Verse 1

[Stillmatic22]

verse drops at 0:11


and it was all good just a week ago
**** happenend? you mad cause my paper stacking
and the fiends know who bubbling
i own your customers like puff do lox publishing
now i got a blast you
pack 4 9's like fran cisco empty in your chest let the whole clip go
shouldnt a told **** now look at you its pitiful
proscutors miserable witness gone im invinsible
i thought you knew how streets dudes do
when certain rules are broken
the gun stay smoking like marley when he token
back in the sixties i flip game on d's
stay selling the ki's generating g's
like a 50 cent stutter
hijack a plane with a ****ing box cutter
fly it into your crib
when the beef gets hot aint no one gonna live

[#1rapper]

this was okayhad a few good lines and a few bad onnes like i wuz feelin this one

"and the fiends know who bubbling
i own your customers like puff do lox publishing"- that was hott

but this was weak

"like a 50 cent stutter
hijack a plane with a ****ing box cutter- :whistle:

wasn't really feelin that

overall it was alright hopefully verse 2 gets better

[Stillmatic22]

yeah that box cutter **** was whack i just spit that ...stay generating g's like a 50 cent stutter i was needing something to come off that need to hit the lab again...good looks on the feedback next verse you post i will respond for sure

[Wordsmyth]

This was aight and the box cutter line wasn't all that bad. Some of the lines were a little stretched but I didn't really loose the feel of the flow, I guess it kinda depends on how it's spit too. I thought the joint was decent though.