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G-UnitBulletProof
09-19-05, 10:41 AM
Yo you call yourself the game and say your from cali,
you so ****ing ugly i can put a wig on you and call u sally.
i put on the documentary and thought what is this ****,
50 is in the whole thing might well add just a lil bit.
now you with blackwall street thinking your da leader,
you just downgraded yourself to the brady named peter.
it gets so funny how you think banks can't rap,
g unit is the only reason why your on da map.
when your second lp comes out it gonna bore me,
just like the other cd the untold story.
please i dont wanna know your untold story bout playing madden and got shot, here we go again we got another ****ing pac.
running his mouth thinking he the toughest on the planet,
that's why your cd took 2 years to make they were gonna can it.
you couldn't stand 50 helping making your cd what it is,
now you gonna be a low life and nothing to your kids.

Irish-dipstick
09-19-05, 12:42 PM
Yo you call yourself the game and say your from cali,
you so ****ing ugly i can put a wig on you and call u sally.
i put on the documentary and thought what is this ****,
50 is in the whole thing might well add just a lil bit.
now you with blackwall street thinking your da leader,
you just downgraded yourself to the brady named peter.
it gets so funny how you think banks can't rap,
g unit is the only reason why your on da map.
when your second lp comes out it gonna bore me,
just like the other cd the untold story.
please i dont wanna know your untold story bout playing madden and got shot, here we go again we got another ****ing pac.
running his mouth thinking he the toughest on the planet,
that's why your cd took 2 years to make they were gonna can it.
you couldn't stand 50 helping making your cd what it is,
now you gonna be a low life and nothing to your kids.

am gonna rap on ur sh!t for being a stupid b!tch and not having a clue.

now little b!tch wats my name it don't really matter u just mad cause ur bf 50 cent got played by the game, sh!t boy r u serious by the way he can rap and it wasn't g-unit that put him on the map it was dre ur missing the facts 50 helped on 3 songs, we talkin but 50 how masscared his own album he fcuk vivaka he left his kid tryed his lame as diss on the piggy bank vid, and wat u talking bout 50 got shot nine times no really it was 3 he the one who predendin the next pac to be but less talent. and the untold story is a mixtape only 50 got a kid did u ever hear of date rape, no dont push the ballad u forgot the facts pretendin but u still gettin tore up by the hidden adgendin.

get the facts first kid.

Irish-dipstick
09-19-05, 12:46 PM
Yo you call yourself the game and say your from cali,
you so ****ing ugly i can put a wig on you and call u sally.
i put on the documentary and thought what is this ****,
50 is in the whole thing might well add just a lil bit.
now you with blackwall street thinking your da leader,
you just downgraded yourself to the brady named peter.
it gets so funny how you think banks can't rap,
g unit is the only reason why your on da map.
when your second lp comes out it gonna bore me,
just like the other cd the untold story.
please i dont wanna know your untold story bout playing madden and got shot, here we go again we got another ****ing pac.
running his mouth thinking he the toughest on the planet,
that's why your cd took 2 years to make they were gonna can it.
you couldn't stand 50 helping making your cd what it is,
now you gonna be a low life and nothing to your kids.

am gonna rap on ur sh!t for being a stupid b!tch and not having a clue.

now little b!tch wats my name it don't really matter u just mad cause ur bf 50 cent got played by the game, sh!t boy r u serious by the way he can rap and it wasn't g-unit that put him on the map it was dre ur missing the facts 50 helped on 3 songs, we talkin but 50 how masscared his own album he fcuk vivaka he left his kid tryed his lame as diss on the piggy bank vid, and wat u talking bout 50 got shot nine times no really it was 3 he the one who predendin the next pac to be but less talent. and the untold story is a mixtape only 50 got a kid did u ever hear of date rape, no dont push the ballad u forgot the facts pretendin but u still gettin tore up by the hidden adgendin.

get the facts first kid.

G-UnitBulletProof
09-19-05, 04:23 PM
am gonna rap on ur sh!t for being a stupid b!tch and not having a clue.

now little b!tch wats my name it don't really matter u just mad cause ur bf 50 cent got played by the game, sh!t boy r u serious by the way he can rap and it wasn't g-unit that put him on the map it was dre ur missing the facts 50 helped on 3 songs, we talkin but 50 how masscared his own album he fcuk vivaka he left his kid tryed his lame as diss on the piggy bank vid, and wat u talking bout 50 got shot nine times no really it was 3 he the one who predendin the next pac to be but less talent. and the untold story is a mixtape only 50 got a kid did u ever hear of date rape, no dont push the ballad u forgot the facts pretendin but u still gettin tore up by the hidden adgendin.

get the facts first kid.


You telling me to get the facts straight,
You don't even use punctuation or know how to abbreviate.
Sticking up for guy who looks like mr. potatoe head,
He disses Joe Budden then makes songs with him because thats what was said.
You can't beat me in a battle or in a fight,
You are a ****** that likes to bite.
If you think you can take me down your trippin,
You can't hanlde all the tracks that I've been rippin.
I smack you and call you my hoe,
I bet you suck dicks to get some dough.
To pay bills support your 15 kids,
But the truth is you can't even cover your **** lead.
I bet you have every single type of STD,
The only rapper standing is going to be me.

Irish-dipstick
09-24-05, 12:47 PM
You telling me to get the facts straight,
You don't even use punctuation or know how to abbreviate.
Sticking up for guy who looks like mr. potatoe head,
He disses Joe Budden then makes songs with him because thats what was said.
You can't beat me in a battle or in a fight,
You are a ****** that likes to bite.
If you think you can take me down your trippin,
You can't hanlde all the tracks that I've been rippin.
I smack you and call you my hoe,
I bet you suck dicks to get some dough.
To pay bills support your 15 kids,
But the truth is you can't even cover your **** lead.
I bet you have every single type of STD,
The only rapper standing is going to be me.

u aint got no game u also haven't got a clue wat u talking bout u fcuking puzzi.

i smell puzzi oh that just G-Unit.

ok ok u dont speack the FACTS, u like the group that claim gangsta but the dont even match the MACKS. it more like yayo the potato HEAD i kill u on this battle bullet made from LEAD and u dont have a CLUE u mite aswell give up this short rhyme even punched ur carrer THROUGH. why wont u ammitted that 50 cent aint HIP-HOP he dropped CANDYSHOP and proved he was a wangsta and was jamming POP and all game said was the sh!t gotta STOP.

u haven't even touched me b!tch

r-e-mix
09-24-05, 04:38 PM
Dam you guys are really battling hard here........thats cool that you guys are representin though......i respect that n1ggas......but it sounds like u guys need to quit beefin over people u dont even noe

keep it real n1ggaz and if u get the chance give me sum feedback on my threads

r-e-mix
09-24-05, 04:43 PM
ohh and by the way bulletproof.............DONT MAKE FUN OF PAC

G-UnitBulletProof
09-24-05, 10:59 PM
ohh and by the way bulletproof.............DONT MAKE FUN OF PAC

I wasn't making fun of pac. I was just sayin here we another person just talking too much. I like pac.

Also game is just dumb. He is mad ignorant. How do you go from taking 2 years to make a cd and 50 helped write all the hooks for all the songs that you making money off of? And then you don't appreicate none of what he did. It's stupid. How do you go off making a video with dipset and dre and 50 dont' know and you suppose to be g unit? Game is full of himself.

Irish-dipstick
09-25-05, 09:47 AM
I wasn't making fun of pac. I was just sayin here we another person just talking too much. I like pac.

Also game is just dumb. He is mad ignorant. How do you go from taking 2 years to make a cd and 50 helped write all the hooks for all the songs that you making money off of? And then you don't appreicate none of what he did. It's stupid. How do you go off making a video with dipset and dre and 50 dont' know and you suppose to be g unit? Game is full of himself.

ok i agree wit remix dont diss pac and quit this beef that g-unit trying to start but all i was doing was correctin the G.I.M.P.

123 u've entered the BULLPIT, am gonna knock u out for talking all this BULLSH!T. G-Unit think he BULLET PROOF, i'll hit u little b!tch wit an uppercut knock u threw the ROOF, simple as this simple as that THAT u riding tony yayo... who got a WATER PISTOL GAT.

Irish-dipstick
09-25-05, 09:55 AM
I wasn't making fun of pac. I was just sayin here we another person just talking too much. I like pac.

Also game is just dumb. He is mad ignorant. How do you go from taking 2 years to make a cd and 50 helped write all the hooks for all the songs that you making money off of? And then you don't appreicate none of what he did. It's stupid. How do you go off making a video with dipset and dre and 50 dont' know and you suppose to be g unit? Game is full of himself.

50 only helped him on 3 HOOKS there was over 14 u must be dumb so read general knowledge BOOKS. he appreciated 50 for being a RAT, u just can't addmit that his G-rap flaour is FLAT. and by the way dre produced and made his CAREER u talking so much sh!t ever one thinks its comin from ur REAR. get in GEAR. look dipset is full on his HOMMIES were G-Unit is full of TRANIES AND HOMOS

Irish-dipstick
09-25-05, 10:02 AM
You telling me to get the facts straight,
You don't even use punctuation or know how to abbreviate.
Sticking up for guy who looks like mr. potatoe head,
He disses Joe Budden then makes songs with him because thats what was said.
You can't beat me in a battle or in a fight,
You are a ****** that likes to bite.
If you think you can take me down your trippin,
You can't hanlde all the tracks that I've been rippin.
I smack you and call you my hoe,
I bet you suck dicks to get some dough.
To pay bills support your 15 kids,
But the truth is you can't even cover your **** lead.
I bet you have every single type of STD,
The only rapper standing is going to be me.

wait a minute out of u i aint never heard no TRACKS its time to shut ur mouth suck banks d!ck and FACE FACTS. that u really r stunned by the way i RHYME u a little snitch like 50 and call the cops and say i was committing a CRIME, but no back to some killer SH!T, 50 dissed nas and got ethered and knockout wit one HIT.......SH!T u can feel the pain from the front to the BACK u persited no matter the weather white or BLACK now stop the CRAP and lets get back to RAP all u have to do is SHUT UR TRAP.

r-e-mix
09-25-05, 12:45 PM
I got both cds (massacre and documentary) and i think they're both good records. But i gotsta say that i like game's sh1t better.....That sh1ts hott!.....I listen to documentary like every day....The masssacre is definitely one of the better rap cds though....Everything 50 touches turns to gold....the problem with g-unit is that they know this and new cds that they're puttin out (yayo) are too overrated and people only buy it cause its got a g-unit label on it...but i respect 50, banks, and buck....i got all of they're records and they are sum of my favorites

G-UnitBulletProof
09-25-05, 03:18 PM
wait a minute out of u i aint never heard no TRACKS its time to shut ur mouth suck banks d!ck and FACE FACTS. that u really r stunned by the way i RHYME u a little snitch like 50 and call the cops and say i was committing a CRIME, but no back to some killer SH!T, 50 dissed nas and got ethered and knockout wit one HIT.......SH!T u can feel the pain from the front to the BACK u persited no matter the weather white or BLACK now stop the CRAP and lets get back to RAP all u have to do is SHUT UR TRAP.

Well now game is gonna be gangsta then 50 and write songs with gwen stayfani so game right now im gonna be scared of him and i better what out so gwen dont a pop a cap in me...............game dissin 50 about candy shop and he gonna make songs with gwen stayfani...........LMFAO GAME A *****

Irish-dipstick
09-25-05, 03:37 PM
Well now game is gonna be gangsta then 50 and write songs with gwen stayfani so game right now im gonna be scared of him and i better what out so gwen dont a pop a cap in me...............game dissin 50 about candy shop and he gonna make songs with gwen stayfani...........LMFAO GAME A *****

again ur MISSIN it is pointless wit ur subliminal DISSIN, sry man 50 is gone he DONE he like ice cube he aint the ONE. ur a stupid ass B!TCH and u support a a rat ass SNITCH u don't have a clue man 50 ratted out touch and SEPREME,
just wait till shine get out of jail man that mutherfuker MEAN.

G-UnitBulletProof
09-25-05, 05:25 PM
again ur MISSIN it is pointless wit ur subliminal DISSIN, sry man 50 is gone he DONE he like ice cube he aint the ONE. ur a stupid ass B!TCH and u support a a rat ass SNITCH u don't have a clue man 50 ratted out touch and SEPREME,
just wait till shine get out of jail man that mutherfuker MEAN.


All you do is tell me the same thing everytime,
go chill with game and gwen they show you talbe manners and how to be kind.
Please I'm tired of your stupid ****,
I get the crowd more exicted then your girl's ***** clit.
I'm tired of showing you how good I am,
everytime you do something emcee's say "thank you m'am".
If your hoping to show how game is hard,
every time you open your mouth all you do is put him in a leotard.
****ing ***** you ain't got nothing not even fame,
the jewels on my chain are bigger then blocks on the tetris game.
We all know you stupid as ****,
Your last name ain't taylor and your first sure ain't chuck.
Chuck Taylor sounds like the name of teacher,
or a who's on oz who got ****ed by beacher.
Yea, I'm gonna stop right now before I make you cry,
here's a kleenex get those tears out of yoru eye.

theman080
09-25-05, 08:36 PM
Beef wit Dip Stick goes nowhere, he's not repsected by anyone here, he carried on like a bytch and rushed into beef like fat men at buffets. He'll probably be pissed a dropped this and his chronie Irish Snyper will get on ur dyck for taken shots at his boy. So dead it for you waste more verses on him cuz it will amount to nothin, I wasted one verse on him and two lines on the snyper and they deserved neither...

-080

empty clipz
09-26-05, 11:25 AM
i totally concurr!!!...scotish diaper rash iz sorry az fuk!!...not worthy!!!

Irish-dipstick
09-26-05, 02:32 PM
lol hello gents i quess its ok the man u were the on asking me for a verse for ye to use haha u even ammit am funny u b!tch and clipz u ****** ****** u r a b!tch and am irish not scottish u dumb ass sh!t and man u were beefed out twice by me and synper is just an emcee who comments on weak rappers sry but ya'll talk crap new name ass flappers.

the man- spongebob.
Clipz- dora tha explora.

Irish-dipstick
09-26-05, 02:36 PM
All you do is tell me the same thing everytime,
go chill with game and gwen they show you talbe manners and how to be kind.
Please I'm tired of your stupid ****,
I get the crowd more exicted then your girl's ***** clit.
I'm tired of showing you how good I am,
everytime you do something emcee's say "thank you m'am".
If your hoping to show how game is hard,
every time you open your mouth all you do is put him in a leotard.
****ing ***** you ain't got nothing not even fame,
the jewels on my chain are bigger then blocks on the tetris game.
We all know you stupid as ****,
Your last name ain't taylor and your first sure ain't chuck.
Chuck Taylor sounds like the name of teacher,
or a who's on oz who got ****ed by beacher.
Yea, I'm gonna stop right now before I make you cry,
here's a kleenex get those tears out of yoru eye.

i woud attack u but a 50 cent supporter aint worth it lets be honest. win a battle on gold mic then et back to me all of u ppl.

theman080
09-26-05, 03:24 PM
I wasn't asking your for a verse I could use you ******, I was makin fun of you becuz everytime I said sumtin you made a verse that you bolded against me on sum gay ish. Good look at bitin 300 Bars too....

empty clipz
09-26-05, 03:31 PM
Lolololol...thiz Puzzy Iz A Trip!!!

Yo 080 Let'z Set Up A Vs Thread And Roast These Foolz Once And For All!!!

It Really Don't Matter Me Though...scotish Azz Wipe Iz Way Outta Our League!!!

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 12:56 PM
Beef wit Dip Stick goes nowhere, he's not repsected by anyone here, he carried on like a bytch and rushed into beef like fat men at buffets. He'll probably be pissed a dropped this and his chronie Irish Snyper will get on ur dyck for taken shots at his boy. So dead it for you waste more verses on him cuz it will amount to nothin, I wasted one verse on him and two lines on the snyper and they deserved neither...

-080

080 U Still Mad, That Ur Chump Ass Got Beat/
Get The Fuk Outta Tha Kitchen, If U Can't Handle The Heat/
I Ain't Hannibal, But This A Slaughter Of Some Lambs/
U'll Never Realise Your Dream, Of Being The Daughter Of Cam/
U Claim U A Gangsta But What Set You Rep?/

I Put U In The Shadow, Like Nas Does 2 AZ/
This Another Ether Session But Your The B1tch Made Version Of Jay-Z/
U Ain't No H 2 Tha Izzo But Your G To The A Y/
Sit Dwn & Shut Your Mouth ******, If U Don't Wanna Die/

empty clipz
09-27-05, 01:37 PM
seriously, please quit wit ya elementary entree'z!!!

one line sumz it up!!...need i say more!?!

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 01:40 PM
seriously, please quit wit ya elementary entree'z!!!

one line sumz it up!!...need i say more!?!

Like Ur Names Say, The Clipz R Empty So Your Opinion Holds No Weight!

empty clipz
09-27-05, 01:45 PM
mutha fukka, tha name describez what i do best...i empty clipz...reload...empty em again b!tch!!...if it'sz that hard to understand, take yo stupid azz back to class!!!

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 02:00 PM
mutha fukka, tha name describez what i do best...i empty clipz...reload...empty em again b!tch!!...if it'sz that hard to understand, take yo stupid azz back to class!!!

U Mad? :laugh: (http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/3658/camronumad0kp.gif)

empty clipz
09-27-05, 02:14 PM
naw, not mad, just gettin my point across!!...go peep that droppin names thread for new reply!!!

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 02:15 PM
naw, not mad, just gettin my point across!!...go peep that droppin names thread for new reply!!!

New Reply?

Your Sh1t Be Boring!

empty clipz
09-27-05, 02:23 PM
lolololololol

yo sh!t suckz!!

lolol

Irish-dipstick
09-27-05, 02:28 PM
I wasn't asking your for a verse I could use you ******, I was makin fun of you becuz everytime I said sumtin you made a verse that you bolded against me on sum gay ish. Good look at bitin 300 Bars too....

ah u can't say sh!t i've beat u before in the 2 line diss cypher i woop u boy don't even comment u G-unit kniga turtle.

empty clipz- young buck.
the man- tony yayo.
lyrical content- 50 cent.
G-unitbulletproof- loyld banks.

dipstick- the game-300 bars.
synper- nas-ether.

am gonna empty ur clipz and kill the man, lyrical content just GO,
alwayz acting b!tches and getting played like tric's,
mad at me cause i took out ur FLOW/
g-unit is simply not bullet proof sry man this aint 300 bars can't be BIT,
u all busters fak ass gangstas all put together,
the man awto shut his mouth before he get HIT-PISSED-THEN FLIPPED/

empty clipz
09-27-05, 02:30 PM
oh my god, just when i thought you couldn't get any worse...you go and surprise me!!

stop it duuuuuddddeeee!!!

Irish-dipstick
09-27-05, 02:31 PM
seriously, please quit wit ya elementary entree'z!!!

one line sumz it up!!...need i say more!?!

i have to ask r u black cause u would need to be or r u just play acting.
plz b!tcha.

Irish-dipstick
09-27-05, 02:33 PM
gone plz rhyme a minute.

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 02:38 PM
lolololololol

yo sh!t suckz!!

lolol

Suckz?

Stop Talking About U Sucking Your Father!

empty clipz
09-27-05, 02:39 PM
you're pitiful/
aren't you tired of bein ridiculed?!/
i wish i was there so i could riddle~lil misslez~thru~you gettin rid of you!!/
stop thinkin you game/
you're a white boy, didn't wesley teach ya ya'll got no game/
at ya best you're lame!!

hell yeah i'm black/
just like ja i bust back/
push crack, money, get much back/
unlike you, i don't need mommiez allowance/
i getz my own chipz in abundance!!

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 02:42 PM
you're pitiful/
aren't you tired of bein ridiculed?!/
i wish i was there so i could riddle~lil misslez~thru~you gettin rid of you!!/
stop thinkin you game/
you're a white boy, didn't wesley teach ya ya'll got no game/
at ya best you're lame!!

Sit Dwn Farmer Boy! :laugh:

empty clipz
09-27-05, 02:45 PM
you must get off on me replyin to yo wack azz...if i wasn't bored i'd be done wit thiz...but you amuse me...you're sohh fukin sorry, i feel sorry for ya...since no one else givez 2 fukz about ya!!

Irish-dipstick
09-27-05, 02:50 PM
you're pitiful/
aren't you tired of bein ridiculed?!/
i wish i was there so i could riddle~lil misslez~thru~you gettin rid of you!!/
stop thinkin you game/
you're a white boy, didn't wesley teach ya ya'll got no game/
at ya best you're lame!!

hell yeah i'm black/
just like ja i bust back/
push crack, money, get much back/
unlike you, i don't need mommiez allowance/
i getz my own chipz in abundance!!

heel yeah ur BLACK,
but then u act like eminem,
guess who's back/
ha ha u ****** u gonna drag it up and out of the DIRT,
all the girls call u a creep u blow out,
i'd back up from this battle if u don't wanna get HURT,

empty clipz
09-27-05, 02:52 PM
thankz for sayin i act like em, i know my flow iz ill!!

thought you were dissin but it backfired on yo azz...please man, thiz iz gettin stupid...you need major work!!...since you like nas sohh much, go listen to illmatic and learn how to spit!!!

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 03:14 PM
thankz for sayin i act like em, i know my flow iz ill!!

Eminem's Flow Is Wack!

When He Was The Original Slim Shady He Was Good!

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 03:15 PM
you're pitiful/
aren't you tired of bein ridiculed?!/
i wish i was there so i could riddle~lil misslez~thru~you gettin rid of you!!/
stop thinkin you game/
you're a white boy, didn't wesley teach ya ya'll got no game/
at ya best you're lame!!

hell yeah i'm black/
just like ja i bust back/
push crack, money, get much back/
unlike you, i don't need mommiez allowance/
i getz my own chipz in abundance!!

When Did U Get Your Degree From The University Of Wackness? :laugh:

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 03:16 PM
hell yeah i'm black/
just like ja i bust back/
push crack, money, get much back/
unlike you, i don't need mommiez allowance/
i getz my own chipz in abundance!!

Am Hot, Like Crack On A New York City Block/
Talking Like U On Some Gangsta Sh1t, But For 50 Cent U Would Suck A Cock/

empty clipz
09-27-05, 03:24 PM
****snorez****

Irish Snyper
09-27-05, 03:27 PM
****snorez****

Did U Fall Asleep Again Cleaning Out Your Mothers Vagina?

She Did Ask For The Tubbleweed 2 Be Cleared By The End Of The Day! :laugh:

theman080
09-27-05, 03:32 PM
The book on you two will be closed shortly, check ur pms Empty

empty clipz
09-27-05, 03:41 PM
done dunny!!...yo 080, yo drop on street recipez waz fire...i see you stretchin ya range...you should do more gully rapz, you pulled it off!!

Irish Snyper
09-28-05, 03:58 PM
The book on you two will be closed shortly, check ur pms Empty

My Private Message Inbox Is Empty! :yes:

Go Suck On Empty's Cock!

Irish-dipstick
09-28-05, 04:03 PM
thankz for sayin i act like em, i know my flow iz ill!!

thought you were dissin but it backfired on yo azz...please man, thiz iz gettin stupid...you need major work!!...since you like nas sohh much, go listen to illmatic and learn how to spit!!!

i didn't say u was ill not every black wanna be emcee is good u need to get a grip.

empty clipz
09-28-05, 04:06 PM
you 2 fukz go check out the thread entitled for you bitc#ez!!!

spam that sh!t up!!

Irish Snyper
09-28-05, 04:28 PM
you 2 fukz go check out the thread entitled for you bitc#ez!!!

spam that sh!t up!!

:headphone