride
darknes attacks midnites hide
chrome spinin
human female hood ornament baggin
wave capped
white tee
sag pant
nine bac
braggin
mother, daughter
no blood, brotha
bed saggin
weight lifted
now shifted
years later
gut inflated
potato couch days started
hunger killin
starvation unendin
knives stabbin
streets bleedin
hopes endin
dreams burnin
the hoods a metaphoric jungle 2 da urban
and a criminal legend 2 da suburban
Sons BEEN lyin
Mothers BEEN cryin
Daughters BEEN trickin
and daddies BEEN runnin
grades BEEN bad
days BEEN sad
these memories jus make me mad
as i look for the scrolls of da dead poets
to celebrate de lost souls
and re-set da poles 2 da lost goals
i think wit a prejudice wut wuld ave happened
if we neva left africa
wut wuld hav happened
if babygirl neva left skool
wut wuld ave happened
if i didnt get hit by dat car
Wut..wuld ave happened
if i neva was born.............
i owe so much 2 dis world
and can do so little 2 change its situation
so thru ma poetry i atleast kno
im doin ma part
workin wit words 2 bring meanin 2 life helps sober mine and give me meanin
dats wuts ma art
da streets hurtin
ma inks spillin
while ma minds bleedin da words dat pass through ur ears
i got ma purpose
wuts urs?

[Dmac]

where da hatas?
where da lovas?
where da critics?
where da bad guys who secretly luv us?
yo wher da thoughts on ma work
jus askin i mean errybody gotta come up sumwher

[Dmac]

i jus did dis piece wit one of ma boys Ryo and i jus had 2 put it on hold up as i paste it on we did dis in turns neither expectin wut da otha was gonna say disis sum real **** on da low de

{Ryo}
*****z tink rappin is about takin in rhymes,
But truthfully it's skillfully expressin yuh mind,
Yuh don't need a Jscob to kno the time,
Just like u don't need a watch to kno i'm one of a kind,
They say when it rains it pours so hommie stay indoors,
Cause my flows like water and i aint gonna pause,
Oppostie of gravity I defy laws,
Plus rap's like a visit I'm givin tours,
I promised myself i wouldn't slip again,
My hommie said kid u gotta rap on the trend.
So now i only rap whrn i could predict the end,
And i aint lettin go of the pen.........

{dela}
cause ma mind aint set on u its on payin da rent
dey lyk jay-z in retirement wen u think dey done
dey aint done yet
dey mite as well b stars cause dey photographed in sets
rap in definition aint jus spittin da 1st words dat come 2 ur mind
no dats freestylin
rap is da lyrics wit deeper meanin dat concrete ur lines
dey say da pen is mightier dan da sword
if dats da case get out sum paper cause u'll need a shield
dey say da mind is stronga dan brawn
if dats da case *****s gotta get sum ear plugs cause ima raise a field
lost 2 ma hustles ma *****s thought i was dead
but as da jesus of paper i rose again
dis a dela and ryo mix u aint neva heard da lyks of dis
dis da rappin poet and hova's son
doin a few bars lyk dis jus aint shyt

{Ryo}
haha we aint done yet.......

The clouds in my head are beginning to clear,
Instead of relyin on my sight i put trust in my ear,
Blocked out emotions that brought pain or fear,
Plus this gift we possess is rear,
We're the moment of clamness in the middle of the storm,
The deep breath after the feelin of fear is gone,
And we aint confused like Matt Damon as Jason Bourne,
But the proof's in the words of the song,
Just listen to the promise embedded in our pledge,
We'll a take u real close but not over the edge,
The rhymes we impart come straight from the heart,
We're the light shinning through when all else is dark!

{dela}
we da hope dat brings bac skill while otha *****s lyk
"naw man dem *****s aint real"
we sta ill lyk nas and jae millz
we keep it real lyk bullets shot ryt thru ur window sills
we lyk da prophets naw betta yet we da prodigies
bringin it bac lyk we pac and biggie
and 4 thoes jus tunin inu witnessin da rebirth of rap
and if u aint got da beat
dats cause u can only hear it in ur heart or da street
"just listen to the promise embedded in our pledge"
lyk ryo said
and u'll unda stand dat dese jus aint wrdz 2 b read
dey bibliqul passages 2 b memorized by verse
dis jus aint no talent 4 sho dis jus aint no read and go
lyk a fire left untended next 2 wood
u ma not notice us now but eventually u will
da sickest rytin verses bac and forth
u actually payin attention den u'll worship our force

[Dmac]

here's a piece done by me ma boy Ryo and anotha friend ADONYSS


{ADONYSS}
can we..... stop the hate and
let love take its place?
put down the guns and knifes
embrace each other instead of
letting off that nine.. put the pipe
down give yourself time to inhale
watch when you exhale nothing but clear air.
young kids crying, babies dying
the gov covers it up wit the media
lying. dreams of luxury cars, beautiful broads
and an unlimited bank account is fed to
our youth, feeding their brains with dreams of
making lute with out goals, education but just a limit
of vocabulary..

{Dela}
vocabulary?
2days youth cant even spell vocabulary
2 bizy botherin 2 fulfill dey dreams
lil shaniqua wnna b a video hoe
lil jessie callin himself"goldtooth"
tryna rap a gig or get his own sho
Big ***** bullet proof
changed his name 2 baby gurl in da pen
and babygurls sista turned 2 big mama at 10
it aint a luxury in da hood unless u a drug lord
it aint nuttin at all gud *****s live in brown boards
government teasin us wit dem lottery tickets
hw com only whyt folks winin dem lottery prizes
workin from 6 2 9
its a world of hustle or die
da luvs dissappeared
and da hates on da rise
hw we gonna survive da day
if *****s shootin outsyd

{Ryo}

Can we stop all these crimes?
Is all this hate and violence a sign of the end of times?
I blame the school's who teach the "hidden agenda",
lessons that make students menatally surrender,
Like Dela said we all need to exhale,
Get all that s*** out that makes our hearts grow pale,
Listen to God's word for guidance,
Ignore the will of the world that's filled wit deviance,
So now inhale, but only breathe in the Love,
Cause it's the only way to be reconciled from above,
And the only way to stop evil growth is to get at the root,
But u aint need an axe all u need is the truth,
Take the wicked by the hand and pray on yuh foes,
And what we can't handle God will take care of those............

[Dmac]

where'r da critics?
comon im not just dropping pieces cause i got tym on my hands
i need to kno if i got it

[Dmac]

Sex Goddess

baby girl had my world turned upside dwn
and had me come home early for the first tym
tryna get sum of wut she gave me last night
hearts beating bodies yearnin
we knew wut it was
her eyes turnin
minds flyin lik we was birds
muscles flexin
neck bendin like we were committin exorcisms
she turned this brother out like a new trac from outcast
oouuu we had that rhythm
oouuu we made those motions
oouuu we took it to the next level
oouuu we connected on the highest physical plains
turned around and i knew the sex wuld neva b the same
her soft moans reached the ears and left the mind playin games
hot sweat melted on bodies lyk candy in heat
she decided to b gangstarr and started sayin "Say ma name"
"whos ur mama"
"whos ur daddy"
"who ur lova"
"who got you going crazy"
we said things just to say em
we were tryna take our minds off da situation
only to return wit more in-ining and out-ining anticipation
worlds spinin
babygirls winin
sweat reflectin in the sunlight
givin da image of a caramel goddess in white daylite
cant explain the feelin
cant describe the enjoyment
we broke every commandment in the bible
and looked for more to desecrate
we took it too a far more mental state
da tym was crazy
da last seconds blissful
she was ma gurl
ma baby
and ma sex goddess
sss oaaa
did i mention da sex was amazin

[Dmac]

where da criticsims?

[Dmac]

i would like to thank every person who has ever viewed dis thread and made it the hottest and most viewed in this corner

[Dmac]

The holiest of holy
the blessed of dem all
magnifier of rythms
destroyer of flaws
greatest of all legends
yes
the one object endowed wit de powers of da lyrical gods
i talk about da stage creator
the audience bringer
the tone inventor
the emotion manipulater
the father of the muses
mother of entertainment
decider of illest
and thoes deservin to breathe on it
its de voice of de word
power bhind de spirit
its de attention of the crowd
the focus of de lyrics
its de bases of music
none can match its original
but few can use it
its de love child of darkness and light
stands 4 all dats wrong and ryt
if u dnt kno wut it is by now
i might as well say wut it is
its de stone mic
legendary amongst its kind
it turns deaf and blind
thoes who cant stand its might
prophesy of its greatness
touched de minds of de ambitious
and stories of its powers
touch de lips of de poets
it was de envy of the kings
and jealousy touched de hearts of de gods
so it was broken
doe it culd neva b destroyed
only to re-manifest itself
in its sons and daughters
when true lyrics are voiced
its the key that releases you
from that mundane prison u call ur mind
disavows all loyalties long as you hear its internall rhymes
its de soul of ambition
that makes you wanna touch da sky
its poetry at its best
poetry in its essence
elevator of ur mind
addictive drug at its height
the greatest wonder of de world
yea
its da stone mic

[Dmac]

where is erry1 at?

[Irish-dipstick]

yeah man you putting out some nice work... but you should think about starting new threads

[Dmac]

yea i kno im thinkin bout it

[Thahlia]

yeah man you putting out some nice work... but you should think about starting new threads
I think that would be good too.

Dmac...I like them all....Born and Mystery Chick are my favorites though...keep em coming

[Dmac]

ok i have recently checked da beginin and i have to say im impressed by how many people have viewed it but sadly i have to put it to rest and start a new one
hit yall up wit a new thread soon

[Dmac]

yo
i got a new thrread we can look at now
i calld it Tha lost scrolls
check it out

[Dmac]

damn....dis thread is still runnin?
afta i retired it?
damnnnn....i guess i started a new one at da wrong tym hu?