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W.I.Z.E.
05-24-03, 09:46 AM
Rock at the drop of a dime, stopped by the cock of my glock to your spine,
Mockin’ these mimes, locked and confined, apocalyptical times.
I formulate my passages under the darkness of light,
While others postulate their epithets and blunder with might.
Locked in your sight, the best flow – er Sohh Knows on this site,
Holding your spite while I’m steady just controlling the mic.
Holdin a mic, 80% of yall aint EVER spat live,
Out on the ave, in a cipher or simply just to survive,
For lack of drive I stopped the vocals on a track in nine five,
Trappin your minds, lackin the shine I stay deep rooted online.
So when I drop a written, know that I kick hot when I’m spitting,
Not to be bitten, by you cats with strictly optic renditions,
Too all faggots that *****in, “he just dissed my textcee traditions”
I’m saying listen that just aint me so don’t get hostile and twisted.


Listen,
to grow your craft understand the arts of the culture,
Nurture the truth, writings cool but alone it will falter,
So resurrect, study elements to resonate stronger,
Or don’t think of being hip-hop any longer you gonner.


Jockin position, you lackluster fags are flooding the market,
Missing the part, this is an art with a culture that sparks it.
When I was starving, for an outlet it was it(hip hop) that responded,
And some of yall been steady eatin so your hunger is tarnished.
And to be honest, the horizon’s vying climates for vultures,
Some of yall like the music but dawg I’M IN LOVE with the culture,
“Yo did you hear?” from Sugar Hill I been in love w/ the culture,
Run-DMC, Treacherous Three rockin live for the culture.
Rock Steady Crew, Red Alert man that’s how I got focused,
The golden age birthin this piece stop in awe and disownment,
Vogue and condolence, holdin’ moments low behold wut’s been stolen,
Skill and persistence, deaths the omen but I bless wut I’m holdin’,
Mic’s – I did, past tense, present wondering if,
The next generation will bring a soul back to this ****.


So Listen,
to grow your craft know the arts of the culture,
Nurture the truth, writings cool but alone it will falter,
So resurrect, study elements to resonate stronger,
Or don’t think of being hip-hop - any longer.



In the mirror, I see the cause of the collapse that I’m speakin’,
Preachin’ to weaklings but this evening saw a glimpse of a demon,
I mean in 95 I lost the soul, no longer wuz breathin’,
I dropped the mic, and didn’t write after Hip hop gave me life,
And then I walked around trite, thinkin’ wut it be like.
Fightin’ the spite, if done right I could’ve lit up the night,
Stars only lead a path, if self reflection glistens the plight.
Vision and might showed the victim and the killer in sight,
Wasn’t just who I pointed at but myself in the light.


They gave it life, and now must witness the damn death of this culture.
They barely got paid a dime yet they did it for fun,
And in response, the music thrived and the message wuz sung,
Threw all the struggles, it survived but wut’s it become?
I realize my despise is also wut’ I’ve become.

..Crook..
05-24-03, 12:00 PM
Meh.

Vise
05-24-03, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by W.I.Z.E.
Rock at the drop of a dime, stopped by the cock of my glock to your spine,
Mockin’ these mimes, locked and confined, apocalyptical times.
I formulate my passages under the darkness of light,
While others postulate their epithets and blunder with might.
Locked in your sight, the best flow – er Sohh Knows on this site,
Holding your spite while I’m steady just controlling the mic.
Holdin a mic, 80% of yall aint EVER spat live,
Out on the ave, in a cipher or simply just to survive,
For lack of drive I stopped the vocals on a track in nine five,
Trappin your minds, lackin the shine I stay deep rooted online.
So when I drop a written, know that I kick hot when I’m spitting,
Not to be bitten, by you cats with strictly optic renditions,
Too all faggots that *****in, “he just dissed my textcee traditions”
I’m saying listen that just aint me so don’t get hostile and twisted.


Listen,
to grow your craft understand the arts of the culture,
Nurture the truth, writings cool but alone it will falter,
So resurrect, study elements to resonate stronger,
Or don’t think of being hip-hop any longer you gonner.


Jockin position, you lackluster fags are flooding the market,
Missing the part, this is an art with a culture that sparks it.
When I was starving, for an outlet it was it(hip hop) that responded,
And some of yall been steady eatin so your hunger is tarnished.
And to be honest, the horizon’s vying climates for vultures,
Some of yall like the music but dawg I’M IN LOVE with the culture,
“Yo did you hear?” from Sugar Hill I been in love w/ the culture,
Run-DMC, Treacherous Three rockin live for the culture.
Rock Steady Crew, Red Alert man that’s how I got focused,
The golden age birthin this piece stop in awe and disownment,
Vogue and condolence, holdin’ moments low behold wut’s been stolen,
Skill and persistence, deaths the omen but I bless wut I’m holdin’,
Mic’s – I did, past tense, present wondering if,
The next generation will bring a soul back to this ****.


So Listen,
to grow your craft know the arts of the culture,
Nurture the truth, writings cool but alone it will falter,
So resurrect, study elements to resonate stronger,
Or don’t think of being hip-hop - any longer.



In the mirror, I see the cause of the collapse that I’m speakin’,
Preachin’ to weaklings but this evening saw a glimpse of a demon,
I mean in 95 I lost the soul, no longer wuz breathin’,
I dropped the mic, and didn’t write after Hip hop gave me life,
And then I walked around trite, thinkin’ wut it be like.
Fightin’ the spite, if done right I could’ve lit up the night,
Stars only lead a path, if self reflection glistens the plight.
Vision and might showed the victim and the killer in sight,
Wasn’t just who I pointed at but myself in the light.


They gave it life, and now must witness the damn death of this culture.
They barely got paid a dime yet they did it for fun,
And in response, the music thrived and the message wuz sung,
Threw all the struggles, it survived but wut’s it become?
I realize my despise is also wut’ I’ve become.



hmmm......this was a solid drop kid....i'd actually like to hear this in a audio format cuz it all seemed to flow very well text wise...the imagery was crisp and vivid, i like how u explained in detail in ur last verse about loving the art to almost abandoning it all back in 95...

had some multis in this.....but then again a verse doesn't have to be multied out in order for it to come out nice......vocab was good.....alos caught a few lil witty lines...


overall 8.5/10 solid piece....keep droppin some more **** like this, i'll be sure to check for it in the future..


ps return the favor when u get the chance http://www.sohh.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&postid=3956950#post3956950......pz

spanky freedom
05-25-03, 05:50 AM
the way u ended this was crazy powerful
hmm.. getting a different perspective of this piece from what i read this morning

nice drop
and i picked up ur flow and it was dope

on some nsjz

peace

W.I.Z.E.
05-27-03, 08:56 AM
Thanks for the feedback...

Spitt3000
05-28-03, 05:59 PM
gangsta.

Random iLL
05-28-03, 06:03 PM
Originally posted by Spitt3000
gangsta.

Word. This is straight truth WIZE... nice isht...

Two Thumbs up.

W.I.Z.E.
06-02-03, 09:33 AM
Good lookin' Random...

Envizion
06-02-03, 06:05 PM
yo, this joint definitely hits a main vein of underground artists. what did happen to the culture? most conceptual tracks in the mainstream don't stay conceptual for very long, but this joint stays focused on the main point.

"So when I drop a written, know that I kick hot when I’m spitting,
Not to be bitten, by you cats with strictly optic renditions,
Too all faggots that *****in, “he just dissed my textcee traditions”
I’m saying listen that just aint me so don’t get hostile and twisted."

textcee traditions...you're right, most cats ain't spit live...I ain't never heard anyone say textcee...nice coined phrase...dope lines here

"Missing the part, this is an art with a culture that sparks it.
When I was starving, for an outlet it was it(hip hop) that responded,
And some of yall been steady eatin so your hunger is tarnished."

tight lines

"Mic’s – I did, past tense, present wondering if,
The next generation will bring a soul back to this ****."

I think there are a lot of us wonderin the same thing

overall, dope. flow reminds me of talib kweli a bit

envi

W.I.Z.E.
06-09-03, 10:58 AM
thanks yall...

Eric Ervin
06-10-03, 05:21 PM
"Mockin’ these mimes, locked and confined, apocalyptical times"-W.I.Z.E.

Dayumn son...you didn't have to hurt em' like that...that line was beyond thought provoking...like a smoking gun aimed at the face those that don't know...I was really feeling the imagery of the piece...nice word working and chemistry...I'll be looking for the audio (FORTHCOMING?!?)...check out the new ish from me...I've been pretty busy these last couple of days...the thoughts won't leave me alone...

W.I.Z.E.
06-23-03, 09:01 AM
Thanks..

ONE_MIC_ETERNAL
06-23-03, 12:34 PM
Missing the part, this is an art with a culture that sparks it.
When I was starving, for an outlet it was it(hip hop) that responded,
And some of yall been steady eatin so your hunger is tarnished.
And to be honest, the horizon’s vying climates for vultures,
Some of yall like the music but dawg I’M IN LOVE with the culture,

Yo W.I.Z.E, this is a dope piece,definatly got me realizing,, cuz hip-hop isnt about fame, hip-hop is a undying feeling its almost a religious way of life,,it aint bout liking what you do, its about having heart and pride in what you do.

Stay Up kickin the knowledge

ONE-

W.I.Z.E.
09-05-06, 05:46 PM
look wut I foundededed!?

Propaganda
09-05-06, 06:59 PM
this was dope for 2003.

but it SUCKS now.

GET WITH THE TIMES!

haha...

eternal reflection
09-14-06, 10:29 AM
"Locked in your sight, the best flow – er Sohh Knows on this site"


..preciate the love bruh. :D

Midnite
09-14-06, 09:56 PM
cant imagine how i missed this some 3years ago....mustve been incognegro at the time

strong shyt, ever get to recordin it?

W.I.Z.E.
07-13-07, 12:21 PM
cant imagine how i missed this some 3years ago....mustve been incognegro at the time
strong shyt, ever get to recordin it?


not really....