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Irish-dipstick
11-08-05, 02:19 PM
*i be kick in tha door on these b!tchs,
actin hard cause they got raped,
and actin all hood but still they snitches.*

look man i be knockin u on ur back mr dean,
thinks he can pick on little hommies,
but u gettin beat up and proper ****ed the fake king whos a queen/
the reason i dropped this is that i've had enough,
u little no touchin u, u act buff/
u too young for us to hit u and we reject,
u push me to far i'll beat ur face reject/
like a needle i'll inject...all tha po's have to do is check this,
for a murder confession on this serious ghetto sh!t aint no diss.

*i be kick in tha door on these b!tchs,
actin hard cause they got raped,
and actin all hood but still they snitches.*

i don't hold a pistol please attack me i hit u wit crome,
i play u out and kill u bare hands and bust ur dome/
tony d be puzzi he gettin fcuked tossed up,
revenge will be ours,
u never though we'd take it this far sup/
nuthin i be gunnin got these puzzi's runnin,
while i be on sohh and b!tches i be sonnin/

rest in peace b!tch

*i be kick in tha door on these b!tchs,
actin hard cause they got raped,
and actin all hood but still they snitches.*

this be the last verse i spit for faggots,
al the girl be rejectin him d!ck size like maggots/
i enter new ports of all sorts,
like ur mama wish that it was invented oh wat to abort/
ur a wreak like eazy e am a get u back eventually/
until then i attack u hear and ignore u til ur day come,
sup b!tch and slip more nuts suck d!cks u some dumb.

*i be kick in tha door on these b!tchs,
actin hard cause they got raped,
and actin all hood but still they snitches.*

life as a bully never pays the only thing that pays is life.

the b!tch TONY DEAN CREGGAN IN D.C N.IRELAND.

#1rapper
11-08-05, 09:39 PM
yo you really are juz ass, i mean all ur disses or any type of drops suck, its fuqking pathetic, all you do is ruin threads with your rhymes, "actin hard cuz they got raped." what the fuqk is that shyt, u got homo tendecies, fuqkin lame ass chorus and a wack verse "this be the last verse i spit for faggots,
al the girl be rejectin him d!ck size like maggots", faggots and maggots, :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow

"the reason i dropped this is that i've had enough,
u little no touchin u, u act buff" :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad:

YOU ARE STRAIGHT ASS,FUQKIN PRESCHOOL SHYT

Wordsmyth
11-09-05, 11:13 AM
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Wordsmyth
11-09-05, 11:14 AM
I.d. I would say you need to really step back and look at what you write. I would also suggest you look at other peeps style and get an idea of how to structure your verse and put together your rhyme scheme. You randomly rhyme like every third bar and your flow is nonexistent because of that. The sh*t is extremely irritating to read. You use very basic vocabulary which makes nothing you write interesting at all. Seriously I'm not trying to trip but you get bodied everytime you post dawg. Work on at least rhyming at the end of every sentence to start with and actually put some thought into your verse. Once you master that try adding multiple rhmes in a sentence but carefully worded. I have to say I admire your persistance but you need to step your game up big! Cause these "rhymes" you be droppin wouldn't even have won battles back in 82'......

Your word for today is ELEVATE!

It is what it is...

-ghost-

Irish-dipstick
11-10-05, 02:26 PM
yo you really are juz ass, i mean all ur disses or any type of drops suck, its fuqking pathetic, all you do is ruin threads with your rhymes, "actin hard cuz they got raped." what the fuqk is that shyt, u got homo tendecies, fuqkin lame ass chorus and a wack verse "this be the last verse i spit for faggots,
al the girl be rejectin him d!ck size like maggots", faggots and maggots, :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow :thumbsdow

"the reason i dropped this is that i've had enough,
u little no touchin u, u act buff" :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad:

YOU ARE STRAIGHT ASS,FUQKIN PRESCHOOL SHYT

ur exactly right.

but it wasn't really a rap as such it was more like a raw pasion move u no if u new wat i was talkin bout.