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Xplicit Lyric™
01-17-04, 11:36 AM
Yes I know
This pain is all too familiar
unlike the face in the mirror
before me, with her glassy eyes
she has cried her heart out once again
for him

she knows

because he doesn’t see what she sees
he doesn’t care
he’s never home
how pathetic is she; so young, pretty faced
gorgeous smile and golden charm
with no one to keep her company
no one to wipe the tears away
he won’t call tonight
and she knows why

she knows

pretends with all of her strength not to
or not to care
he lies about loving her
he won’t prove it, his words have come
undone
he hurts her so badly
for she knows no other love
but a twisted and damaged one
he has crippled her faith
in the possibility of love without pain

oh, indeed, she knows

that he will never be
the man that he promises to be
for at this very moment as she
pours her heart out into her sleeve
he just might be pouring something of his own
into another
just the thought of it is enough
to make the gift of life seem
more like a curse

she knows....yes, she knows
he doesn’t love her she knows
the mirror breaks at the force of her blows
he doesn’t love me

yes, I know

TOXIQ MC
05-08-04, 06:51 PM
WOW, this is amazing, u seriously have talent for poetry, keep it up!

SexyNthaCity
05-19-04, 02:47 PM
This poem touched my heart. Unfortunately, I've come to know a similar feeling very well.

CottonCandie
05-20-04, 06:32 PM
You no doubt have talent..Its good we ppl can just sit and come up with a piece of poetry...words on a paper...its even better when the words touch others..and when these mere words suddenly has life...and becomes reality ...Keeping writing..You got mad skills..I love reading poetry that I can relate to and feel...This one really touched my heart..I've definitely been there...

much luv... :)

Spittknowledge
05-20-04, 06:57 PM
nice write

Xplicit Lyric™
05-22-04, 06:39 PM
Thank you, everyone.


~1

TOXIQ MC
05-29-04, 06:23 AM
Holla!!!!

skeptikal
06-16-04, 05:11 PM
damn that was very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i see you still got skillz
:thumbsup: you hot

slave2aplaya
07-27-04, 04:58 PM
uppin ^
real words
real feeling
real poetry

ovb81
07-28-04, 09:29 PM
there is nuttin to say, that was a great ride

Xplicit Lyric™
07-29-04, 09:20 AM
Thank you :D


~1

Absolut da poet
10-10-06, 02:46 AM
Yes I know
This pain is all too familiar
unlike the face in the mirror
before me, with her glassy eyes
she has cried her heart out once again
for him
she knows
because he doesn’t see what she sees
he doesn’t care
he’s never home
how pathetic is she; so young, pretty faced
gorgeous smile and golden charm
with no one to keep her company
no one to wipe the tears away
he won’t call tonight
and she knows why
she knows
pretends with all of her strength not to
or not to care
he lies about loving her
he won’t prove it, his words have come
undone
he hurts her so badly
for she knows no other love
but a twisted and damaged one
he has crippled her faith
in the possibility of love without pain
oh, indeed, she knows
that he will never be
the man that he promises to be
for at this very moment as she
pours her heart out into her sleeve
he just might be pouring something of his own
into another
just the thought of it is enough
to make the gift of life seem
more like a curse
she knows....yes, she knows
he doesn’t love her she knows
the mirror breaks at the force of her blows
he doesn’t love me
yes, I know

I just wanted to take the time to UP one of my favorite poems and writers on this site..

along with Rukus and a couple other people I'm feelin ya'll..

Absolut da poet
10-10-06, 02:51 AM
I always felt that if my poem "Absolut" had a prelude to what the female was feelin it would be THIS ^^ poem

sexydeltagirl
10-10-06, 02:53 AM
wow, this is very dope....I had to fight back tears for a second on some parts....

Very dope indeed...

Marie 03
10-10-06, 03:09 AM
an amazing poem, thanks for upping this

ziax215
10-10-06, 06:50 AM
i'm loving this poem
i feel like you've been inside my head
i can't even pick a favorite line cause the whole thing is equally thorough
thanx absolut for uppin this so we could read it again