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erabfb25
11-17-05, 11:46 AM
As I lay and gaze,
Gaze upon the bright stars.
Only to connect them
But only to see your face.
The moons light,
It shines so bright.
Closing my eyes,
Not she is out of sight
To reopen my eyes.
Seeing her so high in the sky
My angel is gone.
The fire is being put out.
The lights are ding down.
It seems that I’m in a drought.
She never wants to see again.
To wake up and see her,
Laying by my side.

sexydeltagirl
11-17-05, 01:07 PM
Nice, I would speak on how this makes me feel but nevermind...
I am feeling this on so many levels....

erabfb25
11-17-05, 11:23 PM
Hey thanx for the feed back. i am trying to expand my writting.

homeyjay
11-18-05, 12:10 PM
As I lay and gaze,
Gaze upon the bright stars.
Only to connect them
But only to see your face.
The moons light,
It shines so bright.
Closing my eyes,
Not she is out of sight
To reopen my eyes.
Seeing her so high in the sky
My angel is gone.
The fire is being put out.
The lights are ding down.
It seems that I’m in a drought.
She never wants to see again.
To wake up and see her,
Laying by my side.

AYO, you keep it up and I'm going to start callin' you cupid, goodin', felt.

erabfb25
11-21-05, 11:01 AM
Hey thanx for your feed back but i am no "cupid", lol