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LovelyShawty
06-15-03, 01:32 AM
I miss you
Even though I neva seen ya face
I kiss you
No I haven't-- but I just cant wait
I love you
Though I dont even --know your name
Will take care of you
Yo I swear I never felt this way

Can't believe I'll be mommy
Only got one month behind me
But I got eight more to go
Eight months waiting for this baby to grow
Inside of me
So I can see
What a part of me
Is like
Starting a family to raise kids right
I'm so hype, let me slow down or I just might
Pass out
Cant wait for you to come head first, ass out
Me and daddy will do our best
To keep you well dressed
Help you do well on tests
But most of all you'll know you've been blessed
With two parents that love eachother and you none less
Let me stop and take a breath
I'm getting years ahead of myself
If only this feeling could be felt by everyone else
If so there would be no dark nights,there would be no wars
Just dark candle lights and reproducing trynna bust yours
**** whores
Who have the audacity to give their baby up
Lady what?
Who are you to take someone's life?
Another lame excuse "life aint right"
Well you should have though that before you opened ya legs that night

My man
To my right is where he stands
When I fall he lifts me with his bare hands
He understands
All my theories regarding this world
And he plans on making me his wife, hes supporting this girl
What a marvelous father he will be
He said "I owe a child the life my father never gave to me"
"And if I don't
it defeats the purpose of finding a women of your essence"
"So I won't, ignore the spirits and its blessins"

I'm not grown, but I can step to the plate
Not on my own, my man will help fix the mistakes
The last time I failed using the Scientific Method
Now I'm wondering if your a girl or a boy (a boy I'm guessin)
So no more fighting tricks
And no more Henny sips
Used to be an alcoholic but for you I quit this
The mommy and baby bond is something thats real
Its so true, you not here yet but I can just feel
Your tear on my finger when you fall of your bike
I can feel you in our bed if you have bad dreams at night
I'll let you know now, we love you from the bottom of our hearts
We'll be good parents and were ready to start.

I'm so happy

Restless
06-16-03, 05:16 PM
Originally posted by LovelyShawty
I miss you
Even though I neva seen ya face
I kiss you
No I haven't-- but I just cant wait
I love you
Though I dont even --know your name
Will take care of you
Yo I swear I never felt this way

Can't believe I'll be mommy
Only got one month behind me
But I got eight more to go
Eight months waiting for this baby to grow
Inside of me
So I can see
What a part of me
Is like
Starting a family to raise kids right
I'm so hype, let me slow down or I just might
Pass out
Cant wait for you to come head first, ass out
Me and daddy will do our best
To keep you well dressed
Help you do well on tests
But most of all you'll know you've been blessed
With two parents that love eachother and you none less
Let me stop and take a breath
I'm getting years ahead of myself
If only this feeling could be felt by everyone else
If so there would be no dark nights,there would be no wars
Just dark candle lights and reproducing trynna bust yours
**** whores
Who have the audacity to give their baby up
Lady what?
Who are you to take someone's life?
Another lame excuse "life aint right"
Well you should have though that before you opened ya legs that night

My man
To my right is where he stands
When I fall he lifts me with his bare hands
He understands
All my theories regarding this world
And he plans on making me his wife, hes supporting this girl
What a marvelous father he will be
He said "I owe a child the life my father never gave to me"
"And if I don't
it defeats the purpose of finding a women of your essence"
"So I won't, ignore the spirits and its blessins"

I'm not grown, but I can step to the plate
Not on my own, my man will help fix the mistakes
The last time I failed using the Scientific Method
Now I'm wondering if your a girl or a boy (a boy I'm guessin)
So no more fighting tricks
And no more Henny sips
Used to be an alcoholic but for you I quit this
The mommy and baby bond is something thats real
Its so true, you not here yet but I can just feel
Your tear on my finger when you fall of your bike
I can feel you in our bed if you have bad dreams at night
I'll let you know now, we love you from the bottom of our hearts
We'll be good parents and were ready to start.

I'm so happy


good one ma, peep my new one

RUKUS
06-16-03, 10:44 PM
Originally posted by LovelyShawty
I miss you
Even though I neva seen ya face
I kiss you
No I haven't-- but I just cant wait
I love you
Though I dont even --know your name
Will take care of you
Yo I swear I never felt this way

Can't believe I'll be mommy
Only got one month behind me
But I got eight more to go
Eight months waiting for this baby to grow
Inside of me
So I can see
What a part of me
Is like
Starting a family to raise kids right
I'm so hype, let me slow down or I just might
Pass out
Cant wait for you to come head first, ass out
Me and daddy will do our best
To keep you well dressed
Help you do well on tests
But most of all you'll know you've been blessed
With two parents that love eachother and you none less
Let me stop and take a breath
I'm getting years ahead of myself
If only this feeling could be felt by everyone else
If so there would be no dark nights,there would be no wars
Just dark candle lights and reproducing trynna bust yours
**** whores
Who have the audacity to give their baby up
Lady what?
Who are you to take someone's life?
Another lame excuse "life aint right"
Well you should have though that before you opened ya legs that night

My man
To my right is where he stands
When I fall he lifts me with his bare hands
He understands
All my theories regarding this world
And he plans on making me his wife, hes supporting this girl
What a marvelous father he will be
He said "I owe a child the life my father never gave to me"
"And if I don't
it defeats the purpose of finding a women of your essence"
"So I won't, ignore the spirits and its blessins"

I'm not grown, but I can step to the plate
Not on my own, my man will help fix the mistakes
The last time I failed using the Scientific Method
Now I'm wondering if your a girl or a boy (a boy I'm guessin)
So no more fighting tricks
And no more Henny sips
Used to be an alcoholic but for you I quit this
The mommy and baby bond is something thats real
Its so true, you not here yet but I can just feel
Your tear on my finger when you fall of your bike
I can feel you in our bed if you have bad dreams at night
I'll let you know now, we love you from the bottom of our hearts
We'll be good parents and were ready to start.

I'm so happy

This was very very nice....with a little tweaking (I don't know if you're interested in that or if you just write and leave your work alone) you can make this into a great song...

The moment I started reading this I thought this was something that India Arie might sing...

Nice....

LastTemptation
06-16-03, 11:05 PM
Great poem...I enjoyed reading it.

congrats on ya baby:)

Marie 03
06-14-07, 03:10 AM
i've been away a long time and a friend of mine got me back into poetry, so i started back at the end and am working my way to the front.

this definitely needs to be bumped up

ceeboski
07-11-07, 05:06 AM
great poem!!