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Amerika
10-31-05, 09:13 PM
Why jostle the fossil?
Force the hostile apostle to spread gospel
But it aint a rhyme book, its a novel
You follow?
I'll lead...
And address the pressing needs
People prey to their prayers, stressing your subtle knees
Subtletys get lost, like minds ,puppies and keys
Or your job in a G Dub Bush economy
I'll prolly be....
Left.
Like gangsters pass, right?
I'll prolly catch....
Wreck.
Like poles do all night.
I'll prolly be....
Death.
In the alley, with a knife
But If you gotta gun son then I'll prolly take flight.
Aiight?
Out of self preservation, not of fear
But objects in the mirror are closer than they appear.
I'm sheepish. Wool sheared.
Will you make me somthing, dear?
But I still aint worn the gloves you knat me last year.
My first impression clear
Second guessed from stress
And third strikes here, yes its just a mess.
So he made a crucifix from forehead to chest
I'm just gonna plead the fifth cos I'm savior bereft.
With hefty bags packed with preened poem pieces
Monologues, soliloquies, rants, raps, and thesis'
Formerly refered to as the Jesus from Phoenix
cos I pull facts outta my magic bag like Felix
Deal wit hbeing a zeitgiest in the wrong time
Imma damnation equation
Solve for Why.

Thee One
11-01-05, 03:59 PM
Great flow! It makes for a good read.

Amerika
11-02-05, 10:52 AM
thanks.

Amerika
11-06-05, 02:48 PM
up for feedback

Amerika
11-08-05, 11:02 AM
If I was a girl and had "sexy" in my name, you all wouldve replied already.

sexydeltagirl
11-08-05, 04:36 PM
If I was a girl and had "sexy" in my name, you all wouldve replied already.

Hey, don't act like that... :dry:
I enjoy reading your work...you are very talented.... :blush:

Esp this verse right here...

"version of black plague rats biting legs just to mess with me
blessed be the memories I couldnt erase chemically
dont call it a dependancy! Call it a best friend to me."

nice...

Black N Proud
11-09-05, 01:12 AM
Very nice work!!

Amerika
11-12-05, 08:26 PM
Thanks.

Ice Cold EX
11-13-05, 10:23 PM
That was some lyricism bruh. I like to reread things and find rhymes I dint find before :thumbsup:

---Skalla

Amerika
11-16-05, 05:13 PM
dont sleep