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Ice Cold EX
11-13-05, 10:11 PM
A little excerpt from a real personal one.
If u 'preciate the read, Holla atcha boy!


....You send a
quizzical
Qu-qu-quiver
thru my physical frame,
every time
I'm kissing you
or when you call my name,
Yummm..
your voice is delicious boo.
You got to me.
Now I'm freefallin for you,
at high velocity.

Now this may... seem cliche...
but,
You stole my heart .
It meant alot to me.
Now I
must recieve,
You
in my custody,


for robbery...

-skalla

Ice Cold EX
11-13-05, 10:16 PM
After reading "Please Allow"...
I sorta got in the sharing mood

sexydeltagirl
11-13-05, 11:31 PM
After reading "Please Allow"...
I sorta got in the sharing mood

Ain't nothing like getting in the sharing mood babe, :blush:
I like it, props.....

Keep those poems coming.... :thumbsup:

Ice Cold EX
11-14-05, 03:05 AM
Thanx for encouragement. looks like people are taking a liking to u and your work. ;) :)

homeyjay
11-15-05, 11:56 AM
A little excerpt from a real personal one.
If u 'preciate the read, Holla atcha boy!


....You send a
quizzical
Qu-qu-quiver
thru my physical frame,
every time
I'm kissing you
or when you call my name,
Yummm..
your voice is delicious boo.
You got to me.
Now I'm freefallin for you,
at high velocity.

Now this may... seem cliche...
but,
You stole my heart .
It meant alot to me.
Now I
must recieve,
You
in my custody,


for robbery...

-skalla
Good flow bro, this would be a nice intro to a song or even a rap. You should go head and drop the whole piece let us check it out.

Ice Cold EX
11-16-05, 12:13 AM
thanx homey. I couldnt share that whole piece cuz it was written 4 someone. It sorta cheapens it. And plus, she dont even have a copy herself. :unsure:
Like yo sig mane. lyrical. :headphone