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sexydeltagirl
11-17-05, 09:16 PM
I didn't want to be your girl, wifey or your significant other...
I just wanted you to touch me ever so softly and make my body quiver...
Keep a smile on my face when my life tempts me to expose the truth....
Cause instead of smiling I should be frowing cause my life's a little hectic right now...I feel like I am being pulled in some many directions my shadow is asking me to slow down....
I just wanted you to make me feel that warm feeling, those feelings of lust...make me exhibt animalistic behavior like climbing and wraping my body around as if you were a tree...
I wanted you to give me that satisfaction I have been longing for, you said you would be the best, I believed you but my body deceived me into thinking sex was all I wanted......
And I started to believe that I could give you all of me and just let it be...
But see my body was calling but my heart was falling a little too deep....
Now, I am trying my best to leave the past behind me, but it's hard cause all I really wanted was for you to be apart of me......or in me?
I didn't want to be your girl, wifey or your significant other....
I just wanted to be me.....

Damn.....

Ice Cold EX
11-17-05, 10:26 PM
DAMN GIRL! that one got me wantin to say something forward...

props

sexydeltagirl
11-17-05, 11:44 PM
DAMN GIRL! that one got me wantin to say something forward...

props

Thanks for the feedback, EX.... :O

Black N Proud
11-21-05, 01:12 AM
I didn't want to be your girl, wifey or your significant other...
I just wanted you to touch me ever so softly and make my body quiver...
Keep a smile on my face when my life tempts me to expose the truth....
Cause instead of smiling I should be frowing cause my life's a little hectic right now...I feel like I am being pulled in some many directions my shadow is asking me to slow down....
I just wanted you to make me feel that warm feeling, those feelings of lust...make me exhibt animalistic behavior like climbing and wraping my body around as if you were a tree...
I wanted you to give me that satisfaction I have been longing for, you said you would be the best, I believed you but my body deceived me into thinking sex was all I wanted......
And I started to believe that I could give you all of me and just let it be...
But see my body was calling but my heart was falling a little too deep....
Now, I am trying my best to leave the past behind me, but it's hard cause all I really wanted was for you to be apart of me......or in me?
I didn't want to be your girl, wifey or your significant other....
I just wanted to be me.....

Damn.....
Damn, now that's deep!!!! I am really feelin' this one!!! This is really nice work!!! :blush:

sexydeltagirl
11-21-05, 01:59 AM
Damn, now that's deep!!!! I am really feelin' this one!!! This is really nice work!!! :blush:

Thanks babe, I'm trying to get better......so far so good :blush:

slave2aplaya
11-26-05, 11:54 PM
Really feeling this poem!!!
Keep on girl!!!
x

sexydeltagirl
11-28-05, 06:52 PM
Really feeling this poem!!!
Keep on girl!!!
x

Thanks for the love, it's def. appreciated.... :O

homeyjay
11-29-05, 07:15 PM
ok after reading this, i had a flashback to when i was a shorty and when someone said something reagrding sex the response was always ooohh!! you nasty! lol, i need an oven mit or a pair of tongs to handle this one for it's hot, hot, hot!! you got that edge in your work that makes you unique, goodin' felt! hj

sexydeltagirl
11-29-05, 07:37 PM
ok after reading this, i had a flashback to when i was a shorty and when someone said something reagrding sex the response was always ooohh!! you nasty! lol, i need an oven mit or a pair of tongs to handle this one for it's hot, hot, hot!! you got that edge in your work that makes you unique, goodin' felt! hj

Thanks hj, I really appreciate the feedback.... :blush:

erabfb25
11-30-05, 10:46 AM
hey i really liked it. it was vary nice

sexydeltagirl
11-30-05, 12:38 PM
Thanks.....