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KnowledgeIsQueen
05-12-09, 12:14 AM
I admire my strength
And fear my stubbornness
Personality traits
Untamed become riotous
Not giving a f*ck
Everything around me
Reverts to nothingness

A shadow
Over my shoulder sits
Ready to ignite
Emerged with my shadow
Darkness engulfs the light

Tired..

Voids the desire
To fight
Am I giving up
Or is this my life?

An empty well
Unable to cry

Internal demise

Metamorphosed emotions
Returned to my
Conscious mind


© LaToya S. C.

Iphoneman
05-12-09, 01:40 AM
this is nice keep doing your thing

eternal reflection
05-25-09, 08:24 AM
this is hot, i remember when i used to write like this (the format), when i was first finding my style, experiment with all kind of rhyme schemes, your work will be better for it !